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Old Jul 1st, 2009, 03:38 AM   #1 (permalink)  
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Rules of Bait Bazi:

1. Shair should be genuine and not your own. Post your own in Bait Bazi — Personal Edition of Sho'ra-e-Gupshup.

2. Dont break the chain and always follow the last letter of the last posted shair.

3. Always mention the last urdu alphabet of your shair.

4. If you know the name of the poet, mention that (for other's knowledge sake).

5. Do not write out the whole ghazal/nazam; only two shairs (i.e. Ruba`i, qit`a) at max will be allowed.







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Yuun buhat hans ke mila tha lekin
dil he dil main wo khafa ho jesay

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Old Jul 1st, 2009, 04:00 AM   #2 (permalink)  
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yun TARKEY muhabbat teri DIL LAGI ho shahyad...
teray seenay mai bhi AGG lagii ho shayad...
na mje AZMA itna k JAAN se guzar jaonn..
meray WAJOOD mai teri hi jann ho shayad...






!!!!!!!TAkdeer SY ZAIDA AUR NaSeEb SE kam,,KABHI KISI KO zAiDa YaN KaM NAI MILTA!!!!!!!!
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Old Jul 1st, 2009, 04:00 AM   #3 (permalink)  
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last word is daal..d
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Old Jul 1st, 2009, 04:14 AM   #4 (permalink)  
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yeh gumbad-i-menai, yeh alam-i-tanhai
mujh ko to dara daiti hay, is dasht ki pehnai
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Old Jul 1st, 2009, 04:15 AM   #5 (permalink)  
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oh, sorry it took me a long time to write that in english and sanadubai posted before me, so skip mine pls.

last letter remains "d".
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Old Jul 1st, 2009, 04:20 AM   #6 (permalink)  
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dil ko reyza reyza karna HASRAT thi unki
yh ap kya janoo kya FITRAT thi unki...
hum to unki AKHOON mi ANSOO seh nai sktay//
par hum ko rula dyna ADAT thi unki.....
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Old Jul 1st, 2009, 11:05 AM   #7 (permalink)  
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Yunhi bewajh THiTaknay ki zaroorat kia thi
Dam e ruKHsat maiN agar yaad na AAya hota

Hosla tuJH ko na THa muJH say juda honay ka
Warna kaajal teray AAnKHoN maiN na PHaila hota
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Old Jul 1st, 2009, 04:17 PM   #8 (permalink)  
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Aasoodgi kahiyay keh thakn kahiyay safer ki
Ek umer samunder ki trha hum nay baseer ki
Sehra main bhatakna to kabhi neend main chalna
Raikha thi meray hath main kaisi yay safer ki

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Ye yaad tha ke duwa karooN par utthey rahey merey haath yuN
jesey khaahishoN ke hajoom meiN kaheeN kho gai teri aarzu
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Old Jul 2nd, 2009, 12:15 AM   #9 (permalink)  
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Ye judaion ke rastay bari duur tak gaye hain
jo gaya wo phir na aaya meri baat maan jao

'Wow'






Em a Bunny Now..
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Old Jul 2nd, 2009, 03:28 PM   #10 (permalink)  
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Wo is kamaal say khela tha ishq ki bazi
main apni fatha samjhta tha maat honay tuk


" Kaf"











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Old Jul 2nd, 2009, 04:04 PM   #11 (permalink)  
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KuCH tu hota hai mohabbat maiN junooN ka asar
Aur kuCH log bhee dewaana bana detay haiN
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Old Jul 3rd, 2009, 02:20 AM   #12 (permalink)  
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Na aatay tum, iss main takraar kia thi
magar waada kertay huay aar kia thi

'Ye'
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Old Jul 3rd, 2009, 03:25 AM   #13 (permalink)  
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ye iztiraab saa kyaa hai ki muddaten guzari
tujhe bhulaaye hue teri yaad aaye hue

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Ishq samjhe the jise, wo tha bus narasai ka rishta
mere aur us ke darmian nikla umar bhar ki judai ka rishta.
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Old Jul 3rd, 2009, 03:54 PM   #14 (permalink)  
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Ya rub wo na samjhay hain na samjhain gay mere baat

DE or dil un ko jo na de mujh ko zaban or

"Ray"
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Reza reza kabhi hongay sapnay hamaray
iss tarah se kabhi hum ne socha na tha

'Alif'
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Aisi Chup aor Pagal Annkhain dehak Rahi thin Shidat Say

Mian too Such Much Darny Laga Tha Uss Khamoosh Muhabat Say



"Ye"
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Old Jul 4th, 2009, 04:45 AM   #17 (permalink)  
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Ye baat kisi ko nahi maloom ke momin
qaari nazar aata hai, haqeeqat main hai Quraan

'Noon'
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Nahi Hai Cheez Nikami Koi Zamanay Main
Koi Bura Nahi Qudrat Kay Karkhanay Main


"Noon"
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Old Jul 4th, 2009, 07:05 AM   #19 (permalink)  
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neend to khair in aankhoon ke muqaddar main nahi
kia shabe gum main kahin mout bhi mar jaty hai
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Ye bhi mumkin hai kisi roz na pehchanun usay
wo jo her baar naya bhes badal leta hai

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