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Old Aug 20th, 2008, 05:16 AM   #1 (permalink)
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maiz chup chaap, ghari band, kitaaben khaamosh
apnay kamray ki udaasi pay taras aata hai
mera kamra jo mere dil ki har ek dharkan ko
saal'ha saal se chup chaap ginay jaata hai

jehd-e-hasti ki kari dhoop se thak jaanay par
jis ki aaghosh ne bakh'sha hai mujhay maaN ka khuloos
jis ki khaamosh inaayat ki suhani yaaden
loriyan ban k mere dil men sama jaati hen
meri tanhai k ehsas ko zaayel karnay
jis ki deewaaren mere pass chali aati hen

ye kitaaben bhi mera saath nahi deetiN aaj
KATES ki nazm, ARASTU k hakeemaana qoal
sang-e-mar'mar ki imaarat ki tarah saakit hen
tu hi kuch baat kar aey mere dharaktay huay dil
tu hi ek mera sahara hai, mera moonis hai
tu hi is sard andhere men charaaghaN kar day
zindagi meri koi baat nahi sun sakti

mujko maloom hai kya beet chuki hai tujh par
mere chehray k sulagtay huay zakhmon ko bhi dekh
meri aankhon pay, meri fikr pay paabandi hai
men usay chaahon bhi to yaad nahi kar sakta
tu usay kho k machal sakta hai, ro sakta hai
aur men lut k bhi faryaad nahi kar sakta

isi aeenay ne dekhay hen hamaray jhagray
yehi zeena hai jahan men ne usay chooma tha
in qameezon men, in uljhay huay roomaaloN men
us k baalon ki mehek aaj bhi aasooda hai
jo kabhi meri thi, inkaar pay bhi meri thi
ab faqat bazm-e-tasavvur men nazar aati hai
raat bhar jaag k likhi hui tehreeroN se
ab bhi un aankhon ki tasveer ubhar aati hai

chaandni khil k nikhar aee hai darwaazay par
oas se bheegtay jaatay hen puraanay gamlay
subh kya jaanay kahan hoti hai, kab hoti hai
jaanay insaan ne kis waqt ye nemat paee
meri qismat men bas ek silsila-e-shaam-o-sahar
mere kamray k muqaddar men faqat tanhaee






Fitrat Meri Ishq'o'Muhabbat - Kismat Meri Tanhaai
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Old Aug 20th, 2008, 06:01 AM   #2 (permalink)
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nice...

one of ma fav..






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Old Aug 20th, 2008, 06:53 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Old Aug 20th, 2008, 11:00 AM   #4 (permalink)
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maiz chup chaap, ghari band, kitaaben khaamosh


apnay kamray ki udaasi pay taras aata hai
mera kamra jo mere dil ki har ek dharkan ko
saal'ha saal se chup chaap ginay jaata hai

jehd-e-hasti ki kari dhoop se thak jaanay par
jis ki aaghosh ne bakh'sha hai mujhay maaN ka khuloos
jis ki khaamosh inaayat ki suhani yaaden
loriyan ban k mere dil men sama jaati hen
meri tanhai k ehsas ko zaayel karnay
jis ki deewaaren mere pass chali aati hen

ye kitaaben bhi mera saath nahi deetiN aaj
KATES ki nazm, ARASTU k hakeemaana qoal
sang-e-mar'mar ki imaarat ki tarah saakit hen
tu hi kuch baat kar aey mere dharaktay huay dil
tu hi ek mera sahara hai, mera moonis hai
tu hi is sard andhere men charaaghaN kar day
zindagi meri koi baat nahi sun sakti

chaandni khil k nikhar aee hai darwaazay par
oas se bheegtay jaatay hen puraanay gamlay
subh kya jaanay kahan hoti hai, kab hoti hai
jaanay insaan ne kis waqt ye nemat paee
meri qismat men bas ek silsila-e-shaam-o-sahar
mere kamray k muqaddar men faqat tanhaee
very nice nazm Asad. luv the description. i love love love my kamra!...lol






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Old Aug 20th, 2008, 11:38 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Apna kamray main to bachaoon ka shoor , beewee key dant phitkar, TV key awaz aur parosion key lawn mower ka ghul ghpara sakoon barbad karta hay






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Old Aug 20th, 2008, 02:42 PM   #6 (permalink)
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best nazam....thanks 4 sharing






suoz-e-firaaq,yaas-o-alam,iztraab-o-shuoq
kis,kis k meny naaz othaay tamaam raat
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Old Aug 20th, 2008, 03:39 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Old Aug 21st, 2008, 03:48 AM   #9 (permalink)
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Apna kamray main to bachaoon ka shoor , beewee key dant phitkar, TV key awaz aur parosion key lawn mower ka ghul ghpara sakoon barbad karta hay
sab kamray aik jesay nahi hotay mirchi jee.
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Old Aug 21st, 2008, 04:31 AM   #10 (permalink)
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Kamray Ki Sahee Tarjumai Ki Hay :~)



Nice sharing






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Anaa Ki Jung Main Aksar Judai Jeet Jaati hay..!!
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