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Old Jul 4th, 2009, 02:49 PM   #1 (permalink)  
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Udaas si is shaam meiN ye saath aakhri hey
hum donoN jaantey they ye mulaaqaat aakhri hey

meiN ney kaha kuch to kaho ke aaj aey jaan-e-man
jholi meiN apni lamhoN ki ye kheiraat aakhri hey

wo kehney lagi kehney ko kuch bacha nahi magar
laboN pe ab bhi lagta hey koi baat aakhri hey

meiN ney kaha ab aaNkhoN meiN koi aks nahi raha
lagta hey jesey zindagi ki ye sa'aat aakhri hey

wo falak ko tak ke karney lagi mojzoN ki baat
meiN sochney laga umeed ki ye soghaat aakhri hey

meiN ney kaha ab aas ka naya kheil kya kheileiN
ke khuwaahishoN ki bisaat par ye maat aakhri hey

wo kehney lagi aaj lagta hey har taara sog'waar
jesey chaandni aur chaand ki ye raat aakhri hey!

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Ye yaad tha ke duwa karooN par utthey rahey merey haath yuN
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Old Jul 4th, 2009, 06:50 PM   #2 (permalink)  
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Bohat khoob Sheal..






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Old Jul 4th, 2009, 10:25 PM   #3 (permalink)  
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Old Jul 5th, 2009, 05:46 AM   #4 (permalink)  
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Old Jul 5th, 2009, 06:40 AM   #5 (permalink)  
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Old Jul 5th, 2009, 06:52 AM   #6 (permalink)  
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Old Jul 5th, 2009, 02:51 PM   #8 (permalink)  
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Old Jul 6th, 2009, 12:43 AM   #9 (permalink)  
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Old Jul 6th, 2009, 03:29 PM   #10 (permalink)  
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Old Jul 8th, 2009, 07:42 PM   #11 (permalink)  
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wo kehney lagi aaj lagta hey har taara sog'waar
jesey chaandni aur chaand ki ye raat aakhri hey!



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Old Jul 9th, 2009, 11:58 AM   #12 (permalink)  
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Udaas si is shaam meiN ye saath aakhri hey

hum donoN jaantey they ye mulaaqaat aakhri hey

meiN ney kaha kuch to kaho ke aaj aey jaan-e-man
jholi meiN apni lamhoN ki ye kheiraat aakhri hey

wo kehney lagi kehney ko kuch bacha nahi magar
laboN pe ab bhi lagta hey koi baat aakhri hey

meiN ney kaha ab aaNkhoN meiN koi aks nahi raha
lagta hey jesey zindagi ki ye sa'aat aakhri hey

wo falak ko tak ke karney lagi mojzoN ki baat
meiN sochney laga umeed ki ye soghaat aakhri hey

meiN ney kaha ab aas ka naya kheil kya kheileiN
ke khuwaahishoN ki bisaat par ye maat aakhri hey

wo kehney lagi aaj lagta hey har taara sog'waar
jesey chaandni aur chaand ki ye raat aakhri hey!

By: Amal

Great Choice Sheal






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Old Jul 9th, 2009, 12:00 PM   #13 (permalink)  
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Old Jul 9th, 2009, 12:49 PM   #14 (permalink)  
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acha intekhaab hai.






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Old Jul 10th, 2009, 12:25 AM   #15 (permalink)  
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wo falak ko tak ke karney lagi mojzoN ki baat
meiN sochney laga umeed ki ye soghaat aakhri hey


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Old Jul 10th, 2009, 09:48 AM   #16 (permalink)  
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Old Jul 13th, 2009, 08:17 AM   #17 (permalink)  
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Old Aug 22nd, 2009, 07:58 PM   #18 (permalink)  
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Kia baat hai..........................................mukar rar........................................






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Old Aug 22nd, 2009, 08:43 PM   #19 (permalink)  
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Happiness often sneaks in through a door you didn't know you left open...
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beautiful & thought provoking.







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