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Old Aug 3rd, 2008, 01:01 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Rules of Bait Bazi:

1. Shair should be genuine and not your own. Post your own in Bait Bazi — Personal Edition of Sho'ra-e-Gupshup.

2. Dont break the chain and always follow the last letter of the last posted shair.

3. Always mention the last urdu alphabet of your shair.

4. If you know the name of the poet, mention that (for other's knowledge sake).

5. Do not write out the whole ghazal/nazam; only two shairs (i.e. Ruba`i, qit`a) at max will be allowed.

6. Avoid posting film songs.


last shair posted by ...S.786 was

ye ehtemaam-e-chiraaghaan baja sahi,lekin
seher tu hu nhin sakti diye jalaany say.....

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Old Aug 3rd, 2008, 01:12 PM   #2 (permalink)
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yon to galat nahi hai chehron ka tausar bhi magar
log waisay bhi nahi jaise nazar aatay hain

ye again






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Old Aug 3rd, 2008, 11:41 PM   #3 (permalink)
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ye kesay ay'had hotey haiN uper jo neechay saray ay'had toot'tey haiN
khushi k more pe he koeN aa'khir khawab saa'ray toot'tey haiN

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Old Aug 4th, 2008, 12:44 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Nigah-e-Yaas Ko Neend Aa Rahee Hai
Mexa Pe Ashk Bojhal Ho Gaye Hain

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Pal Do Pal Meri Kahani Hai..
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Old Aug 4th, 2008, 01:59 PM   #5 (permalink)
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na etebaar-e-muhubbat,na ikhtiyaar-e-wafa

koi jafa ko bhi tery taras rahaa hugaa.........

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suoz-e-firaaq,yaas-o-alam,iztraab-o-shuoq
kis,kis k meny naaz othaay tamaam raat
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Old Aug 4th, 2008, 07:17 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Ab Ussay Roz Na Sochoo'n Tou Badan Toott'Ta Hay
Umer Guzree Hay Uski Yaad Ka Nasha Kartay ....!

*yay*






Wafaa Ki Laaj Main Usko Mana Laytay Tou Achcha Tha
Anaa Ki Jung Main Aksar Judai Jeet Jaati hay..!!
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Old Aug 5th, 2008, 12:19 AM   #7 (permalink)
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yaa'dooN ki aa'g maiN meri aa'nkhaiN sulag uthieN
raatooN ko soochnay ki aadat na mujhay

"ye'
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Old Aug 5th, 2008, 02:06 AM   #8 (permalink)
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Yay din yay raat yay lamhay achay lagtay hain
TumhaiN soochooN to saray sisilay achay lagtay haiN
Bohot dour tk chalna mager phir bhi waheen rehna
Mujhay tum say tumhi tk dairay achay lagtay haiN

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Old Aug 5th, 2008, 03:46 AM   #9 (permalink)
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Assalamu Alaikum

Naheen tera nashayman, qusr-e-sultani kay gumbad par
Tu shaheen hay, basayra kar, pahaadon kay chataanon par.

"ray"
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Old Aug 5th, 2008, 03:51 AM   #10 (permalink)
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wassalaam,welcom hear

na sawaal-e-wisl,na arz-e-gham,na hikaayaten,na shikaayaten

tery ehd men dil-e-zaar k sabhi ikhtiyaar chaly gayy.................!


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Old Aug 5th, 2008, 09:50 AM   #11 (permalink)
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Yeh hijr hawa bhi dushman hai uss naam k saare rangon kii
wo naam jo maire honton par khushboo ki tarah abad huva


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~ Ge0 PakiStaN..!!
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Old Aug 5th, 2008, 10:03 AM   #12 (permalink)
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eraday jin kay pukhta hoon nazar jin ki khuda par ho
talatum khaiz moonjoon se woh ghabraya nahi kartay
"yee"
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Old Aug 5th, 2008, 10:18 AM   #13 (permalink)
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Yaad Karney Key Siwa Ab Kar Bhi Kya Saktey hAin
BhOol Jaaney Mein tUjhey Nakaam hO Jaaney Key Baad

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Mera Tareeq
Ameerii nahieN
Faqeerii hAi
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Old Aug 5th, 2008, 01:39 PM   #14 (permalink)
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dil mem ab yon tery bhooly huy gham yaad aaty hen

jesy bichray huy kaa,by men sanam aatay haen.......

