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Jul 1st, 2009, 11:53 AM
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MERI JAAN THIK KEHTAY HO
HUMARI IS MOHABAT KA
BHALA KIA FAIDA HOGA?
HUMARAY DARMIYAN JO DOORIYAN HAIN
KAM NAHI HON GI........
kISI BARISH K MOSAM MAI
HUMESHA SATH REHNAY KE
JO SAPNAY HUM NE DEKHAY HAIN.
WO SAPNAY TOOT JAAIN GE.
MERI JAAN THIK KEHTAY HO,
MOQADAR KE LIKHAY KO HI AGAR TASLEEM KARNA HAI.
TU AESI MOHABAT KA
KOI BHI FAIDA KESA
MAGAR IS KO AGAR CHAHO
TU MERI BEBASI KEH LO
MUJHE TUM SE MOHABAT HAI.
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Jul 1st, 2009, 03:11 PM
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hmm........nice
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Jul 1st, 2009, 03:21 PM
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Moderator Culture, Linguistics & Literature Forum
Join Date: Jan 9, 2001 - 1:00 am
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Aww I like the ending
I have OCD: Obsessive Cullens Disorder Bite Me! -- Please I like running with scissors...makes me feel dangerous
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Jul 1st, 2009, 03:23 PM
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wah kia bat hai... bohat khoob
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Jul 1st, 2009, 04:59 PM
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Shukria
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Jul 4th, 2009, 06:52 PM
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Good One Seem.. 
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Jul 6th, 2009, 04:57 AM
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 thnx
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Jul 6th, 2009, 10:21 AM
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nice jee
Ishq samjhe the jise, wo tha bus narasai ka rishta
mere aur us ke darmian nikla umar bhar ki judai ka rishta.
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Jul 8th, 2009, 09:55 PM
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ufff.....very nice.....
waqai mohabbat bebasi hi hai....!!!
bilkul theek kaha....
Kisi ko panay ki chahat MOHABBAT toh nahi.................!
~~**Mere Naseeb nae meri khuahish ko kabhi samjha hi nahi**~~
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Jul 8th, 2009, 10:26 PM
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wah ji wah
muslim girl...bebasi hi hai aur dunyah jahan ki rahat bhi...ek roop nahi hai is mohabbat ka..hai na?
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Jul 9th, 2009, 07:35 PM
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Moderator Poetry Forum
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bohat umda seem
Love is unconditional, relationships are not BeInG lOn3lY sId
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