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Old Jul 3rd, 2008, 12:59 PM   #1 (permalink)
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aj ham new game start kerne lege heyn

game boht easy he, ap seb ko ek Guppy name dea jay gah ap ne onke bare meyn jo beh inka id dekh ke kheal ata sher ya koe story apne words meyn koch kehna chaheyn koch beh shairana sa ap keh sekte jesa merze ho koe mind nehe kere ga keo ke kese ke pas mind he hee nehe


lets start

oki to aj seb se pehle Mod se start kerte heyn


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*Note* es thread meyn koe comment na kere verna epne tez mod osko kehen bheg deyn geh*
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Old Jul 3rd, 2008, 01:20 PM   #2 (permalink)
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bay noor na rahti shab-e-hijraa'n ki hatheli
woh jan-e-dua dasht-e-tamana mai utarta

woh chand kisi mehal kay khwaboo'n ka muqadar
kyu meray bujhay ghar ki tamana mai utarta
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Old Jul 3rd, 2008, 05:57 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Shab-e-Hijar

Shab-e-hijar jin ka Chaand sa Chehra hey (tha) uss pe 2 AankheiN iss tarah harkat meiN heiN keh abhi nikal kar humaari thread ko taala laga deiN gii, saari shab hijar meiN guzaar ke sochti rehti heiN subh sab sey pehley kis ko warning di jaaey:-p

aap ke ID ko dekh k aek sheir arz hey

Shab-e-hijr merii azaaboN meiN guzrii
kisii ke khayaaloN khwaaboN meiN guzrii

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Old Jul 3rd, 2008, 06:24 PM   #4 (permalink)
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tumko dekha tou khayaal aaya
bevakoofoon k stock mein naya maal aaya

when ever i read ur nick shabzz the first word that cum to ma mind is SHABBO n if u noted shabbo is mostly name of sum sorta poor and bechari type ki girl in movies specially if u have experience of watching old paki movies aik say barh kar aik shabbo millay gee
aur aaj kal jis speed say tum naan laga laga k un ki picz post kar rai ho na tou shabbo wala image suits u alot n u look like tandoor par naan lagatee hui shabbo

knw ur not bechari at all

kher i guess itna kafi hai waisay aur b kafee stock hai mind mein but woh sambhal k rakhtee hun kisi aur k liyey








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Old Jul 4th, 2008, 12:26 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Shab-e-Hijar..

sab se pehle to ye khayal aaya k Hijar main 'a' kion aaya..

den it came to mind k shayd koi aisi mohtarma hon gi jo buhat serious mizaaj ki malik hongi n zarur 30-35 saal ki to hongi..

magar after knowing her, samajh aaya k ye nick bus yunhi kisi ne bana dia tha in ke leay.. n she is totally different from her nick..

shuuu.. its really hard to explain someone.. :s






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Old Jul 4th, 2008, 02:53 PM   #6 (permalink)
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ae shab-e-hijr ma siwa tery....

ashk bhi gam gusaar rehta hy

saans k saath zeest ko har pal

muot ka intezaar rehta hy......!


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Old Jul 4th, 2008, 04:35 PM   #7 (permalink)
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shab-e-hijer kay signature say yad aya

jia kay dherkanay say na ho preshan mere jaan

kay is dherkan main panhaan hay tere zindge ka aashiyaaN


yeh mera apna zaati shair hay jo abhi abhi warid hoa hay : *blush*






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Old Jul 4th, 2008, 04:39 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Shayad tumhaiN naseeb ho ay Kushtagan-e-Shab
Roo-e-Uf'uq peY "Subh" kaY Aaaasaar dekhnaaa






Shaayad tumhaiN Naseeb ho aye Kushtagaan-e-Sha'b
Ruu'-e-Ufuq pe Subh kaY aaaaasaaaaar dekhnaaaaaa
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Old Jul 4th, 2008, 05:16 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Shabo innocent hai achi hai bohat jald apni zimaydaarion ko samjhne lagti hai aur INSHALLAH bohat kaamyaab zindagi guzaray gi !
N nick name zyada suit nahi karta mohtarma ko but kuch kuch chupi rustam bhi hain
aur in ke liye shair jald post karonga !

ALLAH apko khush rakhay Amin !






