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Old Jul 10th, 2008, 05:59 PM   #61 (permalink)
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Dil-o-nazar maiN basaa huaa hai
Tu chaaNdni kaa banaa huaa hai

Zaheen AaNkhaiN haiN, saru qaamat
Gulaaaab chehra hai, baal khushboo

Tu boL uThay tau lafz khushboo
Tu soch laY tau khayal khushboo

Teray takallum say ba'n gaya hai

jawab khushboo, sawal khushboo!
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Old Jul 11th, 2008, 08:18 AM   #62 (permalink)
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gul-e-tasbeeh MM aap ki behan hain..Allah talah Gul-eTasbeeh ko MM ko jheelnay ka aur himmat-o hosla de

Masoom Muskaan kko dekh kar kuch acha impression nai parhta magar waisay a nice ,friendly girl comes to my mind
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Old Jul 11th, 2008, 08:23 AM   #63 (permalink)
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Hmmm mai kisi ko phooolo jasi kyu nahi lagi

*note down the names to give the warnings*
bolay tu Cauliflower? ya phir shab se milti julti ''raat ki raani''........






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Old Jul 11th, 2008, 01:32 PM   #64 (permalink)
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Old Jul 11th, 2008, 02:33 PM   #65 (permalink)
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bolay tu Cauliflower? ya phir shab se milti julti ''raat ki raani''........
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Old Jul 11th, 2008, 02:36 PM   #66 (permalink)
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raat ki rani to achi hai haan cauliflower per muncho ko warning day hi deni chahiyay :P







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Old Jul 12th, 2008, 12:34 PM   #67 (permalink)
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awww cauli flower bechari ne kia bigara hey, wo bhi aik phool hay us k kuch jazbat hotay






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Old Jul 12th, 2008, 12:39 PM   #68 (permalink)
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muncho kia khyal hai phir ap ka sehra inhi pholooN say na tayar kerwa liya jay :P






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Old Jul 12th, 2008, 01:19 PM   #69 (permalink)
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Old Jul 12th, 2008, 05:14 PM   #70 (permalink)
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next guest heyn Bheegiyaad






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Old Jul 13th, 2008, 11:46 AM   #71 (permalink)
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Khaana Pakana Kapray Makeup Nakhray Bas Yehi Aata Hai Zehan Mein







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Old Jul 14th, 2008, 07:47 AM   #72 (permalink)
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Khaana Pakana Kapray Makeup Nakhray Bas Yehi Aata Hai Zehan Mein
zehen apna apna







"The death from which you flee will truly overtake you: then you will be sent back to the Knower of things secret and open: and He will tell you (the truth of) the things that you did!" (Surat al-Jumu'ah: 8).
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Old Jul 14th, 2008, 07:55 AM   #73 (permalink)
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muncho kia khyal hai phir ap ka sehra inhi pholooN say na tayar kerwa liya jay :P
saath main potatoes n tomatoes bhee honay chahiyaan to add colors lachay-daar payaz aur garlic-ginger bhee ho saath main and above all desi ghayoo ka tarka, lo tayar hua muncho miyan ka sahra






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Old Jul 14th, 2008, 07:59 AM   #74 (permalink)
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Bheegiyaad se aik gana zayhun mai aata hay"
bhooli hue yaado, humai itna na sataoo
chain se rahnay do, mairay paas na aaoo






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Old Jul 14th, 2008, 12:59 PM   #75 (permalink)
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mai jub bhi bheegz ko dekhti ho meray hath mai itch shoro hojati ha .. dil karta hai
jaldi say is kay sir par ek jhapar laga dou






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Old Jul 14th, 2008, 04:27 PM   #76 (permalink)
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Old Jul 15th, 2008, 12:14 AM   #77 (permalink)
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bheegiyaad..

nick parho to lagta hai koi aatif aslam aur uss k songs ka buhat bara fan hai..

baat karo to lagta hai terrorist hai koi jo kisi bhi lamhay apne gangster frnd (MM) k sath halla bol dega..

the only person i am afraid of in GS

magar if U are frnd of hers.. to she is a person who is so caring n will confront anyone who is bothering U.. very sweet in nature..

agerchay zada baat nahi hui meri Bheegi se.. magar magar i feel she is a person with a akhrote like brittle and hard sturcture on the surface but very soft in core of heart..

she has attitude blended with care n concern..

