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After A Long Tym...

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After A Long Tym...

Posted Mar 23rd, 2009 at 11:27 PM by -=Janu Jia=-

Writing A Short Story..... in a form of poem u can say or ghazal i udno just my feelings

Raat ke andhere me suno us awaz ko
Ata he ander se mehsoos kero us ehsaas ko

Andhere me ghoonjh he,kisi k dard ki
Dil ki dharkanein yaad dilati hein kisi ki

Wo masoom chehra,woh rangeen ankhein
Us muskurate chehre i,muskurati batein

woh ankhon ki sharat,kareeb ane ka ehsas
Sab kuch sahi tha,magar alag hue hum
ghalti pe the,lekin pyar na hua kam

meri zindagi guzar rahi he bin tere ab bhi
Andhere me goonjh sunai deti he kisi ke dard ki.......

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	is it urs or copy paste
	Posted Mar 24th, 2009 at 06:37 AM by Lafanter

	I haven't read the story because I have a really hard time reading urdu in Roman characters. But, you look GORGEOUS in your profile picture, and I don't normally throw around compliments like that.
	Posted Mar 24th, 2009 at 07:58 AM by aahmed

	Set haiy!
	Posted Mar 24th, 2009 at 09:44 AM by Cheegum

	LAFANTER its written by me thnx aahmed cheegum ap zinda hein jani kese ho :P n thnx
	Posted Mar 24th, 2009 at 12:32 PM by -=Janu Jia=-

	mein ney blog parhney say pehley socha tha .... k jhootey moun hee sahee . tareef kerdoon ga ..... lekin sorry .... itnee char aney kee shairi per jhootee tareef bhi nahin ker sakta
	Posted Mar 24th, 2009 at 01:44 PM by cadet018