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Old Aug 20th, 2008, 02:18 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Saif ka kalam ju Aziz Mian Qwal or Munni Begam ny gaya hy mujhy buhat pasand hy. Kafi arsy ky bad intikhab main kuch irsal ker rahi hon umeed hy pasand aay ga. Na bhi aay tu perwa nahi

Mujhy azmany waly mujhy azma ky roy
Meri dastan-e-hasrat woh suna suna ke roy

Koi aisa ahle dil hu ju fasany muhubat
Jisy main suna ky roon mujhy woh suna ke roy

Main hun by watan musafir mera nam by basi hy
Ary mera koi bhi nahi hy ju galy laga ker roy

Mery pass sy guzar ker meri batt tak na pochi
Main yeh kaise man jaoon ky woh door ja ke roy

Akhri shyr Aziz Mian ki khtra hy

Abi mujh sy roth ker ju mily thy rasty main
Main unhin mana ky roya woh mujhy mana ky roy









Kisi khabar ka na hona hi "Khushkhabri" hy
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Old Aug 20th, 2008, 02:28 AM   #2 (permalink)
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irsal shukar hai sahi patay par kardia






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bahot ache Gunna...enjoyed it!






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Old Aug 20th, 2008, 03:30 AM   #4 (permalink)
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ye itna kio roya ja raha hy

good one...
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Old Aug 20th, 2008, 04:56 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Saif ka kalam ju Aziz Mian Qwal or Munni Begam ny gaya hy mujhy buhat pasand hy. Kafi arsy ky bad intikhab main kuch irsal ker rahi hon umeed hy pasand aay ga. Na bhi aay tu perwa nahi

Mujhy azmany waly mujhy azma ky roy
Meri dastan-e-hasrat woh suna suna ke roy

Koi aisa ahle dil hu ju fasany muhubat
Jisy main suna ky roon mujhy woh suna ke roy

Main hun by watan musafir mera nam by basi hy
Ary mera koi bhi nahi hy ju galy laga ker roy

Mery pass sy guzar ker meri batt tak na pochi
Main yeh kaise man jaoon ky woh door ja ke roy

Akhri shyr Aziz Mian ki khtra hy

Abi mujh sy roth ker ju mily thy rasty main
Main unhin mana ky roya woh mujhy mana ky roy
Baray Bay Murawat Thay Ju Kabhi Azma Kay Roay Kabhi Dastaan Suna Kay Rooay Oor Gham Ka Madawa Bhee Na Kar Sakay.......................waisay by the way woh baat thee kiya jiss sub inna khul khulaa kay roo rahay thay???


P.S Very nice choice GN Dair Aaeed Puur Darust Aaeed
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irsal shukar hai sahi patay par kardia
To write good english you have to think in english and like wise to write good urdu you have to think in urdu..........pur jub bhee you think in english and then translate it in urdu tu Irsal hee hu ga na post ka meaning
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Old Aug 21st, 2008, 05:18 AM   #7 (permalink)
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bahot ache Gunna...enjoyed it!
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good one...
[quot=muddii]P.S Very nice choice GN Dair Aaeed Puur Darust Aaeed[/quote]
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Old Aug 21st, 2008, 05:19 AM   #8 (permalink)
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ye itna kio roya ja raha hy

good one...
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Baray Bay Murawat Thay Ju Kabhi Azma Kay Roay Kabhi Dastaan Suna Kay Rooay Oor Gham Ka Madawa Bhee Na Kar Sakay.......................waisay by the way woh baat thee kiya jiss sub inna khul khulaa kay roo rahay thay???


P.S Very nice choice GN Dair Aaeed Puur Darust Aaeed
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Patta Tu khyr tab ghalat nahi tha, Bas wasoolnahi kiya Maktoob Ilahy ny







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Old Aug 21st, 2008, 08:38 AM   #10 (permalink)
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nice sharing






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Nice sharing per rona dhona kuch ziyada nahee ho gaya :-)






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