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Old Jul 17th, 2006, 03:12 AM   #21 (permalink)  
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Thx Bholay Bisray & Anwar for sharing child hood she'r ..... i'll try to write urdu fonts but telling u honestly its very hard to choose some pic for these ashar, if u get some suitable pic please send to me .... ......

Anwar Bhai this she'r "unhaeen pukaro" always make me sad too as i gave reference of this she'r in our farewell party in college ......

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Uss kay Dushman Hain Buhat Aadami Acha Hoga
Woh Bhi Meri He Tarah Shahar Mein Tanga Hoga

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Old Jul 17th, 2006, 06:07 AM   #22 (permalink)  
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Here is the continution of "yeh doulat bhi lay lo" which was taken from reet's thread "woh kaghiz key kashti " .... hope u'll like it too .........


Kari Dhoop Mein Apne Ghar Se Nikalna
Wo Chidiya Wo Bulbul Wo Thithli Pakadna
Wo Gudiya Ki Shaadi Pe Ladna Jhagadna
Wo Jhoolon Se Girna, Wo Gir Ke Sambhalna
Wo Pithal Ke Challon Ke Pyaare Se Tho'fe
Wo Tuti Hui Chudiyon Ki Nishaani
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Old Jul 17th, 2006, 10:59 PM   #23 (permalink)  
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Here is my work on cool sharing of reet
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Old Jul 18th, 2006, 03:28 AM   #24 (permalink)  
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woh bachpan ke neend tu ab khawab ho gae
kya umr thee k raat hoe aur so gaye







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Old Jul 18th, 2006, 06:07 AM   #25 (permalink)  
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Thx Bholay Bisray & Anwar for sharing child hood she'r ..... i'll try to write urdu fonts but telling u honestly its very hard to choose some pic for these ashar, if u get some suitable pic please send to me .... ......

Anwar Bhai this she'r "unhaeen pukaro" always make me sad too as i gave reference of this she'r in our farewell party in college ......

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Yes i knew that!

hows this one?
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Old Jul 18th, 2006, 06:33 AM   #26 (permalink)  
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yeh dolat bhi lay lo yeh shoshret bhi lay lo

my fav!!!







Taroon sey ziada chamkey, phooloon sey ziada mehkey
sadiyaan hazaroon dekhey, mera dais, mera dais
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Old Jul 18th, 2006, 10:56 PM   #27 (permalink)  
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woh bachpan ke neend tu ab khawab ho gae
kya umr thee k raat hoe aur so gaye

very cool one ...... here is my creation ...........................
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Old Jul 18th, 2006, 10:58 PM   #28 (permalink)  
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Yes i knew that!
hows this one?
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Sooopeeerrr ........ very cool pic and it has increased the beauty of this she'r ........
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Old Jul 19th, 2006, 12:01 AM   #29 (permalink)  
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thnx to all of you for sharing nice poetry & nice pix.........!







Yaadein tau sath rehti hain, bas log aatey jaatey hain......
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Old Jul 19th, 2006, 12:03 AM   #30 (permalink)  
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Here is my work on cool sharing of reet
yun tau hame urdu parni nahi aati hai.......but Spl. thnx to you Sannan for making my sharings more nice & beautiful........!






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Old Jul 20th, 2006, 02:30 AM   #31 (permalink)  
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yun tau hame urdu parni nahi aati hai.......but Spl. thnx to you Sannan for making my sharings more nice & beautiful........!
Oh Really Reet Geee .... next time i'll try to make roman urdu of every post as well .....






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Old Jul 20th, 2006, 02:33 AM   #32 (permalink)  
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Here is another work ........

Kabhi Re't Ke Oonche Tilon Pe Jaana
Gharonde Banana, Banaake Mitaana
Wo Maasoom Chaahat Ki Tasveer Apni
Wo Khwabon Khilono Ki Taabir Jaageer Apni
Na Duniya Ka Gham Tha Na Rishton Ke Bandhan
Bari Khoobsoorat Thi Wo Zindgaani .....
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Old Jul 20th, 2006, 07:07 PM   #33 (permalink)  
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Sannan Jigar...this one is for you.

