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Old Aug 19th, 2008, 02:58 AM   #1 (permalink)
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dil mein ab yuun tere bhoolay huwe ghum aate hein
jaese bichray huwe qaabay mei sanam aate hein

ek ek kar ke huwe jaate hein taare raushan
meri manzik ki taraf tere qadam aate hein

kuch hamee ko nehi ehsaan uthane kaa dimaagh
wo to jab aate hein maa'il ba-karam aate hein

aur kuch der na guzre shab-e-furqat se kaho
dil bhi kum dukhta hei wo yaad bhi kum aate hein

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Old Aug 19th, 2008, 03:37 AM   #2 (permalink)
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dil mein ab yuun tere bhoolay huwe ghum aate hein
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umda!







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Old Aug 19th, 2008, 05:09 AM   #3 (permalink)
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ab ke yuN dil ko sazaa dii hamne
us kii har baat bhulaa dii hamne

ek, ek phuul bahut yaad aaya
shaaKh-e-gul jab vo jalaa dii hamne

aaj tak jis pe vo shermaate haiN
baat vo kab kii bhulaa dii hamne

shah’r-e-jahaaN raaKh se aabaad huaa
aag jab dil kii bujhaa dii hamne

aaj phir yaad bahut aaya vo
aaj phir us ko du’aa dii hamne

ko’ii to baat hai us meN “Faiz”
har Khushii jis pe luTaa dii hamne







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Old Aug 19th, 2008, 05:13 AM   #4 (permalink)
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dil mein ab yuun tere bhoolay huwe ghum aate hein

jaese bichray huwe qaabay mei sanam aate hein

ek ek kar ke huwe jaate hein taare raushan
meri manzik ki taraf tere qadam aate hein

kuch hamee ko nehi ehsaan uthane kaa dimaagh
wo to jab aate hein maa'il ba-karam aate hein

aur kuch der na guzre shab-e-furqat se kaho
dil bhi kum dukhta hei wo yaad bhi kum aate hein

faiz ahmad faiz
Yey Nazam ik Teer key tarah hai.....................ju kaman say nikal kar seedha dil main paywast hoo giya................beautiful beautiful poem by faiz and thanks for sharing JJW






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Old Aug 19th, 2008, 05:31 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Old Aug 19th, 2008, 05:44 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Old Aug 19th, 2008, 04:05 PM   #7 (permalink)
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FAIz is my fav poet n this one is nice too







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Old Aug 19th, 2008, 05:40 PM   #8 (permalink)
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"The death from which you flee will truly overtake you: then you will be sent back to the Knower of things secret and open: and He will tell you (the truth of) the things that you did!" (Surat al-Jumu'ah: 8).
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Old Aug 20th, 2008, 01:29 AM   #9 (permalink)
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Old Aug 20th, 2008, 02:46 PM   #10 (permalink)
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Old Aug 21st, 2008, 08:45 AM   #12 (permalink)
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Old Aug 21st, 2008, 05:17 PM   #13 (permalink)
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Old Aug 27th, 2008, 08:20 PM   #14 (permalink)
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Yey Nazam ik Teer key tarah hai.....................ju kaman say nikal kar seedha dil main paywast hoo giya................beautiful beautiful poem by faiz and thanks for sharing JJW
Hanji Muddiji....iss poem mei hei koi khaas baat....its beautiful!






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Old Aug 27th, 2008, 08:21 PM   #15 (permalink)
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ab ke yuN dil ko sazaa dii hamne
us kii har baat bhulaa dii hamne

ek, ek phuul bahut yaad aaya
shaaKh-e-gul jab vo jalaa dii hamne

aaj tak jis pe vo shermaate haiN
baat vo kab kii bhulaa dii hamne

shah’r-e-jahaaN raaKh se aabaad huaa
aag jab dil kii bujhaa dii hamne

aaj phir yaad bahut aaya vo
aaj phir us ko du’aa dii hamne

ko’ii to baat hai us meN “Faiz”
har Khushii jis pe luTaa dii hamne
thanks for ur contribution






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Old Aug 27th, 2008, 08:22 PM   #16 (permalink)
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Old Aug 30th, 2008, 09:49 AM   #17 (permalink)
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