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Jul 24th, 2006, 06:48 AM
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~*~ Tanha ~*~
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Originally Posted by goodnews
Koi Mujh ko Mera bharpor srapa lady
Koi mujh ko mera bharpor srapa la dy
Mery bazo, meri ankhin mera chehra lady
(by:Noshi Gilani)
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Welldone Khushkhabri ....... i was just forgetting it ...thx for sharing
Uss kay Dushman Hain Buhat Aadami Acha Hoga
Woh Bhi Meri He Tarah Shahar Mein Tanga Hoga
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Jul 24th, 2006, 06:54 AM
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#42 (permalink)
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~*~ Tanha ~*~
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Originally Posted by darwesh
Jigar Sannan...Karam hai...
Darwesh se dosti karoge to aisi hi cheez suune ko milegi.
This one is for you , My Sher....
" Bachpan Ki Har Ek Massomi Tere Liye
Sajde Main Ap Sari Duaen Ter Naam "
Darwesh.
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Buhat buhat shukarai for such a nice wishes .........
& Wah wah meray yaar Darwesh kia khub yaad dila dia ....... Now this one is for you ........
Barish Main Bjaigay Kachay Aanganoon Key Khusbou'en
Chain Jub Dil ka Churain Yaad Kar Laina Hameen
Dheemay Say Kanptay Naram Lahjay Main Day Tumhain
Koi Zindagi Key Duaeen Yaad Kar Laina Hameen
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Jul 24th, 2006, 11:28 PM
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#43 (permalink)
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Dil pr mat ly
Join Date: Nov 27, 2005 - 2:18 pm
Location: Ham whan hain jhan sy ham ko bhi hmari khabr nahi ati
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Originally Posted by Sannan
Welldone Khushkhabri ....... i was just forgetting it ...thx for sharing
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No prob, Wasy MashaAllah tu ny koi shyr chora nahi ju submit na kia ho really great collection, bari mehnat ki hy.
YAZEED-UN-Nisa!
Last edited by goodnews; Jul 25th, 2006 at 12:16 AM..
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Jul 25th, 2006, 12:17 AM
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Dil pr mat ly
Join Date: Nov 27, 2005 - 2:18 pm
Location: Ham whan hain jhan sy ham ko bhi hmari khabr nahi ati
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Originally Posted by Sannan
Buhat buhat shukarai for such a nice wishes .........
& Wah wah meray yaar kia khub yaad dila dia ....... Now this one is for you ........
Barish Main Bjaigay Kachay Aanganoon Key Khusbou'en
Chain Jub Dil ka Churain Yaad Kar Laina Hameen
Dheemay Say Kanptay Naram Lahjay Main Day Tumhain
Koi Zindagi Key Duaeen Yaad Kar Laina Hameen
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Wah wah zabardast
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Jul 25th, 2006, 04:19 PM
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WoW u all doing alot of Gr8 work & sannan yaar plzzzz zara tafssel se batao ke ye pic per urdu main adobe se kaise likhte hain.
Ye Mere "Gham Ka Asar" Hai Ya Teri Yaad Ka Tilism Ke Main Tanha Hoon Aur Tanhai Mere Saath Nahin
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Jul 25th, 2006, 10:57 PM
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~*~ Tanha ~*~
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Sad Affect this is the combination of Inpage & Adboe ... u can convert inpage blocks as GIF file and then past it in Adobe ... i think u little bit knows abt Adobe then u can do it easily
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Jul 25th, 2006, 10:57 PM
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Jigar Sannan...Khushbash,
This one is for you...
KABHI KABHI KE TASSAWWUR SE JI NAHI BHARTA
MERE KHAYAAL MAIN AAOU TU BAAR BAAR AAOU !
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This is for everybody:
BUZURG KAH GAYE THEY"UMRAT DARAAZ BAASH "
BACHPAN KI SHARAARTON KI SAZAA DE GAYE MUJHE
dARWESH.
KUCH AUR MANGA MERE MASHRAB MAIN KUFR HAI,
LA APNA HAATH DE MERE DAST E SAWAAL PAR.
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Jul 25th, 2006, 11:06 PM
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~*~ Tanha ~*~
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Wah wah Yaaraa Chah Cho Gay ho .......... yaar bachpan bhi kia khub cheez thi, nah fikar na faqa Aish Karay Kaka
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Aug 2nd, 2006, 12:15 AM
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~*~ Tanha ~*~
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I was thinking that cute asha’r on child hood has finished but I just read this she’r in THread of DIYAa and couldn’t stop my self to compose …….. Hope u’ll like it ……..
Palkeen Bhi Chamak Uthti Hain Sotay Main Hamari
Aankhoon Ko Abhi Khawab Chupanay Naheen Aatay
Urnay Do Parindoon Ko Abhi Shokh Hawa Main
Phir Loot Kar Bachpan Kay Zamany Naheen Aatay
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Aug 2nd, 2006, 12:18 AM
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Dil pr mat ly
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Originally Posted by Sannan
I was thinking that cute asha’r on child hood has finished but I just read this she’r in THread of DIYAa and couldn’t stop my self to compose …….. Hope u’ll like it ……..
Palkeen Bhi Chamak Uthti Hain Sotay Main Hamari
Aankhoon Ko Abhi Khawab Chupanay Naheen Aatay
Urnay Do Parindoon Ko Abhi Shokh Hawa Main
Phir Loot Kar Bachpan Kay Zamany Naheen Aatay
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Ki abat hy kia bat hy Lajwab kuch or nahi kha ja skta is ky liy
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Aug 15th, 2006, 05:27 AM
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~*~ Tanha ~*~
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i thought that child hood poetry finished but today this Ghzal caught my attention and hope u all will like it too ...............
