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May 1st, 2009, 07:10 PM
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Asalam-u-Alaikum !
How are you my friendz hope fine ! So I am starting this new Bait Baazi Edition in which we "PICK ANY WORD FROM SHER" and post the next sher using that word !
For example:
Tum Merii Dosti Ka Dam Na Bharo
Aasmaa.N Muddaii Na Ho Jaaye
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Dosti Jab Kisi Se Ki Jaaye
Dushmano'n Ki Bhi Raaye Li Jaaye
Rules of Bait Bazi:
1. Shair should be genuine and not your own. Post your own in Bait Bazi — Personal Edition of Sho'ra-e-Gupshup.
2. Dont break the chain and always mention/highlight the chosen letter from the last posted shair.
3. If you know the name of the poet, mention that (for other's knowledge sake).
4. Do not write out the whole ghazal/nazam; only two shairs (i.e. Ruba`i, qit`a) at max will be allowed.
Love is unconditional, relationships are not BeInG lOn3lY sId
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May 1st, 2009, 07:24 PM
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jab bhii aatii hai terii yaad kabhii shaam ke baad
aur baRhi jaatii hai afsurdaadilii shaam ke baad
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May 2nd, 2009, 01:04 PM
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Hai Bus Ke Her Ik Unn Ke Isharay Main Nishaan Aur
Kertay Hain Muhabbat To Guzarta hai Gumaan Aur
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May 2nd, 2009, 01:19 PM
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Roz jeeta hoon,roz marta hon
Jab tere shaher se guzarta hoon
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May 2nd, 2009, 01:25 PM
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aafat ki tank jhank , qayamat si shookiyaan
phir chahtay hovay hum say koi bad-gumaan na ho
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May 2nd, 2009, 04:21 PM
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kiyaa na zikr bhii jis kaa tamaam umr kabhii
hamaare kaam bahut vo malaal aayaa hai
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May 3rd, 2009, 05:15 AM
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zikr jab chir gaya qayamat ka
baat pahunchi teri jawani tak
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May 3rd, 2009, 05:34 AM
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Zikr Uss Pari'Wash Ka, Aur Phir Bayaan Apna
Ban Gaya Raqeeb Aakhir, Tha Jo Raz'daan Apna
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May 3rd, 2009, 04:23 PM
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zikr i shab firaq say wehshat usay bi thi
meri tarah kisi se muhabbat usay bi thi
mujh ko bi shouq ha nit naye chehron ki deed ka
kuch rasta badal ker chalne ki aadat usay bi thi
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May 3rd, 2009, 04:45 PM
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Wo silsilay wo shoq wo nisbat nahi rahi...
Ab zindagi main hijr ki vehshat nahi rahi...
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May 4th, 2009, 01:34 PM
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hijr ka din aur itna mukhtasir
din ginay jatay thay is din keliye
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May 4th, 2009, 03:30 PM
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Fursat e Gunaah Mili Wo Bhi Chaar Din
Dekhay Hain Hum Ne Hoslay Parwardigaar Ke
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May 4th, 2009, 03:48 PM
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And I walk the road alone
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Chaar din ki chandi phir andheri raat hai..
Aagay nahin aata, meri kiya hi baat hai 
okay sorry..serious one
Kon apna tha, hum kis par anayat kartay
Hum ko hasrat rahi, ke hum bhi mohabat kartay
Tum ne samjha hi nahin iss qabil, warna
Tujh se hum ishq nahin , teri ibaadat kartay.. ..
Adaab araz hai..
Millay woh Dill mujhay jo pyaar ke qabil ho, Meray qabil ho... :wub: Jissay dhoonda hai nazron ne wohi masoom sa dill ho :wub:
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May 4th, 2009, 07:32 PM
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Usi Ishq say,usi chah say,usi piyar say,usi maan say
Meray hath may ik gulab do,may boht dinoon sy udas hon
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May 5th, 2009, 02:26 AM
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And I walk the road alone
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I am not sure if the wording r correct.. but.
Yeh Ishq bhi kiya cheese hai, Issay tou apnaey koi aur hai..
Mein Chahoon kissi aur ko, mujhay yaad aaey koi aur hai .. 
Very beautiful and meaningful and cruel tooo .. all at same time 
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May 5th, 2009, 02:53 AM
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Aa He Basay Hain Aap Meri Zaat Main Ager
Mujh Ko Meray Wujood Se Bahar Na Phenkeay
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May 5th, 2009, 05:18 AM
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And I walk the road alone
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^ jao phaink diya.. kar lo jo karna hai 
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May 5th, 2009, 02:30 PM
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And I walk the road alone
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Apnay hathon se tarashay hooway pathar ke sanam..
Aaj Buth khanay mein bhagwaan bannay baithay hain ...
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May 6th, 2009, 03:35 AM
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Aaj Yuun Be'Sabab Udaas Hai Jee
Ishq Hota To Koi Baat Bhi Thi
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May 6th, 2009, 05:21 AM
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And I walk the road alone
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Ab dill ke waswason ka koi kiya karay illaj
Unn ki wafa ka aaj bhi humko yaqeen hai ...
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