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Old Sep 20th, 2008, 10:47 PM   #1
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I thought its good to open a thread where every one can share master pieces of their favorite poets, or poems which they think are ever green, the more u read the more u fell in love with them

here i am sharing one of my favorite by Faiz Ahmed Faiz



Tum jo pal ko thehar jaao to ye lamhey bhi
Aaney waalay lamhoN ki amaanat ban jaaeiN
Tum jo thehar jao to ye raat, mehtaab
Ye sabzaa, ye gulaab aur hum donoN ke khwaab
Sab kay sab aisay mubham hooN ke haqeeqat ho jaaeiN
Tum thehar jao kay unwaan ki tafseer ho tum
Tum say talkhi-e-auqaat ka mausam badley
Raat to kia badlay gi, haalaat to kia badleiN gay
Tum jo thehar jaao to meri zaat ka mausam badley
MeherbaaN ho ke na thehro to phir youN thehro
Jaisay pal bhar ko koi khwaab-e-tamanna thehrey
Jaisay darwaish-e-madaa-nosh kay pyaalay meiN kabhi
Aik do pal ke leeyay talkhiy-e-dunya thehrey
Thehar jaao kay madaarat maey-khaaney se
Chaltey chaltey koi aik-aadh subho ho ja'ay
Is sey pehley kay koi lamha-e-aainda ka teer
is tarha aa'ay kay pevasta-e-gulu ho ja'ay!








PS: posting it in green evergreen jo hoi







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Old Sep 20th, 2008, 10:53 PM   #2
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woww sheal wonderful idea ... this poem really is a master piece







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Old Sep 20th, 2008, 11:06 PM   #3
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jo utar kay ziinaa-e-shaam se teri chashm-e-Khush mei samaa gaye
wahi jalate bujhate say mahar-o-maah mere baam-o-dar ko sajaa gaye

ye ajeeb khel hai ishq kaa main nay ap dekhaa ye mojezaa
wo jo lafz mere gumaa.n me.n the vo terii zubaa'n par aa gaye


wo jo geet tum nay sunaa nahi meri umr bhar kaa riyaaz thaa
mere dard kii thi daastaa.N jise tum ha.Nsii me.n u.Daa gaye

wo charaaG-e-jaa.n kabhii jis kii lau na kisii havaa se niguu hui
terii bevafaaye kay vaasavasay usay chupake chupake bujhaa gaye

wo thaa chaa.Nd shaam-e-visaal kaa ke thaa ruup tere jamaal kaa
meri ruuh se merii aa.Nkh tak kisii raushanii mei nahaa gaye

ye jo bandagaan-e-niyaaz hai ye tamaam hai vo lash khari
jinhay zindagii ne aman na dii to tere huzuur me.n aa gaye

terii beruKhii ke dayaar mein main havaa ke saath havaa huaa
tere ainay ki talaash mein mere Khvaab cheharaa ganvaa gaye

tere vaasavaao.n ke fishar mei teraa sharar-e-rang uja.D gayaa
merii Khvaahisho.n ke Gubaar mein mere maah-o-saal-e-vafaa gaye

wo ajiib phuul se lafz the tere ho.nTh jin se mahak uthay
mere dasht-e-Khvaab mein duur tak koi baag jaise lagaa gaye


merii umer say na simat sake mere dil mein itane savaal the
tere paas jitane javaab the terii ik nigaah mein aa gaye






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Old Sep 20th, 2008, 11:12 PM   #4
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thanks shaboo. keep posting






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Old Sep 20th, 2008, 11:20 PM   #5
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Nice thread and beautiful posts


tujhe izhaar-e-muhabbat se agar nafrat hai

tuu ne honToN ko larazne se to rokaa hotaa
be-niyaazii se, magar kaaNptii aavaaz ke saath
tuu ne ghabraa ke miraa naam na puuchaa hotaa
tere bas meN thii agar mash’al-e-jazbaat kii lau
tere ruKhsaar meN gulzaar na bhaRkaa hotaa
yuN to mujh se huii sirf aab-o-havaa ki baateN
apne TooTe hue fiqroN ko to parkhaa hotaa
yuuNhii be-waj’h ThiThakney ki zaruurat kyaa thii
dam-e-ruKhsat maiN agar yaad na aayaa hotaa
teraa ghammaz banaa khud tiraa andaaz-e-khiraam
dil na sambhlaa, to qadmoN ko sambhaala hota
apne badle miree tasviir nazar aa jaati
tuu ne us vaqt agar aaiinaa dekhaa hotaa
hoaslaa tujh ko na thaa mujh se judaa hone kaa
varnaa kaajal tiree aaNkhoN meN na phailaa hotaa

