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Old Jul 9th, 2000, 05:06 PM   #1 (permalink)  
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Ahh bharti hui aaie ho "sliming center"
"Ahh ko chahiyeh aik umr asar honay tak"
"Dieting" Khail nahin chand dino ka begum
Aik sadi chahiyeh kamray ko kamar honay tak







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Old Jul 9th, 2000, 05:18 PM   #2 (permalink)  
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abey yaar!
Koi to insaan ka baccha banay

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Old Jul 10th, 2000, 06:56 PM   #3 (permalink)  
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Jahan gaey thay khushion key taraanay
muqadar dekhiyey roay waheen per

Hoay masjid sey gum jootay humaray
jahan sey paey thay, khoay waheen per.

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Old Jul 11th, 2000, 01:58 AM   #4 (permalink)  
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Raat ka waqt hai aur masjid bhi hai qareeb
Utthiay jaldi say kay pegham-e-amal laya hoon
ghar main hain filhaal jitnay bhi puranay jootay
app bhi jaa kay badal lain, main badal ayaa hoon
in reply to the last one






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Old Jul 11th, 2000, 02:19 AM   #5 (permalink)  
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Hmmm...

Door se dekha to eik naik larki kaprey suukah rahee thee
passs se ja kar dekha to gaaye dumm helaa rahee thee


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Old Jul 11th, 2000, 04:14 AM   #6 (permalink)  
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Maray ghar paanch bachay ho gayey hain teen saalon main
Mohabbat ki yehi hai ibteda to inteha kia hai
Mera hamsaya lay aya hai apne ghar color TV
Meri Biwi nay poocha "bata teri raza kia hai"

By:Majzoob Chistey!

P.S. Bhai logo!
what da???

pareshaan sahiba app hi kuch inayat ki jiay.
App ki shairy kay to hum fan hain, phir bhi irshad nadarid???






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Old Jul 11th, 2000, 10:46 AM   #7 (permalink)  
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Jootoun se Iqbal ka aik shair yaad aya:

Ishq kay mareezoun ko hay gaalioun se aaram
Daafa-e-murz kay liyay jootay pesh kijiyay








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Old Jul 11th, 2000, 12:04 PM   #8 (permalink)  
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Jootoun say mujhey bhi du shair yaad aay

Woh larki kitni piyari thi, ankh ji ko mainy mari thee
Woh sandle kitni bhari this jo uss nain mujeh ko mari thee







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Old Jul 11th, 2000, 02:44 PM   #9 (permalink)  
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looks like we are heading some where in regards of "joota"






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Old Jul 11th, 2000, 02:49 PM   #10 (permalink)  
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Mai Hoon Yahan,
Tu Hai Wahan,
LifeBoy Hai Jahan,
Tandarustee Hai Wahan.






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Old Jul 11th, 2000, 02:52 PM   #11 (permalink)  
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Quote:
Originally posted by Nausheen:
Mai Hoon Yahan,
Tu Hai Wahan,
LifeBoy Hai Jahan,
Tandarustee Hai Wahan.
Taazgi Bhi to hai!
Lifebouy say nahaiye
Tandrustgi, taazgi paiye







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Old Jul 11th, 2000, 03:05 PM   #12 (permalink)  
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Jootoun se mujhey bhi ek shair yaad aya :

Mai ney tujhey dekha handle badal badal kar,
Terey baap ney mujhey peeta sandle badal badal kar.







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Old Jul 11th, 2000, 03:07 PM   #13 (permalink)  
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Old Jul 11th, 2000, 03:14 PM   #14 (permalink)  
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I guess we hafta change the famous saying:

"Sir mudatay hi olay parray"
To:

"Sir mudatay hi JOOTAY parray"






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Old Jul 11th, 2000, 03:17 PM   #15 (permalink)  
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Aik punjabi sher arz hai:

Sap(SNAKE) Chareya(CRAWLED UP) Sootii Tai(ON A STICK)
Kas Kai Chapaiir(THAPAR) Maraan teri suki hoiee buthi tai(ON UR SKINY FACE) !



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Old Jul 11th, 2000, 03:18 PM   #16 (permalink)  
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Dekha jo zulf-e-yaar main kaghaz ka aik phool
main kot main gulab laga kar chala gaya
powder laga kay cheray pe aaye wo mere ghar
main un kay ghar khizab laga kar chala gaya






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Old Jul 11th, 2000, 03:21 PM   #17 (permalink)  
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Idhar jhaptay, udhar paltay, issay jakrra, ussay pakrra
lahu ko garam rakhnay ke bahanay hain urraanon main
Her aik larki nazar aati hai un ko fakhtaa jaisi
"Uqaabi rooh jab baidar hoti hai jawaanon main"






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Old Jul 11th, 2000, 03:32 PM   #18 (permalink)  
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Aaj aasmaan mein taare aise chamak rahey hain
Aaj aasmaan mein taare aise chamak rahey hain......
jaise kaal chamak rahey thay !!






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Old Jul 11th, 2000, 03:40 PM   #19 (permalink)  
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Kal aasmaan pay taary aisay chamak rahay honge
jaisay aaj chamak rahay hain
jaisay kal chamak rahay thay

What da???






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Old Jul 11th, 2000, 03:45 PM   #20 (permalink)  
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Larki kahan say laaon main shaadi kay waastay
shaiyad kay iss main mere muqaddar ka dosh hai
Azra, Naseem, Kauser-O-Tasneem bhi gayeen
"Ik Shama rah gayi hai, so wo bhi khamosh hai






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