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Old journal entries (cont.)

Posted Sep 20th, 2007 at 02:21 PM by chacha_Ghalib (Ghubaar-e-dil)

(origionally posted on Mar. 22, 2007)

i spent a full 5 minutes writing a perfect gudbye post for PM system and Jouranls in order to open a new thread... bari door door ki koriaN laya tha... but before anyone had any chance of responding to it zaalim samaaj (shikraa unkal) got in the way and locked it

As a result i m going to post it here...
shikraa unkal

so here goes...

PM system aur journals ka wisaal

PM...

chacha_Ghalib

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Old journal entries (cont.)

Posted Sep 20th, 2007 at 02:19 PM by chacha_Ghalib (Ghubaar-e-dil)
Updated Nov 29th, 2007 at 01:44 PM by chacha_Ghalib

(origionally posted on Mar. 20, 2007)

kaash tu kary kabhi ulfat ka izhaar
zindagi meri main bhi aa jaai bahaar

kaash teray hontoN say bhi kabhi niklaiN dua'eiN
mahak uThaiN meri rahooN main har su gulzaar

kaash tu khayaaloN maiN hi day mujh ko dilaasa
dil ki bai-chaini ko aai kuch to qaraar

kaash kabhi raghbat say pukaary mujh ko
dasht-e-dil main paR jaai thanddi phuwaar

kaash kabhi sang chalnay ki kary

...

chacha_Ghalib

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Old journal entries (cont.)

Posted Sep 20th, 2007 at 02:18 PM by chacha_Ghalib (Ghubaar-e-dil)
Updated Nov 29th, 2007 at 01:45 PM by chacha_Ghalib

(origionally posted on Mar. 14, 2007)

bunna jis ka khawab ajdaad nain wo tha gulistaan koi aur
iss baagh kay baasi koi aur hain tou nighebaaN koi aur

kal mehfil-e-sukhan main sub ush ush kartay reh gai
ghazal hamaari iss qabil kahan, ho ga deewaN koi aur

ishq kay khail main ye ajab dastoor hai
mehnat kary koi, to ho kamraaN koi aur

bohat mushkil hai insaan kay liye insaaf ka hasool
naai zameen darkaar hai, tou

...

chacha_Ghalib

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Old journal entries

Posted Sep 20th, 2007 at 02:16 PM by chacha_Ghalib (Ghubaar-e-dil)
Updated Nov 29th, 2007 at 01:44 PM by chacha_Ghalib

(origionally posted on Mar. 14, 2007)

well just a couple of days ago, i had the urge to write some urdu poetry. I've always wanted to write poetry but never gave it much thought, but yesterday i wrote my first qata'a and my first ghazal. So i thought, i should use my journal as a collection of all the poetry i write.

so here goes...

My first ever qata'a:

hijar ki dhoop main tera khayal meray saath raha
bhala saya bhi kabhi aadmi

...

chacha_Ghalib

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testing

Posted Sep 17th, 2007 at 11:52 AM by chacha_Ghalib (Ghubaar-e-dil)

dunno if its worth writing anything here caz the old journal was deleted along with all the enteries. not sure if this one will last. Thankfully i saved most of my poetry in alldost and i really hope thats not deleted as well or that'll piss me off

if its still there, i've got some copying and pasting to do. how inconvenient

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