Ahmed Nadeem Qasmi







Imagination is more important than knowledge. For while knowledge defines all we currently know and understand, imagination points to all we might yet discover and create.
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Old Sep 20th, 2008, 11:45 PM   #6
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wah Ali superb






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Old Sep 21st, 2008, 12:26 AM   #7
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Sheal View Post


I thought its good to open a thread where every one can share master pieces of their favorite poets, or poems which they think are ever green, the more u read the more u fell in love with them

here i am sharing one of my favorite by Faiz Ahmed Faiz



Tum jo pal ko thehar jaao to ye lamhey bhi
Aaney waalay lamhoN ki amaanat ban jaaeiN
Tum jo thehar jao to ye raat, mehtaab
Ye sabzaa, ye gulaab aur hum donoN ke khwaab
Sab kay sab aisay mubham hooN ke haqeeqat ho jaaeiN
Tum thehar jao kay unwaan ki tafseer ho tum
Tum say talkhi-e-auqaat ka mausam badley
Raat to kia badlay gi, haalaat to kia badleiN gay
Tum jo thehar jaao to meri zaat ka mausam badley
MeherbaaN ho ke na thehro to phir youN thehro
Jaisay pal bhar ko koi khwaab-e-tamanna thehrey
Jaisay darwaish-e-madaa-nosh kay pyaalay meiN kabhi
Aik do pal ke leeyay talkhiy-e-dunya thehrey
Thehar jaao kay madaarat maey-khaaney se
Chaltey chaltey koi aik-aadh subho ho ja'ay
Is sey pehley kay koi lamha-e-aainda ka teer
is tarha aa'ay kay pevasta-e-gulu ho ja'ay!








PS: posting it in green evergreen jo hoi
Bohat Khoob....







Tuluu Main Bhee Maray Shokhiaa'n To Thee'n Lakin
Mazah Tha Us Main Jo Sa'aat Maray Zawal Ki The
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Old Sep 21st, 2008, 12:31 AM   #8
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Nice thread and beautiful posts


tujhe izhaar-e-muhabbat se agar nafrat hai

tuu ne honToN ko larazne se to rokaa hotaa
be-niyaazii se, magar kaaNptii aavaaz ke saath
tuu ne ghabraa ke miraa naam na puuchaa hotaa
tere bas meN thii agar mash’al-e-jazbaat kii lau
tere ruKhsaar meN gulzaar na bhaRkaa hotaa
yuN to mujh se huii sirf aab-o-havaa ki baateN
apne TooTe hue fiqroN ko to parkhaa hotaa
yuuNhii be-waj’h ThiThakney ki zaruurat kyaa thii
dam-e-ruKhsat maiN agar yaad na aayaa hotaa
teraa ghammaz banaa khud tiraa andaaz-e-khiraam
dil na sambhlaa, to qadmoN ko sambhaala hota
apne badle miree tasviir nazar aa jaati
tuu ne us vaqt agar aaiinaa dekhaa hotaa
hoaslaa tujh ko na thaa mujh se judaa hone kaa
varnaa kaajal tiree aaNkhoN meN na phailaa hotaa

Ahmed Nadeem Qasmi
Bohat Umdah Ali Bohat Umdah .....






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Old Sep 21st, 2008, 12:55 AM   #9
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apanii rusavaa_ii tere naam ka charchaa dekhuu.N


apanii rusavaa_ii tere naam ka charchaa dekhuu.N
ek zaraa sher kahuu.N aur mai.n kyaa kyaa dekhuu.N

niind aa jaaye to kyaa mahafile.n barpaa dekhuu.N
aa.Nkh khul jaaye to tanhaa_ii kaa sahara dekhuu.N

shaam bhii ho ga_ii dhundhalaa ga_ii aa.Nkhe.n bhii merii
bhuulanevaale mai.n kab tak teraa rastaa dekhuu.N

sab zide.n us kii mai.n puurii karuu.N har baat sunuu.N
ek bachche kii tarah se use ha.Nstaa dekhuu.N

mujh pe chhaa jaaye vo barasaat kii Khushbuu kii tarah
ang ang apanaa usii rut me.n mahakataa dekhuu.N

tuu merii tarah se yaktaa hai magar mere habib
jii me.n aataa hai ko_ii aur bhii tujh saa dekhuu.N

mai.n ne jis lamhe ko puujaa hai use bas ek baar
Khvaab ban kar terii aa.Nkho.n me.n utarataa dekhuu.N

tuu meraa kuchh nahii.n lagataa hai magar jaan-e-hayaat
jaane kyo.n tere liye dil ko dha.Dakataa dekhuu.N

