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Jun 30th, 2009, 09:44 AM
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SaNa ds *MaGiC oF BeAuTy*
Join Date: May 11, 2009 - 6:25 am
Location: dubai
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kabhi waqt mile tu a jao....
hum jheel kinare ja bethen.......
tum apne sukh ki baat kero....
hum apne dukh ki baat karon....
aur un lamhon ki baat karein.....
jo sung tumhare beet gaye..........
aur ehd-e-khazan ki nazar huye.....
in sabz ruton ke daman main.......
hum dosti ki khsbhoo mehkayen...
in bikhre sab nazaron ko.......
hum ankhon main tasveer keren.....
phir apni dosti ke jado se.............
hum lamhon mai khoo jainyyy....
!!!!!!!TAkdeer SY ZAIDA AUR NaSeEb SE kam,,KABHI KISI KO zAiDa YaN KaM NAI MILTA!!!!!!!!
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Jun 30th, 2009, 10:37 AM
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Senior Member
Join Date: Nov 2, 2008 - 11:53 am
Location: Abu Dhabi
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Zabardast jee
Ishq samjhe the jise, wo tha bus narasai ka rishta
mere aur us ke darmian nikla umar bhar ki judai ka rishta.
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Jun 30th, 2009, 11:39 AM
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SaNa ds *MaGiC oF BeAuTy*
Join Date: May 11, 2009 - 6:25 am
Location: dubai
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thnx jii
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Jun 30th, 2009, 12:32 PM
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Channel Manager Arts & Culture
Join Date: Jan 15, 2002 - 1:00 am
Location: Middle of Nowhere
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very nice 
The heart is the only broken instrument that works.
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Jul 1st, 2009, 01:53 AM
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SaNa ds *MaGiC oF BeAuTy*
Join Date: May 11, 2009 - 6:25 am
Location: dubai
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thnx
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Jul 1st, 2009, 03:13 PM
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Junior Member
Join Date: Jun 17, 2009 - 11:11 pm
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very nice!
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Jul 3rd, 2009, 05:10 AM
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SaNa ds *MaGiC oF BeAuTy*
Join Date: May 11, 2009 - 6:25 am
Location: dubai
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thnx,,,
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Jul 3rd, 2009, 08:44 AM
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Junior Member
Join Date: Jun 23, 2009 - 1:51 pm
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nice sharing
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Jul 3rd, 2009, 10:56 PM
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Member
Join Date: May 30, 2009 - 1:05 pm
Location: HAM AAP KE DIL MEIN REHTAY HAIN
Posts: 404
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aww..kitni masoom aur pyari nazm hai na
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Jul 4th, 2009, 06:45 AM
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Junior Member
Join Date: Jun 30, 2009 - 3:00 am
Location: Muscat, Oman
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Very nice
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Jul 4th, 2009, 06:49 PM
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Senior Member
Join Date: Sep 5, 2004 - 7:10 pm
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Good One Sana..
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Jul 5th, 2009, 02:54 PM
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Moderator Poetry Forum
Join Date: Mar 9, 2006 - 6:35 am
Location: Neverland
Posts: 7,730
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kya kehne umda
Love is unconditional, relationships are not BeInG lOn3lY sId
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Jul 6th, 2009, 12:47 PM
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Member
Join Date: Aug 20, 2008 - 9:56 am
Location: gher
Posts: 386
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v nice
bala ki afra-tafri hai hamari zaat me lekin
humein to be-dehani me b aap ka khyal rehta hai....
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Jul 7th, 2009, 09:06 AM
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Senior Member
Join Date: May 24, 2006 - 6:32 am
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nice
You can not change the past but you can ruin the present by worrying about the future.
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Jul 7th, 2009, 11:06 AM
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Banned
Join Date: Jul 5, 2009 - 12:06 pm
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Good short poem
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