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Old Jul 9th, 2008, 10:22 AM   #31 (permalink)
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OKi friends next qurabanee ka bakra ops i mean bekree oops phol ke tesbeh whatever
apko enka id dek ke kesa fel hota jelde jelde aker bedla leyn , derne ke zeroret nehe he ke ye mere sis he, jo beh kehna he dil khol ke kehyn


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gul-e-tasbeeh MM aap ki behan hain..Allah talah Gul-eTasbeeh ko MM ko jheelnay ka aur himmat-o hosla de

Masoom Muskaan kko dekh kar kuch acha impression nai parhta magar waisay a nice ,friendly girl comes to my mind






jo mere baad post kare ga wo mota..
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Old Jul 9th, 2008, 10:45 AM   #32 (permalink)
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Nick se n sharings se lagta hai madam bohat buzurg aur naik saadat mohtarma hain but hain thori chalaak Mus Mus Ki Bari Sis Hain akhir ko taiz to hongi he aur AQ bhai ki bari fan hain cuz sirf unhi ki poetry images mein edit karti khud apni sharings simply post kartiiii

Jahan rahiye khush rahiye n bechari mus mus ko tang na kia karein jabhi woh yahan hum sab ko tang karti






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Old Jul 9th, 2008, 10:47 AM   #33 (permalink)
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mere sis phol jese nazuk he
Waqai


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Old Jul 9th, 2008, 10:48 AM   #34 (permalink)
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MM ke behan MM say bari hai
MM say ziada samajhdar hai
MM say ziada tang bhi nai karti hoon gi
MM jaisay danda bhi nahi uthaye rakhti hoongi
MM say behtar urdu bhi ati hogi
MM ke tarha bhi nahi hoongi
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Old Jul 9th, 2008, 10:50 AM   #35 (permalink)
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Old Jul 9th, 2008, 10:51 AM   #36 (permalink)
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haan wo to pehlay bhi thi

ap ko kabhi pata hi nahi lagnay diya
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Old Jul 9th, 2008, 10:55 AM   #37 (permalink)
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haan wo to pehlay bhi thi

ap ko kabhi pata hi nahi lagnay diya
Tumhara Yeh Bhai Bhi Poet Hay



Magar likhta sonay k Baad hoon

Aur Utthnay K Baad Bhool Jaata Hoon keh Kiya Lik'kha Tha






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Old Jul 9th, 2008, 12:26 PM   #38 (permalink)
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hello yahan to guppen chal rhi hen...but likhna kis k bare men hy.....






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Old Jul 9th, 2008, 01:06 PM   #39 (permalink)
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Dil-o-nazar maiN basaa huaa hai
Tu chaaNdni kaa banaa huaa hai

Zaheen AaNkhaiN haiN, saru qaamat
Gulaaaab chehra hai, baal khushboo

Tu boL uThay tau lafz khushboo
Tu soch laY tau khayal khushboo

Teray takallum say ba'n gaya hai
jawab khushboo, sawal khushboo!






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Old Jul 9th, 2008, 01:35 PM   #40 (permalink)
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Kuch aesey log jo zehan se bhulaaey nahi jaatey
kuch aesey lamhey jo dil se mitaa'ey nahi jaatey


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Old Jul 9th, 2008, 02:20 PM   #41 (permalink)
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gul ka nick reminds me of gul baqoli







Jia dharak dharak... Jia dharak dharak jaye
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Old Jul 9th, 2008, 04:32 PM   #42 (permalink)
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kantoon si iss dunyaa men wo phoolon jesi..

jeewan bhool bhuliyon men wo raston jesi..

ojli ojli mehki mehki,,,,,,,,,roshan roshan.....

meri suchon jesi,mery jazbon jesi.............!!






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Old Jul 9th, 2008, 04:45 PM   #43 (permalink)
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gul -e- tasbeeh

tujhay dekha to yeh khiyaaL aya

zindgee dhoop or tu ghana saaya






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Old Jul 9th, 2008, 04:50 PM   #44 (permalink)
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mujhay gul ki id parh ker subha subha ka bagh ka manzar yaad aata hai or subha ki sair essay yaad ata hai jo school main parhtay thay :P






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Hmmm mai kisi ko phooolo jasi kyu nahi lagi

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Old Jul 9th, 2008, 05:32 PM   #46 (permalink)
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Old Jul 9th, 2008, 11:46 PM   #47 (permalink)
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Gul ko dekh k ye kahyal aa'ta hia


paa'tey haiN kuch gulaab paharooN maiN parwarish
aa'ti hai pathooN se bhi khushboo kabhi kabhi






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Old Jul 10th, 2008, 12:28 AM   #48 (permalink)
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Gul-e-Tasbeeh.. pata nahi.. jab bhi ye nick parha mainay to mujhe laga k buhat muqaddas sa naam hai..

jab sharings parhi to aik aqeedat si hui..

jab Gul se baat hui, thru pm, to ehtiraam barha..

iss leay nahi k she acts like buzurg.. but i feel she is someone who really knows the importance of frnds in life n she executes each n every step of keepin them so perfectly n with all honour.. and with an unusual way of smiling :~)..

may be ppl feel em mistaken but em not in dedicating this sher to her..

Sochtay Hain Tujhe Wuzu Kerkay
Yuun Tera Ehtiraam Kertay Hain

PS: there isnt any fake word or expressed tht..






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Pal Do Pal Meri Kahani Hai..
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Old Jul 10th, 2008, 03:03 AM   #49 (permalink)
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Gule-e-Tasbeeh

Jin ko main aksar *Pakeeza* kay naam say mukhatib karta hoon,
she is one of few at GS who are most respected and very decent!
Her writing style and thoughts are amazing, some times I feel like I am reading myself

A wonderful soft hearted person, and have depth in her thoughts and has the ability to read the lines between the words (:-p)

I pray to ALLAH to give her a long love life with her love ones always around, may Allah grant her all happiness in the life and make her the best sister, daughter, wife and mother, aamin summa aamin










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Dumbs who are genius usually get the point, but genius who are dumb they don't ask for any explanation and thinks they got the point!
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Old Jul 10th, 2008, 03:59 AM   #50 (permalink)
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Pholoon ki malaa k baray mein kia kahoon.. Yeh woh tehreer hai jo kissi b frame mein sama nahin sakti..

Very sweet person... bohat soft spoken hai, kam kam bolti hai anddd she is very veryy creative i simply love her designing..

Woh aaye bazm mein itna tou main ne daikha
phirr uske baad charagon mein roshni na rahii

May Allah always Bless u..






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Old Jul 10th, 2008, 04:07 AM   #51 (permalink)
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koch sher or eche bateyn me ke lea beh rekhe seb






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wese kia Gul MM ki sachi muchi wali sis hain?
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wese kia Gul MM ki sachi muchi wali sis hain?
nehe jhote mote wale he






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Old Jul 10th, 2008, 04:27 PM   #55 (permalink)
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awww thanks bhaaiyo te behno , kya mein bhi apney baarey meiN kuch kahooN:-d






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Old Jul 10th, 2008, 04:34 PM   #56 (permalink)
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Fardan Fardan Jawab Dena Chahiye Banda Comments De Raha Hai Us Pe Itni Kanjuusi Se Aik Jawab Ke Thanks ! Tareef nahi i think ye game thi






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aap tou naraz hi ho gaey mein fardan fardan jawaab deti hoon :-)