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Jun 28th, 2009, 04:24 PM
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Ussay kaho ke bohat na'murad shay hai junoo'n
Ussay kaho ke mujhe hai bohat junoo'n uss ka
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Jun 28th, 2009, 04:41 PM
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koN dil'aaN dee'yaN janaY
Join Date: Sep 19, 2002 - 4:10 pm
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Beautiful me always think u female 
~BadlooN peR baseRa~
/)/)..(\(\
( ._.).(._. ) o(_(')(')..(')(')_)o
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Jun 28th, 2009, 04:47 PM
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SaNa ds *MaGiC oF BeAuTy*
Join Date: May 11, 2009 - 6:25 am
Location: dubai
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nice jii
!!!!!!!TAkdeer SY ZAIDA AUR NaSeEb SE kam,,KABHI KISI KO zAiDa YaN KaM NAI MILTA!!!!!!!!
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Jun 29th, 2009, 01:27 PM
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thx
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Jun 29th, 2009, 01:46 PM
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v.good jee
Ishq samjhe the jise, wo tha bus narasai ka rishta
mere aur us ke darmian nikla umar bhar ki judai ka rishta.
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Jun 30th, 2009, 01:13 PM
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Jo bhulaey na bhoolay
Join Date: Apr 12, 2007 - 12:32 pm
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nice
"The death from which you flee will truly overtake you: then you will be sent back to the Knower of things secret and open: and He will tell you (the truth of) the things that you did!" (Surat al-Jumu'ah: 8).
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Jun 30th, 2009, 01:53 PM
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Senior Citizen
Join Date: Apr 13, 2007 - 5:38 am
Location: Karachi
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its beautifully read.. the music is very beautiful.. mera fav song.. 
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Jul 3rd, 2009, 02:29 PM
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thx all
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Jul 3rd, 2009, 02:56 PM
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Moderator Voice Gallery, Fashion & Beauty Forum
Join Date: Feb 28, 2008 - 8:26 pm
Location: UK
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Very nicely read
Hamain maat dhondna duniya ki bheed main... Hum milein ge tumhain tumhari parchayi main
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Jul 3rd, 2009, 03:42 PM
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Join Date: Jan 6, 2003 - 11:08 pm
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nice work.
But you need to work on voice clarity (maybe it was because of the background music) it looks like you were chewing your words.
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Jul 8th, 2009, 09:53 PM
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Join Date: Sep 28, 2005 - 8:09 pm
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hi dead soul....very nice..keep it up....
yahan toh koi bhi ni badla....!!!
Kisi ko panay ki chahat MOHABBAT toh nahi.................!
~~**Mere Naseeb nae meri khuahish ko kabhi samjha hi nahi**~~
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Jul 9th, 2009, 07:36 PM
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Moderator Poetry Forum
Join Date: Mar 9, 2006 - 6:35 am
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Nice job man  long tym no c !
Love is unconditional, relationships are not BeInG lOn3lY sId
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Jul 10th, 2009, 05:15 PM
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Senior Member
Join Date: Jan 6, 2009 - 4:31 pm
Location: Ghar
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bohat khoobsurat choice..
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Jul 11th, 2009, 12:06 AM
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Channel Manager Arts & Culture
Join Date: Jan 15, 2002 - 1:00 am
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WOW... very nice
The heart is the only broken instrument that works.
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Jul 11th, 2009, 06:29 AM
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Moderator Poetry Forum
Join Date: Mar 1, 2007 - 3:39 am
Location: Earth - Universe
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nice effort
******
Ye yaad tha ke duwa karooN par utthey rahey merey haath yuN
jesey khaahishoN ke hajoom meiN kaheeN kho gai teri aarzu
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