Takhtian Likhtay Likhtay Jawan Ho Gaiy Umar Key Bairyan Kaat Dein
Hum Nay Bachpan Main Apnay Qalam Kia Tarashay Kah Khud Apni Ungalian Kaat Dein
Jiss Key Chaoon Main Chopaal Kay Rang Jamtay Thay Aab Woh Shajar Bik Gia
Jin Pah Daleen Thien Bachoon Prindoon Nay Peengainn Wohi Tahnian Kaat Dein
Sir Bachatay Kah Izzat Bachatay Kah Aadab-E-Hamsaigi Thay Buhat
Hum Nay Basti Nah Chori Magar Apni Hisay Key Sub Bairyan Kaat Dein
Aab Kah Gaoon Gia Tha To Nahreen Shajar Aur Rastay Nah Mil Sakay
Yaar Logoon Nay Sarkain Bananay Key Khawahish Main Pagdandian Kaat Dein
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Aug 15th, 2006, 05:48 AM
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Palkeen Bhi Chamak Uthti Hain Sotay Main Hamari
Aankhoon Ko Abhi Khawab Chupanay Naheen Aatay
Urnay Do Parindoon Ko Abhi Shokh Hawa Main
Phir Loot Kar Bachpan Kay Zamany Naheen Aatay
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very very nice sharing....thnx....!
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Aug 15th, 2006, 05:49 AM
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Takhtian Likhtay Likhtay Jawan Ho Gaiy Umar Key Bairyan Kaat Dein
Hum Nay Bachpan Main Apnay Qalam Kia Tarashay Kah Khud Apni Ungalian Kaat Dein
Jiss Key Chaoon Main Chopaal Kay Rang Jamtay Thay Aab Woh Shajar Bik Gia
Jin Pah Daleen Thien Bachoon Prindoon Nay Peengainn Wohi Tahnian Kaat Dein
Sir Bachatay Kah Izzat Bachatay Kah Aadab-E-Hamsaigi Thay Buhat
Hum Nay Basti Nah Chori Magar Apni Hisay Key Sub Bairyan Kaat Dein
Aab Kah Gaoon Gia Tha To Nahreen Shajar Aur Rastay Nah Mil Sakay
Yaar Logoon Nay Sarkain Bananay Key Khawahish Main Pagdandian Kaat Dein
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this one is also very nice.....thanx Sannan
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Aug 15th, 2006, 09:16 AM
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Dil pr mat ly
Join Date: Nov 27, 2005 - 2:18 pm
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Originally Posted by Sannan
i thought that child hood poetry finished but today this Ghzal caught my attention and hope u all will like it too ...............
Takhtian Likhtay Likhtay Jawan Ho Gaiy Umar Key Bairyan Kaat Dein
Hum Nay Bachpan Main Apnay Qalam Kia Tarashay Kah Khud Apni Ungalian Kaat Dein
Jiss Key Chaoon Main Chopaal Kay Rang Jamtay Thay Aab Woh Shajar Bik Gia
Jin Pah Daleen Thien Bachoon Prindoon Nay Peengainn Wohi Tahnian Kaat Dein
Sir Bachatay Kah Izzat Bachatay Kah Aadab-E-Hamsaigi Thay Buhat
Hum Nay Basti Nah Chori Magar Apni Hisay Key Sub Bairyan Kaat Dein
Aab Kah Gaoon Gia Tha To Nahreen Shajar Aur Rastay Nah Mil Sakay
Yaar Logoon Nay Sarkain Bananay Key Khawahish Main Pagdandian Kaat Dein |
Wah SAN ji kia bat hy yeh prh kr tu mujhy apna Rygistan yad a giya whan bhi byriyan thin jab ham chuty thy ab tu ryg bhi nazar nahi ati byrian tu door ki bta.Stan rh giya hy bas bari khubsurat nazm hy
(Bachpan tu ho giya How About Colleg days
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Aug 15th, 2006, 10:35 PM
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~*~ Tanha ~*~
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Thanks Maham & GS .... yes this nazam really attract me a lot and i miss my home town which was just like this but now a days now barries, no fields ...everywhere just buildings ................ There were three famouns trees and now only one tree have been left in my area ........
College life kay baray main ....hhhhmmm she'ri kum kum hi milti hay waisay .....
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Aug 17th, 2006, 11:58 AM
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excellent one sannan bhai................ 
Kisi ko panay ki chahat MOHABBAT toh nahi.................!
~~**Mere Naseeb nae meri khuahish ko kabhi samjha hi nahi**~~
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Aug 17th, 2006, 11:19 PM
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~*~ Tanha ~*~
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MG: it seems u've become permanet reader of GS ...... anyway thanks for ur encouragement ...............
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Aug 18th, 2006, 01:07 AM
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Bohat khoob )
Tuluu Main Bhee Maray Shokhiaa'n To Thee'n Lakin
Mazah Tha Us Main Jo Sa'aat Maray Zawal Ki The
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Aug 18th, 2006, 07:08 AM
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~*~ Tanha ~*~
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Kaleem Sahib aap bhi koi bachpan kay baray main koi poetry shar karain!!!!
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Oct 13th, 2006, 05:26 AM
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~*~ Tanha ~*~
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I just found that nice stuff and thought to share with you ……. Hope u all will like it …..
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