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Jun 8th, 2008, 09:45 PM
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one of me tukbandiYaan
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Jun 8th, 2008, 10:18 PM
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Very nice yaar! Enjoyed listening : )
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Jun 8th, 2008, 10:18 PM
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can you write this out, please and post here?
best,
Dushwari
Difference between God and humankind: God can say, 'be', and it becomes, but humankind has to act on what it says.
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Jun 8th, 2008, 10:22 PM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Dushwari
can you write this out, please and post here?
best,
Dushwari
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Mohaabaat raqs karkay , thaam chuki hai
Jaab Raat kay is phich.lay phayhaar tum
Kissi khillthee kaali say phool bannkar
Mohaabaat ki zubaan mein bhool banker
Mayree bahahoon mein simm.tii parii hoo
Baadaan ki taaal pay shaab baahr humaray
Junnon kay wastay , daryaaa kinnaaraay
Humaray daikaay , saab khawboon shaaahray
Mohaabaat raqs karkay , thaam chuki hai
Aajb eek khawissh , waqt is dil meein mayray
Ek arzoo gungutaahee phir rahee hai
Meiin chahtah hoon tujhay baydaar karkay
Tayaray maahtaay pay phir jhhoomaary sajoon
Tujhay phir say mein ek dhulaan bana.oon
Husun ki chandani phir say naha.oooon
Mereee Jaaan waqqt kaay is bhaytay samnay mein
mujhay , yea khaanay mein kohii aarr naheee
Aj is dil kaa Mujpay kohi udddhar naahiii
Tuj ko paya kay , is duniya mein
zeeest nay mayree joh bee paya haai
wooh tayray Aaaksh ka ek Saya hai
wooh tayray Aaaksh ka ek Saya hai !!!!
( Aliyish)
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Jun 8th, 2008, 10:29 PM
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aliyish,
very nice poem.
best,
Dushwari
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Jun 8th, 2008, 10:31 PM
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Thanks Samad and dushwari .......
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Jun 9th, 2008, 01:50 AM
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nice...... u have a brithish accent 
i like it alot  i was smiling through the shair or ghazal ise jo kaho
Jahan Teri Ye Nazar He
Meri Jaan Mujhe Khabar Hai!!
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Jun 9th, 2008, 02:07 AM
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Moderator Voice Gallery, Video Gallery, Audio Gallery, C&IT Forum
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mujha pehlay he pata tha baak raha ha ... 
Good job lalay 
-- Nauman --
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Jun 9th, 2008, 05:18 AM
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~ PakeeZa ~
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Very nice poem Aliyish:-)
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Hum ney kaantoN ko bhi narmii sey chuhwaa hey aksar
log be-dard heiN PhooloN ko massal detay heiN
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Jun 9th, 2008, 05:23 AM
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buhat khoob Shahji!
chaa gaiy oo...
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Jun 9th, 2008, 12:40 PM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by -=Janu Jia=-
nice...... u have a brithish accent
i like it alot i was smiling through the shair or ghazal ise jo kaho |
Irish  mein is ko nazam kahTah hoon  thanks alot for liking
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Originally Posted by NaMaan
mujha pehlay he pata tha baak raha ha ...
Good job lalay
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haha.......... kia kaRain baakain nahe tu LooGon ki samj nahi athee
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Originally Posted by GuL-e-Tasbeeh
Very nice poem Aliyish:-)
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Thanks Gul ....... agar ap ko pasand ahe tu ache hi hoo Ge....
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Originally Posted by jaadugar
buhat khoob Shahji!
chaa gaiy oo...
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thanks lalay ..... ap ki zaR.ra nawazi hai .... warna banda kis qabil hai
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