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Jul 12th, 2006, 12:13 AM
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~*~ Tanha ~*~
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The poetry about Bachpan almost fascinate everyone … I’m trying to gather poetry about bachpan in one thread so please contribute ur ashaa’r about childhood …… here we start ……………
Kash Kah Ruk Jay Yahi Waqat Ka Dhara
Hoti Chali Nah Jay Kaheen Har Baat Puraani
Uss kay Dushman Hain Buhat Aadami Acha Hoga
Woh Bhi Meri He Tarah Shahar Mein Tanga Hoga
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Jul 12th, 2006, 03:41 AM
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~Deliciously Dangerous~
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Mere bachapan k din....
kitne achy they din....
aaj baithe bithaye kioN yaad aagaye...
mere bichRoN ko mujh se mila day koi...
mera bachpan kisi mol laa day koi....
The only one of its own kind.
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Jul 12th, 2006, 06:19 AM
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~*~ Tanha ~*~
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AsSweetAs u sent some memorable she’rs and I couldn’t stop myself to give a new look and also special thx to Reet who sent this nice pic in one of his post …..
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Jul 12th, 2006, 09:18 AM
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Mere bachapan k din....
kitne achy they din....
aaj baithe bithaye kioN yaad aagaye...
mere bichRoN ko mujh se mila day koi...
mera bachpan kisi mol laa day koi....
very very nice...thnx sor sharing!
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Jul 12th, 2006, 09:21 AM
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Kuch nahi chahye tujh se aye mrri umar e rawan
Merra bachpan,merre jugno, merri gurya la dey.
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Jul 12th, 2006, 11:31 PM
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~*~ Tanha ~*~
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Thx Mahan for sending cute she'r ...here is my work .... hope u'll like it .............
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Jul 13th, 2006, 04:14 AM
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bohat cute pic hai....thanx Sannan....
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Jul 13th, 2006, 11:46 AM
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sar pe saya sa dast-e-dua yaad hai?
apne aangan main aik pair tha yaad hai?
jis main apni parindon se tashbeeh thi
tum ko school ki wo dua yaad hai?
Ye Mere "Gham Ka Asar" Hai Ya Teri Yaad Ka Tilism Ke Main Tanha Hoon Aur Tanhai Mere Saath Nahin
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Jul 14th, 2006, 12:53 AM
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~*~ Tanha ~*~
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Buhat khoub sad effect ……. Here is my work on ur cool sharing ………
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Jul 15th, 2006, 02:09 PM
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Nice pic Thanx 4 likng.
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Jul 15th, 2006, 06:14 PM
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i started enjoying poetry when i was in 8th class,and it was Iqbal's
Tu bucha bucha kay na rukh issay
Tayra Aina hay wo Aina
Kay Shikasta ho tu azeez tur hay
Nigha-e-aina saaz main
my class teacher, he was blind, he gave me this and asked to write about it. i remember i took many months and wrote something that i recal today after 18 years and i say myself "well done!"
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Jul 16th, 2006, 12:32 AM
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Originally Posted by Sannan
AsSweetAs u sent some memorable she’rs and I couldn’t stop myself to give a new look and also special thx to Reet who sent this nice pic in one of his post …..
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not his...her.......Sannan ji
nice sharing........thnx!
Yaadein tau sath rehti hain, bas log aatey jaatey hain......
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Jul 16th, 2006, 01:40 AM
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nice sharings.......!
one of my favr8 poem related to childhood (bachpan)
Bachpan ke dukh bhi kitney achchay hotey they
tab tau sirf khiloney toota kartey they
woh khushi bhi janey kaisi khushi thi
titlee ke par noch kay oochla kartey they
paon mar ke khud barish ke paani mein
apni nao aap dobuyaa kartey they
ab socho tau chot si parti hay dil par
aap bana ke aap gharondey tora kartey they
ab tau ik aansoo'n bhi ruswa kar jata hai
bachpan main tau jee bhar ke ro liya kartey they.......!
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Jul 16th, 2006, 05:12 AM
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~Deliciously Dangerous~
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Yeh doulat bhe lay lo,
yeh shuhrat bhe lay lo,
bhaly cheen lo mujh se mere jawani,
magar mujh ko louta do bachpan ka sawan,
woh qaghaz ke kashti woh barish ka pani.
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Jul 16th, 2006, 11:37 PM
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~*~ Tanha ~*~
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Nice Ashar As Sweet As .. Here is my work ..
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Jul 16th, 2006, 11:40 PM
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~*~ Tanha ~*~
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Originally Posted by reet
nice sharings.......!
one of my favr8 poem related to childhood (bachpan)
Bachpan ke dukh bhi kitney achchay hotey they
tab tau sirf khiloney toota kartey they
woh khushi bhi janey kaisi khushi thi
titlee ke par noch kay oochla kartey they
paon mar ke khud barish ke paani mein
apni nao aap dobuyaa kartey they
ab socho tau chot si parti hay dil par
aap bana ke aap gharondey tora kartey they
ab tau ik aansoo'n bhi ruswa kar jata hai
bachpan main tau jee bhar ke ro liya kartey they.......!
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Very cute & touchy ......... nice pic as well ......thx for sharing ..
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Jul 16th, 2006, 11:43 PM
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~*~ Tanha ~*~
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When sometimes we sit with our old friends, everytime we recall our past and the friends to whome we havn't any contact ......... at that time this She'r comes on my lips ....
Unhaeen Pukaro Jo Kho Gaiy Hain Udaas Mazi Kay Jangloon Main
Ujar Sochoon Main Rang Bhar Lo, Gai Rutoon Ka Hisab Kar lo
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Jul 16th, 2006, 11:44 PM
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Jul 16th, 2006, 11:45 PM
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~*~ Tanha ~*~
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Originally Posted by reet
not his...her.......Sannan ji
nice sharing........thnx!
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Sorry Reet g 
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Jul 16th, 2006, 11:51 PM
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Each and every sher in this thread is my favorite
Sannan your last sher is beautifully bitter
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Thay diyaar-e-Nau, Zameen-O-AasmaaN mairay liYe
Wus'at-e-aaghosh-e-maadar ik jahaaN mairay liYe
Thee har ik juNbish, nishaan-e-lutf-e-jaaN mairay liYe
hurf-e-bay matlab thee khud meri zubaaN mairay liYe
Dard-e-Tifli maiN agar koie rulataa thaa mujhaY
Shoorish-e-zanjeer-e-dar maiN lutf aataa thaa mujhaY
Taktay rehnaa haye! woh pehrouN talak suu-e-Qamar
Woh phaTTay baadal maiN, bay aawaaz-e-paa uss kaa safar
poochna reh reh kay uss kay koh-e-sehraa kee khabar
Aur woh hairat darogh-e-maslihat aamaiz par
AaNkh waqf-e-deed thee, Lub maail-e-guftaar thaa
Dil naa thaa meraa, saraapaa zoq-e-istafsaar thaa!
“Quite often good things have hurtful consequences. There are instances of men who have been ruined by their money or KILLED by their COURAGE.” ~Aristotle
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