PS: Allah mujhe maaf kerna ager kaheen jhoot moot koi baat boli ho







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Old Jul 15th, 2008, 02:01 AM   #78 (permalink)
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itni khoob soort hirni hy k....suoch suoch kr ye sher zehn men aayaa...

,,ae ghzaalaa tery andaaz men wehshat kion hay??

teri in jheel si aankhon men nadaamat kion hay??

bheegy huy sheron men lataafat kion hay......? ,,







suoz-e-firaaq,yaas-o-alam,iztraab-o-shuoq
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Old Jul 18th, 2008, 08:44 AM   #79 (permalink)
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Bheegiyaad se aik gana zayhun mai aata hay"
bhooli hue yaado, humai itna na sataoo
chain se rahnay do, mairay paas na aaoo


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itni khoob soort hirni hy k....suoch suoch kr ye sher zehn men aayaa...

,,ae ghzaalaa tery andaaz men wehshat kion hay??

teri in jheel si aankhon men nadaamat kion hay??

bheegy huy sheron men lataafat kion hay......? ,,
i dont know k yeh sab q hai






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Old Jul 18th, 2008, 08:48 AM   #80 (permalink)
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mai jub bhi bheegz ko dekhti ho meray hath mai itch shoro hojati ha .. dil karta hai
jaldi say is kay sir par ek jhapar laga dou
hath mein itch nahi hotee asal mein aapko woh waqt yaad aa jata hai jab aisa hi kuch meinny kiya tha with u
muskaan nay theek farmaya

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bheegiyaad..

nick parho to lagta hai koi aatif aslam aur uss k songs ka buhat bara fan hai..

baat karo to lagta hai terrorist hai koi jo kisi bhi lamhay apne gangster frnd (MM) k sath halla bol dega..

the only person i am afraid of in GS

magar if U are frnd of hers.. to she is a person who is so caring n will confront anyone who is bothering U.. very sweet in nature..

agerchay zada baat nahi hui meri Bheegi se.. magar magar i feel she is a person with a akhrote like brittle and hard sturcture on the surface but very soft in core of heart..

she has attitude blended with care n concern..

PS: Allah mujhe maaf kerna ager kaheen jhoot moot koi baat boli ho
g haan mera talluq talliban k group say hai







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Old Jul 18th, 2008, 09:01 AM   #81 (permalink)
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^ she neva talk to me tu kia kahya bheegi k baray main







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Old Jul 18th, 2008, 09:06 AM   #82 (permalink)
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Old Jul 18th, 2008, 03:36 PM   #83 (permalink)
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Aray meri bheegi naak ke liye jitna kahein kam hai

Mashallah say Allah ne Nadeem matlab bheegi ko bohat akal aur soojh bhooj ata ke hai.Itni keh bas.
aur zuban ki itni methi hain ke galiyan bhi detin hain to lagta hai duaein de rahi hain.Bas thora ghussa ziada ata hai aur kuch nahi.Shairi ke in ke zouk ka kuch ziada pata nahi hai muje magar mera manna hai keh apnay jaisi hi pasad karti hoon gei

mera maltab achi shairi say hai


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Old Jul 18th, 2008, 03:38 PM   #84 (permalink)
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baat karo to lagta hai terrorist hai koi jo kisi bhi lamhay apne gangster frnd (MM) k sath halla bol dega..
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Old Jul 18th, 2008, 11:42 PM   #85 (permalink)
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hath mein itch nahi hotee asal mein aapko woh waqt yaad aa jata hai jab aisa hi kuch meinny kiya tha with u
muskaan nay theek farmaya



g haan mera talluq talliban k group say hai
so u mean to say k taliban terrorist hain.. lemme inform them ab U






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Old Jul 20th, 2008, 10:19 AM   #86 (permalink)
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