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Old Jul 1st, 2009, 11:46 AM   #1 (permalink)  
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Ik Rah Peh Sari Omer Chalay.....
Ik Doojay Ko Na Samaj Sakay.
Jeewan Ka Safar , Anjaan Safar
Be Khuwahish , Be Armaan Safar.


Jeewan Ke Kisi Bhi Dukh Sukh Mea,
Wo Mere Sath Shareek Nahi.......
Hum Dono Mein Ik Rishta Hai.
Par Jazbon Ki Tehreek Nahi........


Jaari Hai Magar Anjaan Safar
Mea Sochti Hun Ik Din Yunhi.
Wo Mujhe Se Juda Ho Jaey Ga
Mea Us se Juda Ho Jaon Gi...


Phir Loug Kahain Ge ,Dekho Inka
Yea Rishtaa Kitna Sachaa Tha.
Par Kis Ko Khabar , Saara Jeewan
Mea Tanhaa Thi , Wo Tanhaa Tha.






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Old Jul 1st, 2009, 11:51 AM   #2 (permalink)  
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!!!!!!!TAkdeer SY ZAIDA AUR NaSeEb SE kam,,KABHI KISI KO zAiDa YaN KaM NAI MILTA!!!!!!!!
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Old Jul 1st, 2009, 12:29 PM   #3 (permalink)  
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nice







Ishq samjhe the jise, wo tha bus narasai ka rishta
mere aur us ke darmian nikla umar bhar ki judai ka rishta.
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Old Jul 1st, 2009, 03:09 PM   #4 (permalink)  
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Old Jul 1st, 2009, 05:01 PM   #5 (permalink)  
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Old Jul 1st, 2009, 05:48 PM   #6 (permalink)  
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Old Jul 4th, 2009, 06:47 PM   #7 (permalink)  
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Bohat khoob Seem..






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Old Jul 5th, 2009, 02:53 PM   #8 (permalink)  
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Good one seem !







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Old Jul 6th, 2009, 04:56 AM   #10 (permalink)  
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