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      Asalam u Alaikum ! How Are You All ? Hope Fine ! So Noon Meem Rashid Ki Aik Dil Ko Chuu Janay Aur Laakhon Urdu Shyari Parhnay Walay Logon Ki Pasandeeda Nazam Hasan Kooza Gar !

      KoozaH Gar means (matti k bartan Bananay Wala)
      Jahan Zaad (Apnay Mehbbob Ko Iss nAam Se Pukara Hai Shayar Ne)

      Hasan Koozah-gar ---- I
      JahaaN-zaad!
      Neeche gali mein
      Tere dar k aage
      Ye main sokhta-sar
      Hasan koozah-gar huN
      Tujhe subho bazaar mein
      BooRhe attaar Yusuf ki dukkaan par
      Main ne dekha
      To teri nigaahoN mein
      Wo taab-naaki thi
      Main jiski hasrat mein
      Nau saal deewaana phirta raha
      JahaaN-zaad!
      Nau saal deewaana phirta raha
      Ye wo daur tha
      Jis mein main ne kabhi
      Apne ranjoor koozoN ki jaanib palaT kar na dekha
      Wo kooze
      Mere dast-e-chaabuk k putle
      Gil o rang o raughan ki makhlooq-e-be-jaaN
      Wo sar-goshiyoN mein ye kehte,
      Hasan kooza-gar ab kahaN hai
      Wo ham se
      Khud apne amal se
      Khudaawand ban kar
      KhudaaoN ki maanind hai roo-e-gardaaN
      JanaaN-zaad!
      Nau saal ka daur
      YooN mujh pe guzra
      K jaise kisi shehr-e-madfoon par waqt guzre
      TaghaaroN mein mitti
      Kabhi jis ki khushbu se waarafta hota tha main
      Sang-basta paRi thi
      Suraahi o meena o jaam o subu
      Aur faanoos o guldaaN
      Meri heich-maaya maeeshat k izhaar-e-fan k sahaare
      Shikasta paRe they
      Main khud
      Main
      Hasan koozah-gar
      Pa-ba-gil
      Khaak-sar, bar-barehna
      Sar-e-chaak
      Zoleeda-mu
      Sar-ba-zaanu
      Kisi gham-zada deivta ki tarha
      Vaahime k gil o la se
      KhwaaboN k sayyaal kooze banaata raha
      JahaaN-zaad!
      Nau saal pehle tu nadaaN thi lekin
      Tujhe ye khabar thi
      K main ne
      Hasan koozah-gar ne
      Teri qaaf ki c
      Ufaq-taab aankhoN mein
      Dekhi hai wo taab-naaki
      K jis se mere jism o jaaN
      Abr o mehtaab ka rah-guzar ban gaye they
      JahaaN-zaad!
      Baghdaad ki khwaab-gooN raat
      Rood-e-Dajla ka saahil
      Wo kashti
      Wo mallaah ki band aankhein
      Kisi khasta-jaaN,
      Ranj-war koozah-gar k liye
      Eik hi raat
      Wo koh-ruba thi
      K jis se abhi tak hai paivast uska wujood
      Uska paikar
      Magar eik hi raat ka zauq
      Darya ki wo lehr nikla
      Hasan kooza-gar jis mein dooba
      To ubhra nahi hai
      JahaaN-zaad!
      Is daur mein roz
      Har roz
      Wo sokhta-bakht
      Aa kar mujhe dekhti
      Chaak par
      Pa-ba-gil,
      Sar-ba-zaanu
      To shaanoN se mujhko hilaati
      Wo shaanoN se mujhko hilaati,
      Hasan koozah-gar!
      Hosh mein aa
      Hasan!
      Apne veeraan ghar par nazar kar!
      Ye bachoN k tannoor kiyun-kar bharein ge!
      Hasan!
      Aai mohabbat k maare!
      Mohabbat ameeroN ki baazi!
      Hasan!
      Apne deewaar o dar par nazar kar!
      Mere kaan mein ye nawaa-e-hazeeN
      YuN thi jaise kisi Doobte shakhs ko
      Zeir-e-girdaab koi pukaare
      Wo ashkoN k ambaar
      PhooloN k ambaar they
      HaaN magar
      Main, Hasan koozah-gar
      Shehr-e-auhaam k
      Un kharaaboN ka mjzoob tha jin mein
      Koi sada
      Koi jumbish
      Kisi margh-e-parraaN ka saaya
      Kisi zindagi ka nishaaN tak nahi tha
      JahaaN-zaad!
      Main aaj teri gali mein
      YahaaN raat ki sard-gooN teergi mein
      Tere dar k aage
      KhaRa huN
      Sar o mu pareshaaN
      Dareeche se wo
      Qaaf ki c talismi nigaahein mujhe
      Aaj phir jhaankti hain
      Zamaana JahaaN-zaad! wo chaak hai
      Jis mein meena o jaam o subu
      Aur faanoos o guldaaN k maanind bante bigaRte hain insaaN
      Main insaaN huN lekin
      Ye nau saal jo gham k qaalib mein guzre
      Hasan koozah-gar,
      Aaj ik toda-e-khaak hai
      Jis mein nam ka asar tak nahi hai
      JahaaN-zaad!
      Baazaar mein subh
      Attaar Yusuf ki dukkaan par
      Teri aankhein
      Phir ik baar kuch keh gaee hain
      Un aankhoN ki taabinda shokhi se uTThi hai
      Phir toda-e-khaak mein nam ki halki c larzish
      Tamanna ki wus'at ki kis ko khabar hai!
      JahaaN-zaad!
      Lekin tu chaahe to ban jaauN
      Main phir wohi kooza-gar
      Jis k kooze
      They har kaakh o ku
      Aur har shehr o qarya ki naazish
      They jin se ameer o gada k masaakin
      DarakhshaaN
      Tamanna ki wus'at ki kis ko khabar hai!
      JahaaN-zaad!
      Lekin tu chaahe to main phir
      PalaT jaauN
      Un apne mehjoor koozoN ki jaanib
      Gil o la k sookhe taghaaroN ki jaanib
      Maeeshat k izhaar-e-fan k sahaaroN ki jaanib
      K main us gil o la se
      Us rang o raughan se
      Phir wo sharaare nikaaluN
      K jin se diloN k kharaabe hoN raushan.


