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Old May 8th, 2009, 01:51 PM   #21 (permalink)  
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un say mehfil mein bhi mulaqaat to kam na thi mager
uff woh aadab jo bertey gaye tanhai mein
aisa laga kay bal kha kay dhanak toot gai
us nay waqfa jo lia naaz say angrai mein
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Old May 9th, 2009, 06:41 AM   #22 (permalink)  
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tu es qadar mujhy apny qareeb lagta ha

tujhy alag se sochu to ajeeb lagta ha.
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Old May 10th, 2009, 02:30 AM   #23 (permalink)  
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is qadar toot ke tum pe hamain payaar aata hai
apni baanhon mai bharain aur maar he dalain tum ko






Saahil ki tarah jiyo..
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Old May 13th, 2009, 09:22 AM   #24 (permalink)  
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thanku lonely, nice poetry guys

jaan denay kaa kahaa mainey to hans kar bole
tum salamat raho her rooz ke marney waley
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Old May 14th, 2009, 03:05 AM   #25 (permalink)  
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Love is unconditional, relationships are not
BeInG lOn3lY sId
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Old May 16th, 2009, 06:39 PM   #26 (permalink)  
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Ek Pal Jo Ussay Bhoolnay ka Sochta HooN

Mayri Saansain Mayree Taqdeer Say Ulajh Jaati haiN






Mukhtasir Lafzoo'n Main Hay Ab Yeh Mizaaj e Dosti
Raabta Sab Say Hay ' Laykin Wastaa Koi Naee'N
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Old May 16th, 2009, 06:53 PM   #27 (permalink)  
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Phir Itnay Mayoos Kiyoon Ho Uski Batwafai Pay NASIR

Tum Khud Hee Tou Kahtay Thay K Woh Sab Say Juda Hay
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Old May 16th, 2009, 07:22 PM   #28 (permalink)  
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Tum Sa Ho Koi Jahaan Main Magar Hobahoo Na Ho

Aur Mayri Tarah Kisi Ko Tayri Justujoo Na Ho

Aarzoo Hay Yahi Keh Bas Rahay Tayri Aarzoo

Aur Iss Aarzoo Kay Baad Koi Aarzoo Na Ho



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Old May 16th, 2009, 08:43 PM   #29 (permalink)  
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this is such a beautiful beautiful thread. her ik sher pe waari jaun mei! lovely!






~wo lutt jaye jo humse dil ko lagaye~
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Old May 17th, 2009, 09:23 AM   #30 (permalink)  
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Aaj yeh tanhai ka ehsaas kuch hadd se zyada hai,
tere sang na hone ka malaal kuch hadd se zyada hai
phir bhi kaat rahe yeh jiye jane ki saza yehi sochkar,
shayad is zindagani mein mere gunaah kuch hadd se zyada hai.






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Old May 20th, 2009, 07:06 AM   #31 (permalink)  
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good ones Pk bro ! N thanks Jw !
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Old May 20th, 2009, 07:07 AM   #32 (permalink)  
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Aaj yeh tanhai ka ehsaas kuch hadd se zyada hai,
tere sang na hone ka malaal kuch hadd se zyada hai
phir bhi kaat rahe yeh jiye jane ki saza yehi sochkar,
shayad is zindagani mein mere gunaah kuch hadd se zyada hai.

yeh verse romantic ya pyaar bhara kis angle se hai ?
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Old May 21st, 2009, 01:50 PM   #33 (permalink)  
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Nain Jaan ye jahan aisa nain hai
ye bandhan tootney wala nain hai

na uterey ga teray pyar ka rang kabhi
ye dheema hai magar ye kucha nain hai






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Old May 21st, 2009, 07:07 PM   #34 (permalink)  
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thanku lonely, nice poetry guys

jaan denay kaa kahaa mainey to hans kar bole
tum salamat raho her rooz ke marney waley

haha...nice one!






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Old May 21st, 2009, 07:09 PM   #35 (permalink)  
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Aaj yeh tanhai ka ehsaas kuch hadd se zyada hai,
tere sang na hone ka malaal kuch hadd se zyada hai
phir bhi kaat rahe yeh jiye jane ki saza yehi sochkar,
shayad is zindagani mein mere gunaah kuch hadd se zyada hai.
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yeh verse romantic ya pyaar bhara kis angle se hai ?

I think it is more pyaar bhara angle but then I guess piyar bhara angel can turn into a romantic angel...
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Old May 21st, 2009, 07:36 PM   #36 (permalink)  
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Nice Going $id & All..
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Old May 22nd, 2009, 08:48 AM   #37 (permalink)  
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Thanks Aryaan bro






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Old May 28th, 2009, 07:16 AM   #38 (permalink)  
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Aaghaaz Mainay Kiya Tha Tum Ikhtitaam Kardo
Jab Chaaho Mayray Jazboo'n Ko Bay'Naam Kardo
Baat Agar Zarf Ki Hay Tou Youn Karlo !
Tum Jeet Jao Haar Mayray Naam Kardo
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Old May 28th, 2009, 07:22 AM   #39 (permalink)  
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Us Say Muhabbat Ka Taqaza Tou Yeh Hay Faraz !!
Woh Jaan Mangey Aur Dil Dharrakna Chorr Day






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Old May 28th, 2009, 07:29 AM   #40 (permalink)  
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Jo Jaan Say Bhi Pyaray Thay Woh Log Nazar Say Door Howay

Ek Tees See Dil Main Utth'tee Hay Ab Yadoo'n Ko Dohraanay Say

Ay Maut Thaher Zara Aakhir Main Usko Daikh Tou Loon

Baat Faqat Ek Pal Ki Hay Inkaar Nahi Mar Jaanay Say






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