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chale jain ge hum...

Posted Aug 8th, 2008 at 08:36 AM by Flooder-e-Azam

chale jain ge hum tujhe khabar honay say pehlay
chahe naam de be-wafai ka ya isay meri ber-rukhi tu kehle
na rukein ge ab yeh kadam awaz dene say bhi ab magar
jahan zakhm mile hum ko itnay wahan ik ghame-e-judai tu bhi seh le
la-pata ho jain ge hum , mit jae ga naam hamara
andaz-e-bayan hai hamara,parh kar chahe koi isay shairi kehle
chale jain ge hum tujhe khabar honay say pehlay
chahe naan de be-wafai ka ya isay meri ber-rukhi tu kehle

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	Lab pay athee hai duah ban k tamNaa mere :cb:
	Posted Aug 8th, 2008 at 12:10 PM by Kevyan

	teena saani said uth,tay hoyee QadmooN main zanjeerr see per jaate ahsaas-e-nidamat say dehleez pighaal jateee ik baar muhabbat say jo daytay sadaaa hum ko anyways nice poetry : )
	Posted Aug 8th, 2008 at 12:26 PM by P_G

	Itni udas batain
	Posted Aug 8th, 2008 at 12:36 PM by Elegance

	naaawww flooder-e-azam aap naa jain naa plzzz
	Posted Aug 8th, 2008 at 01:11 PM by kali billi

	Kevyan ghazal hai hakeekat nahi PG shukriya Elegance:jee yeh tab tehreer kee the jab hum kaid main the..ab choonkeh azad ho gae hain hum to ab dobara aisi udas batein nahi karein ge Billi kis ne kaha hum jaa rahe hain?
	Posted Aug 8th, 2008 at 04:01 PM by Flooder-e-Azam

	app ko ik mashwera hay muft ka hee samjh lain ...baqee mannana app nay hay nahi is ka mujhay pata hay smilies ka intikhaab bhi insaan k zehniyat or zoq ko zaahir kerta hay is ley ahtyaat kia kerain ..
	Posted Aug 9th, 2008 at 04:17 AM by P_G

	Quote: Originally Posted by FEA Kevyan ghazal hai hakeekat nahi Kash waisa hota
	Posted Aug 11th, 2008 at 01:31 PM by goodnews

	Museebati larki hum ne yeh smilie bohat soch samajh kar istemaal ke hai.isi smilie say hamaray badshah honay ka yakeen hota hai kuch logon ko Khushkhabri magar afsoos aisa nahi hai
	Posted Aug 11th, 2008 at 03:05 PM by Flooder-e-Azam