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Old Aug 8th, 2008, 03:26 PM   #31 (permalink)
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Usko tou kabhi mujh se mohabbat hi nahin thi
yehh khail tou duniya ko dikhane ke liye thaa..


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Old Aug 8th, 2008, 03:43 PM   #32 (permalink)
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Apna Dil Hii Apni Tabahii Ka Sabab hOta hAi
Yeh Jawaanii Ka Zamana Bhi AjAb hOta hAi
Jaaney Kis Baat Ney Dil tOr Diya Kis Ka
bOlney Waaley Ko AhSaas Hii Kab hOta hAi


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Old Aug 8th, 2008, 11:53 PM   #33 (permalink)
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Ye Kashmakash Alag Hai Ke Kis Kashmakash Main Hoon
Aata Nahin Samajh Buhat Sochta Hoon Main

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Old Aug 9th, 2008, 12:59 AM   #34 (permalink)
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na janaa thaa meri kuddariyaan khu dengi tujhy

men kiyaa karoon k mujhy maangny sy nafrat hy

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Old Aug 9th, 2008, 02:55 AM   #35 (permalink)
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YouN ghalat to nahiN chehrooN ka tasur mager
Log vaisay bhi nahiN jaisay nazer aatay haiN

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Ye yaad tha ke duwa karooN par utthey rahey merey haath yuN
jesey khaahishoN ke hajoom meiN kaheeN kho gai teri aarzu
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Old Aug 9th, 2008, 05:19 AM   #36 (permalink)
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Nishaan e SajOod Teri JabeeN Par hUa tO Kya
kOi Aisa Sajda Kar K ZameeN Par NishaaN Rahey

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Old Aug 9th, 2008, 01:25 PM   #37 (permalink)
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ye ghazab kiyaa teri yaad ny mujhy aasatayaa namaaz men

mery wo bhi sajdy qazaa huy, ju adaa huy thhy namaaz men

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Old Aug 10th, 2008, 05:01 PM   #38 (permalink)
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Na ab raqeeb na naseh na gham'gusaar koii
tum aashna thay tou thin aashnaiyan kia kia


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Old Aug 10th, 2008, 05:11 PM   #39 (permalink)
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Ailan-e-marg hoa to us nay bhi keh diya mohsin
Acha hoa mar gaya akser udaas rehta tha

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Old Aug 10th, 2008, 05:20 PM   #40 (permalink)
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Abb jou bichra tou kia royenn judaaii pey tairii..
ye andaisha tou haimain pehli hi mulaqat se tha


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Old Aug 10th, 2008, 05:46 PM   #41 (permalink)
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bohat umda shush







kã§h m€®ã Ðil §h€€§€ý kã ñã høtã
BeInG lOn3lY sId
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Old Aug 10th, 2008, 06:10 PM   #42 (permalink)
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Is kari dhoop maiN kuch dour abhi chalna hai
Rabt itna na barha sayaa deewar k sath

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Old Aug 11th, 2008, 12:21 AM   #43 (permalink)
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Hum Wo Siah Naseeb Hain Tariq Ke Sheher Main
Kholain Dukaan Kafn Ki, Loug Marna Chhor Dain

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Old Aug 11th, 2008, 04:24 AM   #44 (permalink)
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Nama-e-bar tu hi bata, tu nai to dekhay hongay
Kesay hotay hain wo khat jin k jawab atay hain

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Old Aug 11th, 2008, 04:35 AM   #45 (permalink)
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Na Tha Kuch To Khud Tha, Na Hota Kuch To Khuda Hota
Diboya Mujh Ko Honay Ne, Na Hota Main To Kia Hota

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Old Aug 11th, 2008, 09:53 AM   #46 (permalink)
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Ussey daikhne kii jo lau lagi tou naseer daikh hi lain ge hum..
woh hazaar aankh se duur ho wo hazar parda nasheen sahi


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Old Aug 11th, 2008, 10:31 AM   #47 (permalink)
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yoon tu syed bhi ho mirza bhi ho afgaan bhi ho
tum sabhi kuch ho batao tu musalman bhi ho
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Old Aug 11th, 2008, 02:32 PM   #48 (permalink)
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wo mujhko turr k phir jurta rahaa aksar

men osky waasty jesy koi khilunaa thha

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Old Aug 11th, 2008, 02:54 PM   #49 (permalink)
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in hasratoon se kah do kaheen aur ja baseen
itne jaga kahan hai dil-e-dagdar main
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Old Aug 11th, 2008, 03:41 PM   #50 (permalink)
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Nibhatay kis trha aik dosray say dosti
Zameen per mera gher chaand per us ka thikana tha

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Old Aug 11th, 2008, 08:31 PM   #51 (permalink)
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Ab etr bhi maloo to mohobbat ki boo nahi
Wo din hawa hoay jab paseena gulab tha

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Old Aug 12th, 2008, 12:19 AM   #52 (permalink)
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Udaa Aankhon Se Aansu Nahi Nikaltay Hain
Ye Moti'on Ki Tarah Seepion Main Paltay Hain

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Old Aug 12th, 2008, 12:55 AM   #53 (permalink)
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Na qeht -e- aab ka dar tha, na sail -e- aab ka khouf
RutaiN hi aisi theen, badal hi youn barastay thay
Bas itna yaad hai kuch log bik rahay thay zafar
Khaber nahi keh wo mehngay thay ya keh sastay thay

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Old Aug 12th, 2008, 12:58 AM   #54 (permalink)
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yohi besabab na phira karo kisi sham ghar bhi raha karo
woh ghazal ki sachi kitaab hai usay chupkay chupkay parha karo

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Wo To Wo Hai Tumhain Ho Jaye Gi Ulfat Mujh Se
Ek Nazar Tum Mera Mehboob-e-Nazar To Dekho

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Wo jis k honay say zindgi nagma saraii hai
Usay kehna bheegi january phir loot aii hai

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Ye Jo Raat Din Ka Hai Khel Sa Isay Dekh Iss Pe Yaqeen Na Ker
Nahi Aks Koi Bhi Mustaqil Sir-e-Ayena Usay Bhool ja

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Old Aug 12th, 2008, 01:30 AM   #58 (permalink)
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Us ko ehsas dilaya hai to milta hi nahi
Ajnabi tha to her roz mila kerta tha
Ab wo mujh say meri her baat k maini poochay
Jo meri sooch ki tehreer parha kerta tha

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Ek Sheher Tha Kharab Jahaan Koi B|hi Na Tha
Hum Laut Aye, Hum Sa Jahan Koi Bhi Na Tha

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Old Aug 12th, 2008, 01:59 AM   #60 (permalink)
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Us kay chehray ki traf daikha kerna
Or jab karay wo izhar to sehma kerna
Pyar ki barsaat main ghabra'ay rehna
Or judai kay khyal say larza kerna
Mujhay aaj bhi yaad aata hai her rut maiN
Bheegti sarkooN maiN ghooma kerna!!!

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