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Jul 4th, 2009, 02:49 PM
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Moderator Poetry Forum
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Udaas si is shaam meiN ye saath aakhri hey
hum donoN jaantey they ye mulaaqaat aakhri hey
meiN ney kaha kuch to kaho ke aaj aey jaan-e-man
jholi meiN apni lamhoN ki ye kheiraat aakhri hey
wo kehney lagi kehney ko kuch bacha nahi magar
laboN pe ab bhi lagta hey koi baat aakhri hey
meiN ney kaha ab aaNkhoN meiN koi aks nahi raha
lagta hey jesey zindagi ki ye sa'aat aakhri hey
wo falak ko tak ke karney lagi mojzoN ki baat
meiN sochney laga umeed ki ye soghaat aakhri hey
meiN ney kaha ab aas ka naya kheil kya kheileiN
ke khuwaahishoN ki bisaat par ye maat aakhri hey
wo kehney lagi aaj lagta hey har taara sog'waar
jesey chaandni aur chaand ki ye raat aakhri hey!
By: Amal
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Ye yaad tha ke duwa karooN par utthey rahey merey haath yuN
jesey khaahishoN ke hajoom meiN kaheeN kho gai teri aarzu
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Jul 4th, 2009, 06:50 PM
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Bohat khoob Sheal.. 
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Jul 4th, 2009, 10:25 PM
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bohot acha
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Jul 5th, 2009, 05:46 AM
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Moderator Poetry Forum
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thanks Aryaan and saqi
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Jul 5th, 2009, 06:40 AM
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SaNa ds *MaGiC oF BeAuTy*
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!!!!!!!TAkdeer SY ZAIDA AUR NaSeEb SE kam,,KABHI KISI KO zAiDa YaN KaM NAI MILTA!!!!!!!!
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Jul 5th, 2009, 06:52 AM
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koN dil'aaN dee'yaN janaY
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V nice Sheal 
~BadlooN peR baseRa~
/)/)..(\(\
( ._.).(._. ) o(_(')(')..(')(')_)o
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Jul 5th, 2009, 07:14 AM
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aalaa!!!
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Jul 5th, 2009, 02:51 PM
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Moderator Poetry Forum
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Good one 
Love is unconditional, relationships are not BeInG lOn3lY sId
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Jul 6th, 2009, 12:43 AM
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Channel Manager Arts & Culture
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bohat khoob 
The heart is the only broken instrument that works.
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Jul 6th, 2009, 03:29 PM
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Moderator Poetry Forum
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shukran peoples.
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Jul 8th, 2009, 07:42 PM
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wo kehney lagi aaj lagta hey har taara sog'waar
jesey chaandni aur chaand ki ye raat aakhri hey!
very very nice
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Jul 9th, 2009, 11:58 AM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Sheal
Udaas si is shaam meiN ye saath aakhri hey
hum donoN jaantey they ye mulaaqaat aakhri hey
meiN ney kaha kuch to kaho ke aaj aey jaan-e-man
jholi meiN apni lamhoN ki ye kheiraat aakhri hey
wo kehney lagi kehney ko kuch bacha nahi magar
laboN pe ab bhi lagta hey koi baat aakhri hey
meiN ney kaha ab aaNkhoN meiN koi aks nahi raha
lagta hey jesey zindagi ki ye sa'aat aakhri hey
wo falak ko tak ke karney lagi mojzoN ki baat
meiN sochney laga umeed ki ye soghaat aakhri hey
meiN ney kaha ab aas ka naya kheil kya kheileiN
ke khuwaahishoN ki bisaat par ye maat aakhri hey
wo kehney lagi aaj lagta hey har taara sog'waar
jesey chaandni aur chaand ki ye raat aakhri hey!
By: Amal
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Great Choice Sheal 
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Jul 9th, 2009, 12:00 PM
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Moderator History, Culture, Linguistics & Literature Forum
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bohat behtreen
~signatureunderconstruction~
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Jul 9th, 2009, 12:49 PM
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acha intekhaab hai. 
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Jul 10th, 2009, 12:25 AM
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wo falak ko tak ke karney lagi mojzoN ki baat
meiN sochney laga umeed ki ye soghaat aakhri hey
bohat ahla jee
Ishq samjhe the jise, wo tha bus narasai ka rishta
mere aur us ke darmian nikla umar bhar ki judai ka rishta.
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Jul 10th, 2009, 09:48 AM
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Moderator Poetry Forum
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thanks 
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Jul 13th, 2009, 08:17 AM
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buhut khoobsurat, thanks for sharing 
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Daanie
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Aug 22nd, 2009, 07:58 PM
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Kia baat hai..........................................mukar rar........................................
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Aug 22nd, 2009, 08:43 PM
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Channel Manager Lifestyle
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Happiness often sneaks in through a door you didn't know you left open...
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Aug 23rd, 2009, 03:01 AM
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beautiful & thought provoking.
Live 4 others.....chuchu
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