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Old Aug 20th, 2008, 11:32 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Dhoop Kay Saath Giyaa Saath Nibahanaaywala
Abh Kahan Aaiy Ga Voh Laut Kay Aanaywala

Rait Pur Choor Giya Naqsh Hazaroon Apnay
Kissi Pagal Key Tarah Naqsh Mittanay Wala

Sabz Sakhain Kabhi Aaisay Tu Nahee Chitkhee Hain
Kaun Ayya Hai Parindoun Ku Darranaywala

Aariz-e-Sham Key Surkhii Nay Kiya Faash Ussay
Parda-e-Abr Main Tha Aag Laganay Wala

Safar-e-Shab ka Taqaza Hai Mairay Saath Rahoo
Dasht Purr Houl Hai Tuufaan Hai Annaywala

Mujh Ku Dar-Parda Sunata Raha Qissa Apna
Aglay Waqtoun Key Hikayaat Sunnanaywala

Ab Tu Araam Karain Soochti Ankhain Mairee
Raat Ka Akhriii Tara Bhee Hai Jaanaywala
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Old Aug 21st, 2008, 12:00 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Old Aug 21st, 2008, 03:26 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Old Aug 21st, 2008, 08:35 AM   #4 (permalink)
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"The death from which you flee will truly overtake you: then you will be sent back to the Knower of things secret and open: and He will tell you (the truth of) the things that you did!" (Surat al-Jumu'ah: 8).
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Old Aug 21st, 2008, 08:58 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Aariz-e-Sham Key Surkhii Nay Kiya Faash Ussay
Parda-e-Abr Main Tha Aag Laganay Wala

Ab Tu Araam Karain Soochti Ankhain Mairee
Raat Ka Akhriii Tara Bhee Hai Jaanaywala

umdaaa!!
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Old Aug 21st, 2008, 11:52 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Wo sufaid phool si ik dua meray sath sath rahee sadaa
Ye usi ka faiz hai barhaa mai bikhar bikhar k sanwar gaye
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Old Aug 21st, 2008, 12:06 PM   #7 (permalink)
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ap b peenchay peenchay chalay jatey na chatri lay k

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~mujhaY kis jurm ki saza mili k meRi rooh taak hai thaki huwi
maiN apni jaga se hila nahi meRi saans phiR be ukhaR gaye~
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Old Aug 22nd, 2008, 12:08 AM   #8 (permalink)
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buhat khoooob..






Main Pal Do Pal Ka Shayer Hoon
Pal Do Pal Meri Kahani Hai..
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Old Aug 22nd, 2008, 01:11 AM   #9 (permalink)
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Old Aug 22nd, 2008, 01:12 AM   #10 (permalink)
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Old Aug 22nd, 2008, 01:16 AM   #11 (permalink)
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Old Aug 22nd, 2008, 01:16 AM   #12 (permalink)
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Aariz-e-Sham Key Surkhii Nay Kiya Faash Ussay
Parda-e-Abr Main Tha Aag Laganay Wala

Ab Tu Araam Karain Soochti Ankhain Mairee
Raat Ka Akhriii Tara Bhee Hai Jaanaywala

umdaaa!!
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Old Aug 22nd, 2008, 01:17 AM   #13 (permalink)
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Old Aug 22nd, 2008, 01:19 AM   #14 (permalink)
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Aaaaaaaawww purr ik masla hai na the only Umbrella I had was completely destroyed in the hail strom when I visited Naanga Purbat 2 years back....................woh hoti to zaroor chala jaata na.....................

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Old Aug 22nd, 2008, 01:56 AM   #16 (permalink)
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Ye yaad tha ke duwa karooN par utthey rahey merey haath yuN
jesey khaahishoN ke hajoom meiN kaheeN kho gai teri aarzu
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Old Aug 23rd, 2008, 10:08 AM   #18 (permalink)
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Old Aug 23rd, 2008, 02:15 PM   #19 (permalink)
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Old Aug 27th, 2008, 04:22 AM   #21 (permalink)
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Jo kho chuke hain unhe dhoondna to mumkin hai
Jo ja chukay hain unhe koi kis tarha laye...

Nice pick. Like always






Let the Sea be my mother, and the Moon my father;
I will swim with the mermaids forever thereafter....
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Old Aug 30th, 2008, 03:53 AM   #23 (permalink)
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Jo ja chukay hain unhe koi kis tarha laye...

Nice pick. Like always
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~ ... palat k har taraf se kyon nazR us shaks per thehrii?
wafa k silsilo`N kii wo, musalsal inteha thehra ...~
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zabardast muddiji...as always
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Old Sep 4th, 2008, 09:49 AM   #27 (permalink)
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Rait Pur Choor Giya Naqsh Hazaroon Apnay
Kissi Pagal Key Tarah Naqsh Mittanay Wala


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