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Jun 19th, 2009, 12:47 PM
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Senior Member
Join Date: Nov 2, 2008 - 11:53 am
Location: Abu Dhabi
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Aisa lagta hai zindagi tum ho
ajnabi jaise ajnabi tum ho
ab koi arzoo nahin baaki
justaju meri aakhri tum ho
main zamin par ghana andhera hun
asmanon ki chandni tum ho
doston se vafaa ki ummeden
kis zamaane ke aadmi tum ho
Ishq samjhe the jise, wo tha bus narasai ka rishta
mere aur us ke darmian nikla umar bhar ki judai ka rishta.
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Jun 19th, 2009, 12:55 PM
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Channel Manager Arts & Culture
Join Date: Jan 15, 2002 - 1:00 am
Location: Middle of Nowhere
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Lovely 
The heart is the only broken instrument that works.
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Jun 19th, 2009, 02:34 PM
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Member
Join Date: May 30, 2009 - 1:05 pm
Location: HAM AAP KE DIL MEIN REHTAY HAIN
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one the best...ever green..waah
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Jun 20th, 2009, 12:24 AM
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tHe FaLLiBLe
Join Date: Oct 25, 2008 - 5:45 am
Location: Ham wahan hain jehan se hum ko bhi, kuch hamari khabar nahi aati
Posts: 1,093
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Last shair is a bitter reality....thanks for sharing...
Saahil ki tarah jiyo..
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Jun 20th, 2009, 03:28 AM
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Moderator Poetry Forum
Join Date: Mar 9, 2006 - 6:35 am
Location: Neverland
Posts: 7,729
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Cute flow in ghazal umda sharing T.naam 
Love is unconditional, relationships are not BeInG lOn3lY sId
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Jun 20th, 2009, 10:46 AM
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Senior Member
Join Date: Nov 2, 2008 - 11:53 am
Location: Abu Dhabi
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Thanx all jee
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Jun 20th, 2009, 10:51 AM
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Senior Member
Join Date: Jan 26, 2007 - 10:47 pm
Posts: 567
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buhat umda. sweet as rusgulla.
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Jun 20th, 2009, 11:43 AM
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Senior Citizen
Join Date: Apr 13, 2007 - 5:38 am
Location: Karachi
Posts: 15,541
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buhat khoob..
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Jun 28th, 2009, 05:30 PM
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SaNa ds *MaGiC oF BeAuTy*
Join Date: May 11, 2009 - 6:25 am
Location: dubai
Posts: 3,993
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doston se vafaa ki ummeden
kis zamaane ke aadmi tum ho
nice 1
!!!!!!!TAkdeer SY ZAIDA AUR NaSeEb SE kam,,KABHI KISI KO zAiDa YaN KaM NAI MILTA!!!!!!!!
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Jun 28th, 2009, 06:11 PM
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Senior Member
Join Date: Sep 5, 2004 - 7:10 pm
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Bohat khoob Tere_Naam...
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Jun 29th, 2009, 10:34 AM
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Senior Member
Join Date: Nov 2, 2008 - 11:53 am
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shukria
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Jul 8th, 2009, 09:57 PM
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Senior Member
Join Date: Sep 28, 2005 - 8:09 pm
Location: earth
Posts: 3,642
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nice n short....
Kisi ko panay ki chahat MOHABBAT toh nahi.................!
~~**Mere Naseeb nae meri khuahish ko kabhi samjha hi nahi**~~
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Jul 9th, 2009, 10:01 AM
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Senior Member
Join Date: May 24, 2006 - 6:32 am
Posts: 4,423
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doston se vafaa ki ummeden
kis zamaane ke aadmi tum ho
You can not change the past but you can ruin the present by worrying about the future.
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Jul 9th, 2009, 10:59 AM
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Senior Member
Join Date: Nov 2, 2008 - 11:53 am
Location: Abu Dhabi
Posts: 887
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Thanx all
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Jul 9th, 2009, 06:32 PM
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Senior Member
Join Date: Jan 6, 2009 - 4:31 pm
Location: Ghar
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bohat khoob
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