noon
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Old Aug 5th, 2008, 04:02 PM   #15 (permalink)
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Na jaao uski gum sum saadgi parrr
samandar hai tou wo gehra b hoga


*Alif*
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Old Aug 5th, 2008, 04:33 PM   #16 (permalink)
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Ab yay soochooN to bhanwar zehn main par jatay haiN
Kaisay chehray haiN jo miltay haiN bicher jatay haiN
Mousam - e - zard main ek dil ko bachaooN kaisay
Aisi rut maiN to ghanay pair bhi jhar jatay haiN

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Ye yaad tha ke duwa karooN par utthey rahey merey haath yuN
jesey khaahishoN ke hajoom meiN kaheeN kho gai teri aarzu
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Old Aug 5th, 2008, 04:39 PM   #17 (permalink)
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Na sahiban-e-junoon hain na ehl-e-kashf-o-kamal
hamaaray ehed mein aayiin saqaaffatein kaisiii....
yeh daur-e-be'hunraan haii bacha rakhoo khud
yahaan sadaqateinn kaisii karaamatein kaisiii....


*Yeh*
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Old Aug 6th, 2008, 12:53 AM   #18 (permalink)
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Yay ghum dil ko raas bohot hai
Agerchay bhalay dinooN ki aas bohot hai
Mana k mil nahi saktay tum faslay pay ho
Is dil ka kia kerooN jo udas bohot hai

" Yay "
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Old Aug 6th, 2008, 08:06 AM   #19 (permalink)
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Yeh Dil Bicharrnay Ka Ghum Bhoolay Tou Neend Aa'ey

Zahan Say Tera Khayal Ja'ey Tou Neend Aa'ey

Humaray Seenay Main Tayree Yadoo'n Ki Roshni Hay

Humaray Andar Bhi Raat Chaa'ey Tou Neend Aa'ey

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Old Aug 6th, 2008, 09:29 AM   #20 (permalink)
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Yeh raaz us parr khulay ga jo khud ko pehchane
ke ikk yaqeen ki manzil bhii hai gumaan ke baad


*Daal*
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Old Aug 6th, 2008, 12:07 PM   #21 (permalink)
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Diya Hii Jab Nahii hOga Hawa Kis kO bUjhaaye Gii
Charagh e Raah Main Ab Key jAla Key Hii Nahi Aaya


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Old Aug 6th, 2008, 01:22 PM   #22 (permalink)
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Aankhon ki dehleez pe bhadoon toot ke barsa raat gaye
yadon k guldaan mein jitne phool thay ab tak geele hain


*Noon*
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Naya mousam meri benaii ko tasleem nahiN
Meri aankhooN ko wohi khwaab purana la day
Jis ki ankhaiN mujhay ander say bhi parh sakti hooN
Koi chehra to meray shehr maiN aisa la day

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yahan kissi ko kabhi hasb-e-aarzoo na milaa

kissi ko ham na mily aur koi hamen na milaa

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Old Aug 7th, 2008, 01:26 AM   #25 (permalink)
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ek ishq ka gham afat aur us pay dil afat
ya gham na diya hota ya dil na diya hota

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Old Aug 7th, 2008, 02:48 AM   #26 (permalink)
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ab aur kiya kissi sy marasim barhaay ham

ye bhi buhut hy tujhko agar bhool jaaen ham

meem
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Old Aug 7th, 2008, 09:56 AM   #27 (permalink)
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MohobbatooN kay yay dariya utar na ja'aiN kaheen
Jo dil gulab haiN zakhmooN say bhar na ja'aiN kaheen
Jhalak raha hai jin aankhooN maiN ab wajood mera
Yay aankhaiN ha'ay yay aankhaiN mukar na ja'aiN kaheen

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na men tum say koi ummeed rkhkhon dilnawazi ki

na tum meri taraf dekhuu ghalat andaaz nazron sy

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Yeh jo chaar din ke loug hain inhein Faraz koii kiaa kahay..
wo shikayetein wo hikayatein hamain jin se thin koi aur hai


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Yeh mUhabbat Bhi Kya rOug hAi Faraz
Jis kO bhOoley wO Sada Yaad Aaya


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