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Jul 2nd, 2009, 12:04 PM
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Senior Member
Join Date: Nov 2, 2008 - 11:53 am
Location: Abu Dhabi
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Tanhai mein tarpati hain
kyon itna rulaati hain
jise hum bhulna chahtey hain
kyon uski yaadein aati hain
yaadein jab aati hain
tau sath kitne aansou laati hain
ya yun kahe yaadein tau sath rehti hain
bus log aatey jaatey hain
Ishq samjhe the jise, wo tha bus narasai ka rishta
mere aur us ke darmian nikla umar bhar ki judai ka rishta.
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Jul 4th, 2009, 06:55 PM
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Join Date: Sep 5, 2004 - 7:10 pm
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Yaadein hi hain jo hamesha aapka sath deti hain.. Nice One Tere_Naam.. 
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Jul 5th, 2009, 06:47 AM
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koN dil'aaN dee'yaN janaY
Join Date: Sep 19, 2002 - 4:10 pm
Posts: 11,188
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nice 1 TN 
~BadlooN peR baseRa~
/)/)..(\(\
( ._.).(._. ) o(_(')(')..(')(')_)o
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Jul 5th, 2009, 07:29 AM
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Join Date: Jul 4, 2007 - 4:24 pm
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ya yun kahe yaadein tau sath rehti hain
bus log aatey jaatey hain
g ye zayada sahi lagta hey!
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Jul 5th, 2009, 10:56 AM
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#5 (permalink)
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Senior Member
Join Date: Nov 2, 2008 - 11:53 am
Location: Abu Dhabi
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Thanx jee han yaaden sath rehti hen bus log hi ate jate hen
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Jul 5th, 2009, 02:50 PM
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Moderator Poetry Forum
Join Date: Mar 9, 2006 - 6:35 am
Location: Neverland
Posts: 7,744
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Umda sharing !
Love is unconditional, relationships are not BeInG lOn3lY sId
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Jul 6th, 2009, 12:39 AM
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Channel Manager Arts & Culture
Join Date: Jan 15, 2002 - 1:00 am
Location: Middle of Nowhere
Posts: 9,478
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Nice 
The heart is the only broken instrument that works.
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Jul 6th, 2009, 12:21 PM
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Senior Member
Join Date: Nov 2, 2008 - 11:53 am
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thanx jee
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Jul 8th, 2009, 07:44 PM
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Join Date: Jan 6, 2009 - 4:31 pm
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yad wo nai jo tanhai mein aay.... Yad to wo hai jo bheer mein bhi tanha kar day
nice poetry
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Jul 8th, 2009, 09:50 PM
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Senior Member
Join Date: Sep 28, 2005 - 8:09 pm
Location: earth
Posts: 3,642
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tere naam bhai....abhi tak aap ghamgeeN hi hain.....  1.5 saal pehle bhi itne hi dukhi thay.....
khairiyat toh hai na?
Kisi ko panay ki chahat MOHABBAT toh nahi.................!
~~**Mere Naseeb nae meri khuahish ko kabhi samjha hi nahi**~~
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Jul 9th, 2009, 10:57 AM
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Senior Member
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aji bari mehrbani ap ne 1.5 saal se yad rakha khairiat ji Alhamdolillah. thanx 4 comments
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