Mujh Ko Yaqeen Hai Sach Kahti Theen Jo Bhi Ammi Kahti Theen
Jab Mere Bachpan Ke Din They Chaand Main Pariyan Rahti Theen,

Aik Yeh Din Jab Sari Sarken Roothi Roothi Lagti Hain
Aik Woh Din Jab Aao Khelain Sari Galiyan Kahti Theen,

Aik Yeh Din Jab Zahn Main Sari Aiyaari Ki Baten Hain
Aik Woh Din Jab Dil Main Bholi Bhali Baten Rahti Theen,

Aik Yeh Ghar Jis GHar Main Mera Saaz O Samaan Rahta Hai
Aik Woh Ghar Jis Ghar Main Meri Boorhi Naani Rahti Theen.....

by... Jawed Akhtar.







KUCH AUR MANGA MERE MASHRAB MAIN KUFR HAI,

LA APNA HAATH DE MERE DAST E SAWAAL PAR.
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Old Jul 20th, 2006, 10:35 PM   #34 (permalink)  
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Yaar Darwaish maar dalla yaar i was thinking that nice she'r on bachpan has finished but this one is really really marvelous ... i'm missing my bachpan badly ... thx for sharing such a good stuff







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Old Jul 22nd, 2006, 02:10 PM   #35 (permalink)  
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Jigar Sannan...Karam hai...

Darwesh se dosti karoge to aisi hi cheez suune ko milegi.

This one is for you , My Sher....

" Bachpan Ki Har Ek Massomi Tere Liye
Sajde Main Ap Sari Duaen Ter Naam "

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Old Jul 23rd, 2006, 02:59 AM   #36 (permalink)  
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wow what a image. I like it Sonia k liy kha hy kia

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The poetry about Bachpan almost fascinate everyone … I’m trying to gather poetry about bachpan in one thread so please contribute ur ashaa’r about childhood …… here we start ……………


Kash Kah Ruk Jay Yahi Waqat Ka Dhara
Hoti Chali Nah Jay Kaheen Har Baat Puraani






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Old Jul 23rd, 2006, 03:10 AM   #37 (permalink)  
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Koi Mujh ko Mera bharpor srapa lady
Koi mujh ko mera bharpor srapa la dy
Mery bazo, meri ankhin mera chehra lady

Kuch nahi chahy tujh sy ay meri umery rwan
Mera bachpan, mery jugnu, meri guria la dy

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Old Jul 23rd, 2006, 04:18 AM   #38 (permalink)  
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Quote:
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Sannan Jigar...this one is for you.

Mujh Ko Yaqeen Hai Sach Kahti Theen Jo Bhi Ammi Kahti Theen
Jab Mere Bachpan Ke Din They Chaand Main Pariyan Rahti Theen,

Aik Yeh Din Jab Sari Sarken Roothi Roothi Lagti Hain
Aik Woh Din Jab Aao Khelain Sari Galiyan Kahti Theen,

Aik Yeh Din Jab Zahn Main Sari Aiyaari Ki Baten Hain
Aik Woh Din Jab Dil Main Bholi Bhali Baten Rahti Theen,

Aik Yeh Ghar Jis GHar Main Mera Saaz O Samaan Rahta Hai
Aik Woh Ghar Jis Ghar Main Meri Boorhi Naani Rahti Theen.....

by... Jawed Akhtar.
such very nice sharing.........thnx!






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Old Jul 23rd, 2006, 04:19 AM   #39 (permalink)  
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Koi Mujh ko Mera bharpor srapa lady
Koi mujh ko mera bharpor srapa la dy
Mery bazo, meri ankhin mera chehra lady

Kuch nahi chahy tujh sy ay meri umery rwan
Mera bachpan, mery jugnu, meri guria la dy

(by:Noshi Gilani)
nice sharing.....!






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Old Jul 23rd, 2006, 10:39 AM   #40 (permalink)  
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nice sharing.....!
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