A poem by me and a reply by saqi
Posted Oct 13th, 2008 at 04:53 PM by Princess Fiona
So yeah i was bored so me and friend thought to write each other a poem.. I like my part better 
Saqi's part is just a simple kidish reply 
*Saqi thinks vise versa*
My part:
Saqi's reply:
jamnam daina chahtha hun
apni zindagi tumhary liya banana chahtha hun
arzo arman bohet sary hain
bas tumhy dukh nahi daina chahtha hun
mary benam zindagi say tumhy bohet sary nam daina chahtha hun
apni weyran ankhon say bohet sa pyar daina chahtha hun
zulam tab ha jab jab tumhy apna pas nahi pata
kon satatha ha apnay pyar ko
yeh tou shayd mera pagal pyar ha
tum say mujy baray mutlab
pyar aor jan kya kaho tou saryy dunya ko agg laga dun
tary pyar ma khud ko mitha daina chahtha hun
kabhi looth k jana na
tumhary manzil sirf mai bana chahtha hun
pyar mujh sy abb bhi tum karty ho aor karo gi
Bas yah batana chahtha hun
P.S... Please excuse the grammer mistakes since we are both pathan
Saqi's part is just a simple kidish reply *Saqi thinks vise versa* My part:
zindagi dayna chahti ti
Ap ki zindagi banna chahti ti
na ti koi aur arizo ya arman
Bas Ap ko khushi dayna chahti ti
Ap ki zindagi banna chahti ti
na ti koi aur arizo ya arman
Bas Ap ko khushi dayna chahti ti
Ap ki us baynam zindagi ko
Ak name dayna chahti ti
Ap ki us wayran ankho ko
zindagi ki roshani dayna chahti ti
Ak name dayna chahti ti
Ap ki us wayran ankho ko
zindagi ki roshani dayna chahti ti
Kio kartay ho ap apnay ap pe yah zulam
kio satatay ho khud ko aur muj ko
Main to bas!
Zindagi ka matlab dayna chahti ti
kio satatay ho khud ko aur muj ko
Main to bas!
Zindagi ka matlab dayna chahti ti
Na ap say koi matlab na koi lalach muj ko
Na ap ki muhabat na ap ki jan chayay muj ko
Ak bar hans lo dil say
Main woh hansi dayna chahti ti
Na ap ki muhabat na ap ki jan chayay muj ko
Ak bar hans lo dil say
Main woh hansi dayna chahti ti
Lot kay ja rahi hon main wapas
Apni manzil apni rastay ki taraf
Koi ap say bohat muhabat kia karti ti
bas yah batana chahti ti..
Apni manzil apni rastay ki taraf
Koi ap say bohat muhabat kia karti ti
bas yah batana chahti ti..
Saqi's reply:
jamnam daina chahtha hun
apni zindagi tumhary liya banana chahtha hun
arzo arman bohet sary hain
bas tumhy dukh nahi daina chahtha hun
mary benam zindagi say tumhy bohet sary nam daina chahtha hun
apni weyran ankhon say bohet sa pyar daina chahtha hun
zulam tab ha jab jab tumhy apna pas nahi pata
kon satatha ha apnay pyar ko
yeh tou shayd mera pagal pyar ha
tum say mujy baray mutlab
pyar aor jan kya kaho tou saryy dunya ko agg laga dun
tary pyar ma khud ko mitha daina chahtha hun
kabhi looth k jana na
tumhary manzil sirf mai bana chahtha hun
pyar mujh sy abb bhi tum karty ho aor karo gi
Bas yah batana chahtha hun
P.S... Please excuse the grammer mistakes since we are both pathan
Total Comments 6
Comments
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i like them both they go well with each other
Posted Oct 13th, 2008 at 04:57 PM by P@GL!
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Great Effort
Posted Oct 13th, 2008 at 05:32 PM by NaMaan
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nice effort :)Posted Oct 14th, 2008 at 10:03 AM by D@rkNgt
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so how old is Saqi..????
:sad:
Posted Oct 20th, 2008 at 05:37 AM by redidentity
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btw.. gr8 effort..Posted Oct 20th, 2008 at 05:39 AM by redidentity
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kis ko likhi yeh poem
i hope by aap u mean is ME
it better b me
Posted Nov 16th, 2008 at 03:42 PM by K337
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