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  1. Oct 25th, 1998, 10:10 PM #1
    SAMREEN
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    Woh Teray Naseeb Ki Barishain Kisi Aur Chaat Par Baras Gayen,
    Dil-e-bekhabar Meri Baat Sun Usey Bhool Jaa Usey Bhool Jaa.

    Kyoon Aata Howa Hay Ghubar Mein Ghamay Zindagi Ki Fishar Mein,
    Woh Jo Darj Tha Teray Bakht Mein So Woh Ho Giya Usey Bhool Jaa.

    To Yeh Kis Liyay Shab-e-hijr Kay Usey Har Sitaray Mein Dekhna,
    Woh Falak Kay Jis Pay Milay Thay Hum Koi Aur Tha Usey Bhool Jaa.

    Kisi Aankh Mein Nahin Aashk-e-gham Teray Baad Kuch Bhi Nahin Hay Kum,
    Tujhay Zindagi Nay Bhulaa Diya Tu Bhi Muskura Usey Bhool Jaa

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    Abhi Say Kyoon Chalaktey Hain Tumhari Aankh Kay Aansoon,
    Abhi Chadey Kahan Hay Dastan-e-dard-e-dil Mein Nay..




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  3. Oct 25th, 1998, 11:21 PM #2
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    Ooooohhhh!!

    Feel sorry for u!!!

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  4. Oct 26th, 1998, 12:57 AM #3
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    Samreen! may i suggest? use simple words with mall lines.

    Tum ne to keh dia keh mohabbat nahi mili
    Mujh ko to yeh bhi kehne ki mohlat nahi mili

    Neendon ke dais jate koi khwab daikh'te
    Laikin diya jalane se furssat nahi mili

    adab
    Meray Roz O Shab k Nisaab Main Meray Paas Apna To Kuch Nahi
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  5. Oct 26th, 1998, 06:42 AM #4
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    Main kisi kay dastay talab main hoon, to kisi kay harfay dua main hoon
    Main naseeb ho kisi aur ka, mujhay maangta koee aur hay
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  6. Oct 26th, 1998, 11:02 AM #5
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    Wah waah!
    Hey samreen, i remember reading this ghazal somewhere and loving it too especially the very first sher!

    Woh mairay naseeeb ki barishain kisi aur chhat ber baras gaeen... *sigh*

    Do u know who it's by???

    Later
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  7. Oct 26th, 1998, 12:24 PM #6
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    bhulata lakh hooN lakin barabar yad a'atay haiN
    elahi turk-e-ulfat per woh kioN-kar yad a
    'atay haiN

    I think this ghazal is from Amjad Islam Amjad~
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  8. Oct 27th, 1998, 10:02 AM #7
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    Thanx hayya jee for liking my this piece of poetry,i also like this ghazal so much.Do u know this was the 1 by reading which i fell in love with poetry.
    I have two more SHERZ of this ghazal which r in my diary but Alas! i have missed my diary somewhere,Duua Karain Kay Meri Diary Mil Jaay Ta-kay Mein Aap Ki Khidmat Mein Mazeed SHERZ Paish Kar Sakoon.

    And as far as the name of the poet is concerned I think that nuts thought right.

    Azad ji if u r listening me than can u please explainl me that what do u meant by MALL LINES so that i could be able to take care of it from next time.Thanx.
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