Perveen Shakir






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Old Sep 21st, 2008, 11:46 AM   #10
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I thought its good to open a thread where every one can share master pieces of their favorite poets, or poems which they think are ever green, the more u read the more u fell in love with them

here i am sharing one of my favorite by Faiz Ahmed Faiz



Tum jo pal ko thehar jaao to ye lamhey bhi
Aaney waalay lamhoN ki amaanat ban jaaeiN
Tum jo thehar jao to ye raat, mehtaab
Ye sabzaa, ye gulaab aur hum donoN ke khwaab
Sab kay sab aisay mubham hooN ke haqeeqat ho jaaeiN
Tum thehar jao kay unwaan ki tafseer ho tum
Tum say talkhi-e-auqaat ka mausam badley
Raat to kia badlay gi, haalaat to kia badleiN gay
Tum jo thehar jaao to meri zaat ka mausam badley
MeherbaaN ho ke na thehro to phir youN thehro
Jaisay pal bhar ko koi khwaab-e-tamanna thehrey
Jaisay darwaish-e-madaa-nosh kay pyaalay meiN kabhi
Aik do pal ke leeyay talkhiy-e-dunya thehrey
Thehar jaao kay madaarat maey-khaaney se
Chaltey chaltey koi aik-aadh subho ho ja'ay
Is sey pehley kay koi lamha-e-aainda ka teer
is tarha aa'ay kay pevasta-e-gulu ho ja'ay!








PS: posting it in green evergreen jo hoi
Buhat Khub and good idea Sheal






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Old Sep 21st, 2008, 11:48 AM   #11
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jo utar kay ziinaa-e-shaam se teri chashm-e-Khush mei samaa gaye
wahi jalate bujhate say mahar-o-maah mere baam-o-dar ko sajaa gaye

ye ajeeb khel hai ishq kaa main nay ap dekhaa ye mojezaa
wo jo lafz mere gumaa.n me.n the vo terii zubaa'n par aa gaye


wo jo geet tum nay sunaa nahi meri umr bhar kaa riyaaz thaa
mere dard kii thi daastaa.N jise tum ha.Nsii me.n u.Daa gaye

wo charaaG-e-jaa.n kabhii jis kii lau na kisii havaa se niguu hui
terii bevafaaye kay vaasavasay usay chupake chupake bujhaa gaye

wo thaa chaa.Nd shaam-e-visaal kaa ke thaa ruup tere jamaal kaa
meri ruuh se merii aa.Nkh tak kisii raushanii mei nahaa gaye

ye jo bandagaan-e-niyaaz hai ye tamaam hai vo lash khari
jinhay zindagii ne aman na dii to tere huzuur me.n aa gaye

terii beruKhii ke dayaar mein main havaa ke saath havaa huaa
tere ainay ki talaash mein mere Khvaab cheharaa ganvaa gaye

tere vaasavaao.n ke fishar mei teraa sharar-e-rang uja.D gayaa
merii Khvaahisho.n ke Gubaar mein mere maah-o-saal-e-vafaa gaye

wo ajiib phuul se lafz the tere ho.nTh jin se mahak uthay
mere dasht-e-Khvaab mein duur tak koi baag jaise lagaa gaye


merii umer say na simat sake mere dil mein itane savaal the
tere paas jitane javaab the terii ik nigaah mein aa gaye


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Nice thread and beautiful posts


tujhe izhaar-e-muhabbat se agar nafrat hai

tuu ne honToN ko larazne se to rokaa hotaa
be-niyaazii se, magar kaaNptii aavaaz ke saath
tuu ne ghabraa ke miraa naam na puuchaa hotaa
tere bas meN thii agar mash’al-e-jazbaat kii lau
tere ruKhsaar meN gulzaar na bhaRkaa hotaa
yuN to mujh se huii sirf aab-o-havaa ki baateN
apne TooTe hue fiqroN ko to parkhaa hotaa
yuuNhii be-waj’h ThiThakney ki zaruurat kyaa thii
dam-e-ruKhsat maiN agar yaad na aayaa hotaa
teraa ghammaz banaa khud tiraa andaaz-e-khiraam
dil na sambhlaa, to qadmoN ko sambhaala hota
apne badle miree tasviir nazar aa jaati
tuu ne us vaqt agar aaiinaa dekhaa hotaa
hoaslaa tujh ko na thaa mujh se judaa hone kaa
varnaa kaajal tiree aaNkhoN meN na phailaa hotaa


