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Old Jun 24th, 2009, 01:52 AM   #1 (permalink)  
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Came across this very nice poem, a very thought provoking and very near to reality of today.

I hope you are able to read the roman urdu, i tried to keep it clear n easy to read.


Sunna hai jungalon ka bhi koi dastoor hota hai
Sunna hai sher ka jab pait bhar jaaey
tou woh hamla nahin karta..

Sunna hai jab kissi naddi ke paani mein
Bey ke ghonslay ka gandumi saaya larzta hai
tou naddi ki ro-pehli machliyaan issko
parosi maan laithee hain...

Hawa ke tez jhonkay jab darakhton ko hillatay hain
tou Maina apnay ghar ko bhool kar
Kaway ke andon ko parron mein thaam laithi hai

Sunna ha ghonslay se jab koi bacha girray tou
saara jungle jaag jaata hai

Naddi mein baar aajaey
koi pull toot jaaey
tou kissi lakree ke takhtay parr
gulehri, saanp, cheeta aur bakri
saath hotay hain...

Sunna hai jungle ka bhi koi dastoor hai

Khudawand Jaleel O Moatabir, Daana o Beena, Munsif o Akbar,
Humaray shehar mein ab
Jungalon ka hi koi dastoor naafiz kar.........








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Old Jun 24th, 2009, 01:53 AM   #2 (permalink)  
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Old Jun 24th, 2009, 01:54 AM   #3 (permalink)  
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lol but did u understand too ?
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Old Jun 24th, 2009, 02:36 AM   #4 (permalink)  
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Thats amazing FT, really good. I dont understand some words like "baar" & "bey".

Citing the lack of compassion in nature using instances that are against the reflexes of animals, and then using it to ask for more understanding in human setups. pretty sad... So the chance of any compassion in humans is as much as any of the animals acting in this way.

The writer is experiencing disillusionment.
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Old Jun 24th, 2009, 05:11 AM   #5 (permalink)  
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Came across this very nice poem, a very thought provoking and very near to reality of today.

I hope you are able to read the roman urdu, i tried to keep it clear n easy to read.


Sunna hai jungalon ka bhi koi dastoor hota hai
Sunna hai sher ka jab pait bhar jaaey
tou woh hamla nahin karta..

Sunna hai jab kissi naddi ke paani mein
Bey ke ghonslay ka gandumi saaya larzta hai
tou naddi ki ro-pehli machliyaan issko
parosi maan laithee hain...

Hawa ke tez jhonkay jab darakhton ko hillatay hain
tou Maina apnay ghar ko bhool kar
Kaway ke andon ko parron mein thaam laithi hai

Sunna ha ghonslay se jab koi bacha girray tou
saara jungle jaag jaata hai

Naddi mein baar aajaey
koi pull toot jaaey
tou kissi lakree ke takhtay parr
gulehri, saanp, cheeta aur bakri
saath hotay hain...

Sunna hai jungle ka bhi koi dastoor hai

Khudawand Jaleel O Moatabir, Daana o Beena, Munsif o Akbar,
Humaray shehar mein ab
Jungalon ka hi koi dastoor naafiz kar.........

Jis shayar ki bhi takhleeq hai bohat he sachi takhleeq hai ! Thanks alot F.tale for sharing such a gr8 taunt on current situation of our cities !






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Old Jun 24th, 2009, 01:58 PM   #6 (permalink)  
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Old Jun 24th, 2009, 04:15 PM   #7 (permalink)  
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Old Jun 24th, 2009, 06:02 PM   #8 (permalink)  
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Bohat bohat khoob....
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Old Jun 24th, 2009, 11:26 PM   #9 (permalink)  
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ITS AMAZING...DIL HILA DIA HAI IS POEM NE....LEKIN INSHALLAH HAM YE SAB THEEK KARAIN GE...KHATRAAT KA SMANA KARAIN GE...SAB DUA KARIAN KE HAMARA MULK MEHFOOZ RAHAY
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Old Jun 24th, 2009, 11:39 PM   #10 (permalink)  
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thanks guys... Its truly a nice one and lesson for the ppl of the world and not only for Pakistan. May Allah have His mercy on all of us.. ameen
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Old Jul 4th, 2009, 06:52 AM   #11 (permalink)  
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Very nice poetry
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