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Old Jan 22nd, 2002, 06:38 PM   #1 (permalink)  
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Hi everyone!

I really love this message board and all of the poetry is very nice. Keep it up.

Meri taraf se ek chotta sa nazraana qabool karen, umeed karti hoon ke ap (parhen ge) aur ap ko acha lage: (Shayad aap ne pehle bhi parha ho.)

~Kaliyon jaisa rang shagufta, phoolon jaisi kaaya hai,
Neenden ur gayin sab logon ki jab se woh shaher mein aaya hai,

Us ke chehre ki narmi se phool jawani maangen,
Us ki roshan aankhon se raaten bhi kahaani maangen,
Chalne ka andaaz hai woh, maujen bhi rawaangi maangen,
Sab ki aankhon par woh rangeen sapna ban ke chhaaya hai,
Neenden ur gayin sab logon ki jab se woh shaher mein aaya hai

Logon ka to kaam hai woh sholon ko hawa dete hain,
Chhoti chhoti baaton ka afsaana bana dete hain,
Woh jis raste se bhi guzre us ko sada dete hain,
Woh ghar se kam hi nikle yeh hum ne ussey samjhaaya hai,
Neenden ur gayin sab logon ki jab se woh shaher mein aaya hai

Mere haathon mein hai jaise us ke haathon ki khushbu,
Meri tanhaai mein jaise us ki baaton ki khushbu,
Mere sheron mein hai jaise us ki saanson ki khushbu,
Us hi ke liye hain ghazlen, nazmen, shayar jis ne humen banaaya hai,
Neenden ur gayin sab logon ki jab se woh shahar mein aaya hai...

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Old Jan 22nd, 2002, 06:51 PM   #2 (permalink)  
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oh wow... wut a coincidence - just listened to it today in Pankaj Udhas' voice.

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Old Jan 22nd, 2002, 11:52 PM   #3 (permalink)  
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nice 1

welcome here

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Old Jan 23rd, 2002, 12:53 AM   #4 (permalink)  
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Wah Ji Wah , Buhat hi Ache , Keep it up







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Old Jan 23rd, 2002, 03:55 AM   #5 (permalink)  
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Buhat khoob ji very nice ghazal keep it up







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Old Jan 23rd, 2002, 09:55 AM   #6 (permalink)  
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Nice 1..... bhouhat khoob.. aur ab hum umeed rakhtyN haiN k aap aainda bhe post karyN gaiN....








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Old Jan 23rd, 2002, 11:21 AM   #7 (permalink)  
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Kya baat hai!
Aap ki pehli he entry zabardast hai. Plz keep it up!


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Old Jan 23rd, 2002, 02:48 PM   #8 (permalink)  
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wow
zabardast hai,
kamaal ka hai,
bohat hi acha hai,

its just zabardast yaar

and welocme aboard

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ke kisse dadi sunatie hai






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Old Jan 23rd, 2002, 04:34 PM   #9 (permalink)  
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Very nice J-e-G

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Old Jan 24th, 2002, 04:16 AM   #10 (permalink)  
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bery bery bery bery bery bery
Guuuuuuuuuuud

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