Ahmed Nadeem Qasmi
Beautiful Ali






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Old Sep 21st, 2008, 11:54 AM   #12
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Chasm-e-Num Jaan-e-Shooreeda Kafii Nahee
Tuhmat-e-Ishq Poosheeda Kafii Nahee
Aaj Bazaar Main Pa Bay Joolaan Chaloo
Dast Afshaan Chaloo, Must-o-Raqsaan Chaloo
Khakh Barsar Chaloo, Khun Badamaan Chaloo
Rah Takta Hai Sub Shaher-e-Jaanan Chaloo
Hakim-e-Shaher Bhee, Mujma-e-Aam Bhee
Teer-e-Ilzaam Bhee, Sang-e-Dashnaam Bhee
Subh-e-Nashaad Bhee, Rooz-e-Na Kaam Bhee
Unn Ka Dum Saaz Apnay Siwa Kun Hai
Shaher Jaanan Main Ab Ba Sifaa Kun Hai
Dast-e-Qatil Kay Shayaan Raha Kun Hai
Rikhat-e-Dil Bandh Lou Figaroo Chaloo
Phir Humeain Qatl Hou Aaieen Yaroo Chaloo






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thanks for the nice input muddii






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Old Sep 21st, 2008, 07:09 PM   #14
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Gr8 sharings N Nice effort for Intikhaab Sheal thumbs up







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Old Sep 21st, 2008, 10:07 PM   #15
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Beautiful Sharings Sheal & All..






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Old Sep 22nd, 2008, 12:06 AM   #16
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WOH JO HUM MEIN..TUMM MEIN QARRAR THAAH..
TUMHEIN YAAD HO K NA YAAD HO

WOHI YAANI..WADA NIBHA KA...

TUMHEIN YAAD HO K NA YAAD HO...

WOH JO LUTF MUJHE PE THAAY PESH TARR....
WOH KARAM K THAAH MERE HAAL PERR..

MUJHE YAAD HAI SUBB ZRRA ZRRA.....
TUMHEIN YAAD HO K NAA YAAD HO......!

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Old Sep 22nd, 2008, 12:18 AM   #17
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Waahhh,,,bohat khoobsurat poetry..






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Old Sep 22nd, 2008, 12:36 AM   #18
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kahii.n chaa.Nd raaho.n me.n kho gayaa kahii.n chaa.Ndanii bhii bhaTak gaye
mai.n charaaG vo bhii bujhaa huaa merii raat kaise chamak ga_ii

merii daastaa.N kaa uruuj thaa terii narm palako.n kii chhaanao main
mere saath thaa tujhe jaaganaa terii aa.Nkh kaise jhapak gaye

kabhii ham mile to bhii kyaa mile vahii duuriyaa.N vahii faasale
na kabhii hamaare qadam ba.Dhe na kabhii tumhaarii jhijhak gaye

tujhe bhuul jaane kii koshishe.n kabhii qaamayaab na ho saki'n
terii yaad shaaKh-e-gulaab hai jo havaa chalii to lachak gaye






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Old Sep 22nd, 2008, 03:33 PM   #19
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Kabhi Tum ne yeh bhi Socha
Ke Tumharey Dil-garifta
Tumhein KItna Chahtey Hain ?

Tumhein Zindegi se Barh kar
Jo Aziz hum nay Jana
So, Koi Sabab to Ho ga
Kabhi tum ne yeh bhi Socha

Sar-e-Shaam Muntazir they
kahee'n Neelmeen Ujaaley
Kahee'n Titliyaan Laboon ki
Kahee'n Phool Jaise Aariz
Kahee'n Qumqamoon si Aankhein

Yeh Jo Chaara Gar hamarey
Koi Saa'aat-e-Rafaaqat
Sar-e-Shaam Maangtey they
Unhein Kya Khabar k hum nay
Tumhein Soanp di Hain Raatein
Tumhein Daan ki hain Aankhein

Kabhi Tum ne yeh bhi Socha
Ke Tumhaarey Dil-Garifta
Paa-e-Baam-o-Dar Akeley
Kisi Shama Sokhta se
Yeh jo kar rahey hain Baatein
Tumhein Kitna Chahtey Hain ?

Tumhein Roz-o-Shab ke Dukh mein
Kabhi Bhoolna bhi Chahein
To Kabhii na Bhool Paayein
ke Yeh Ehd-e-Zindegi hai
Jisey Torna bhi Chahein
To Kabhi na Tor na Paayein







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Old Sep 22nd, 2008, 03:44 PM   #20
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bichhray tu qurbaton ki duaa bhi na kar saky

ab k tujhy supurd-e-khudaa bhi na kar sakay


taqseem huky reh gay sad kirchiyon men ham

naam-e-wafaa ka qarz adaa bhi na kar saky


naazuk mizaaj luog thhy ham jesy aainaa

tootay kuchh is tarah k sadaa bhi na karsaky


khush bhi na kar saky tujhy ham apni chaah men

achhi tarah say tujhko khfaa bhi na kar sakay


ham muntazir rahay koi mashq-e-sitam tu huu

tum maslihat shanaas jafaa bhi na kar sakay

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