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  1. Jul 26th, 2001, 06:25 PM #1
    Kulfi_17
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    Adab Everyone,
    I jut wrote this poem yesterday, and would like to share it with everyone tu arz kiya hai ....
    Mujhey ghar yaad ata hai
    jab kali ghataihen cha jati hainh
    aur musam angrai leta hai
    jab halki halki si bondien
    meri khirki say takrati hainh
    mujhey ghar yaad ata hai
    jab subah ki kirnay cha jati hainh
    parandy chachaetey hainh
    aur tandhi hawoon kay jonkhey
    meray cheray say takratien hainh
    mujhey ghar yaad ata hai
    jab raat ki sayahi phalti hai
    taray jhilmilatey hainh
    aur sanatey mey kahin koi dherey say muskarata hai
    mujhey ghar yaad ata hai
    jub bhi phone ki ghanti bagti hai
    koi darwaza khatkatata hai
    ya koi rah chalta ajnabi
    muskara kay hath hilata hai
    mujhey ghar yad ata hai
    jab tanhi ka musam cha jata hai
    aur kuch bhi dil ko na bhata hai
    phir bi kushion mien aur ghum mien
    mujhey ghar yaad ata hai
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  3. Jul 27th, 2001, 01:00 AM #2
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    Wah Kya Baat Hai Kufi G ., aap ki nazam parhi aur ba khuda travel agent tak kheche chale gaye. Bas abhi ticket book karwa kar aya hoon Lahore ke lye. Lahaza nazam pesh karne ka shukria kyoooke is ney waqei mein jadoo dekhaya hai!!

    na pooch haal kisi udaas chehray ka
    har ik shakhs ki apni alag kahani hai
    har ik shakhs ko apna bana kar dekha lia
    milaingay ab na kissi say ye dil main thaani hai

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  4. Jul 27th, 2001, 01:35 PM #3
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    awwwwwwwwwwwwwww kulfi i know how u feel
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  5. Jul 27th, 2001, 03:31 PM #4
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    ..nice flowing nazm..keep it up

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  6. Jul 27th, 2001, 03:36 PM #5
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    Originally posted by Kulfi_17:
    Adab Everyone,
    I jut wrote this poem yesterday, and would like to share it with everyone tu arz kiya hai ....
    Mujhey ghar yaad ata hai
    jab kali ghataihen cha jati hainh
    aur musam angrai leta hai
    jab halki halki si bondien
    meri khirki say takrati hainh
    mujhey ghar yaad ata hai
    jab subah ki kirnay cha jati hainh
    parandy chachaetey hainh
    aur tandhi hawoon kay jonkhey
    meray cheray say takratien hainh
    mujhey ghar yaad ata hai
    jab raat ki sayahi phalti hai
    taray jhilmilatey hainh
    aur sanatey mey kahin koi dherey say muskarata hai
    mujhey ghar yaad ata hai
    jub bhi phone ki ghanti bagti hai
    koi darwaza khatkatata hai
    ya koi rah chalta ajnabi
    muskara kay hath hilata hai
    mujhey ghar yad ata hai
    jab tanhi ka musam cha jata hai
    aur kuch bhi dil ko na bhata hai
    phir bi kushion mien aur ghum mien
    mujhey ghar yaad ata hai
    kulfi gee ap hostel main rahti hain kya anyways vvv nice poem:flwoer1: keep it up

    your lips are keep moving .
    but all i hear is... Blah Blah Blah
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  7. Jul 28th, 2001, 06:03 PM #6
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    bohat achi, very nice.
    keep up the good work kulfi ji.
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  8. Jul 29th, 2001, 09:50 AM #7
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    Aaja k abhe zabt ka mousam nahi guzra
    Aaja k pharooN pe abhe barf jame hai

    khshbo.oN k jazeerooN say fizaaoN ke hadooN tak
    Iss sher maiN sub kuch hai sirf tere kami hai
    The only one of its own kind.
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