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Old Jul 4th, 2008, 11:47 PM   #10 (permalink)
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Hmmmmm seeing the nick the first thing that came to my mind was

Hijr Key Maari Ik Masoom See Baycharii Larkii..............

"Dil Hijr Kay Dard Say Bojhal Hai
Abh Aan Millo To Behtar Hai"

But after interaction on GS I found her to be an extreemly nice and lovely person................................

Allah Issay Khush Rakhay Oor Nazar-e-Budd say bachaiy Ameen
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Old Jul 5th, 2008, 12:50 AM   #11 (permalink)
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bechari. udaas c larki... mil jai kabhi...candy khilany kay bahany lay chalon

offcourse thats only about nick. asal mei ti churail je bhi in say panah mangy






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Old Jul 6th, 2008, 09:14 AM   #12 (permalink)
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Bohat masoom hai tu aurr zamana ayyaarr
Khuda karay tujhe sheher ki hawa lag jaye






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Old Jul 6th, 2008, 05:27 PM   #13 (permalink)
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Old Jul 7th, 2008, 08:12 AM   #14 (permalink)
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sub dar rahay shayud MOD pe comment pass karnay se






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Old Jul 7th, 2008, 08:20 AM   #15 (permalink)
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Shab.. aapke mutaliq GS ke baasion ne jo alfaaz adaa kernay ki jisarat ki hai.. aap in alfaaz pe roshni dalna pasand karain gi.. hum aapki aawaz sunnay k leay hamatan'gosh hain.. :$
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Old Jul 7th, 2008, 10:14 AM   #16 (permalink)
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Old Jul 7th, 2008, 11:06 AM   #17 (permalink)
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shabo..pyari si larki

kya abhi aur makhan lagaoon aur muje sher ver nai atay






jo mere baad post kare ga wo mota..
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Shab sey Naan ki recipe maangtey maangtey mera gala sookh geya haath kapkapa uthey lekin wuh abhi tak haazir nahi huwiN yehi haal rahaa tou ....... Allah raham karey, aap iss baarey meiN kya kahna chaaheiN gi :-p
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Shab sey Naan ki recipe maangtey maangtey mera gala sookh geya haath kapkapa uthey lekin wuh abhi tak haazir nahi huwiN yehi haal rahaa tou ....... Allah raham karey, aap iss baarey meiN kya kahna chaaheiN gi :-p
yara recipe udhar hi hia na acha let me pm you the recipe






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Old Jul 7th, 2008, 11:03 PM   #20 (permalink)
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Shab.. aapke mutaliq GS ke baasion ne jo alfaaz adaa kernay ki jisarat ki hai.. aap in alfaaz pe roshni dalna pasand karain gi.. hum aapki aawaz sunnay k leay hamatan'gosh hain.. :$
aww i was missing this cat yeahh back off ahmar this is mine






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Old Jul 8th, 2008, 12:15 AM   #21 (permalink)
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wah shabo chaa gaye ho tusi

chashm e beena ko zarorat nahi qandeeloN ki
heiN baraber shab e hijar o shab e maah mujhey






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Old Jul 8th, 2008, 12:48 AM   #22 (permalink)
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wah shabo chaa gaye ho tusi

chashm e beena ko zarorat nahi qandeeloN ki
heiN baraber shab e hijar o shab e maah mujhey
chalo kisi nay to Maah koyaad kya ;)
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aww i was missing this cat yeahh back off ahmar this is mine
jee nahi this is mine ..

apni billi jaker dhoondo..






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Old Jul 9th, 2008, 08:52 AM   #24 (permalink)
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OKi friends next qurabanee ka bakra ops i mean bekree oops phol ke tesbeh whatever
apko enka id dek ke kesa fel hota jelde jelde aker bedla leyn , derne ke zeroret nehe he ke ye mere sis he, jo beh kehna he dil khol ke kehyn


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namazoon k baad parhnay wali tasbeeh ki yaad a jatee hai

aur aik umr raseeda khatoon ka image zehen mein banta hai
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Old Jul 9th, 2008, 09:09 AM   #26 (permalink)
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nick parh k aur gul ki sharing parh k jaisa lagta hai meinny woh bataya
ab nick k sath age thoree likhi hotee hai






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