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Old Aug 14th, 2008, 06:18 AM   #1 (permalink)
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ik chaand tanha khila raha meri aasmaa se zara paray
mere saath saath safar mei tha meri manzilon se zara paray

teri justujuu ke hisaar se tere khwab tere khayal se
mei wo shaqs tha jo khara raha teri chahaton se zara paray

kabhi dil ki baat kahee na thi jo kahee to wo bhi dabi dabi
mere lafz poore to thay magar thay samaa'aton se zara paray

tu chala gaya mere humsafar zara dekh murd ke tu ik nazar
meri kashtiyan hein jali huwee teri saahilon se zara paray

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Old Aug 14th, 2008, 07:36 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Bohat khoob Jhanjharewali...






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Old Aug 14th, 2008, 03:39 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Old Aug 14th, 2008, 04:11 PM   #4 (permalink)
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ik chaand tanha khila raha meri aasmaa se zara paray

mere saath saath safar mei tha meri manzilon se zara paray

teri justujuu ke hisaar se tere khwab tere khayal se
mei wo shaqs tha jo khara raha teri chahaton se zara paray

kabhi dil ki baat kahee na thi jo kahee to wo bhi dabi dabi
mere lafz poore to thay magar thay samaa'aton se zara paray

tu chala gaya mere humsafar zara dekh murd ke tu ik nazar
meri kashtiyan hein jali huwee teri saahilon se zara paray


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Old Aug 14th, 2008, 10:27 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Old Aug 17th, 2008, 10:42 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Old Aug 17th, 2008, 11:35 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Old Aug 18th, 2008, 03:04 AM   #8 (permalink)
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Chand tanha hai aasman tanha
Dil mila hai kahan kahan tanha

Bujh gae aas chup gaya taara
Thartharata raha dhuwan tanha

Zindage kiya issi ko kehte hain?
Jism tanha hai aur jaan tanha

Hamsafar koi ager mile bhi kahin
Donon chalte rahe tanha tanha

Jalti bujhti roshni ke pare
Simta simta sa ik makan tanha

Raah dekha kare ga sadiyon tak
Chor jaen ge yeh jahan tanha







The only one of its own kind.
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Old Aug 18th, 2008, 03:07 AM   #9 (permalink)
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Old Aug 19th, 2008, 01:33 PM   #10 (permalink)
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Old Aug 27th, 2008, 07:25 PM   #11 (permalink)
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