      Noon Meem Rashid
      Love is unconditional, relationships are not
      BeInG lOn3lY sId

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      Its Really wonderful To Read It Once Again Here.................
      Bohat Umdaa Sharing ..................
      Live N Let Live...............

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      bohat khubsurat nazam hai
      To steal a flower we call mean; To rob a field is chivalry,
      Who kills a body he must die;Who kills a spirit he goes free.

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      buhat lambi hai bhai will read it later


      waisay Noon Meem Rashid ki hai to achi hi ho gi
      I am not an angel but I've spread my wings a bit . . . . .

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      @ baki sab ~

      Farhat Abbas Shah Ko He Parhiye ~
      Love is unconditional, relationships are not
      BeInG lOn3lY sId

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      Quote Originally Posted by being lonely View Post
      @ baki sab ~

      Farhat Abbas Shah Ko He Parhiye ~
      LOL!
      itnay naraaz kiouN hotaY ho jiger

      Farhat Abbas Shah is a good poet too

      raat ko aaraam saY paRhooN gaa.. it's a bit long..... jaldi maiN insaaf naheeN hogaa
      “Quite often good things have hurtful consequences. There are instances of men who have been ruined by their money or KILLED by their COURAGE.” ~Aristotle

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      The heart is the only broken instrument that works.

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      Sid:

      I read the whole poem... the free verse is though very lengthy but at the same time very mesmerizing ... The simplicity of the thoughts by Noon Meem Rashid is rather very complicated....

      I have couple of questions if you know the answer....

      - It seems like Hassan Koozah gar is a known character of Baghdad - Is this story of Hassan Koozah gar and JahaaN Zaad one of those stories like Laila Majoon, Heer Raanjha etc.?

      - It talks about 9 years span..... what is the significant of it?

      I seriously think that we need to know the context and background of coming into existence of this poem in order to truely appreciate it....? Do you know about it by any chance????
      “Quite often good things have hurtful consequences. There are instances of men who have been ruined by their money or KILLED by their COURAGE.” ~Aristotle

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      ^^ pretty much my train of thoughts.
      we are waiting Sid. jaldi aa kar ye samjhao cos its really enthralling
      ~wo lutt jaye jo humse dil ko lagaye~

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      ye kia he ?

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      pyari bachhi jao apne gudde gudiyon ke saath khelo. ye jagah bahot khatarnaak hae- bachhon ke liye bilkul nahi
      ~wo lutt jaye jo humse dil ko lagaye~

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      Loog Pather K Khudaon Se Wafa Karte hain
      Hum ne Insan Ko Chaha To Gunah-Gaar hue.