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Jul 5th, 2009, 06:56 AM
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koN dil'aaN dee'yaN janaY
Join Date: Sep 19, 2002 - 4:10 pm
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jo mausam beet jata hai dobara kyoN nahiN ata
kahiN se laut ker bachpaN hamaRa kyoN nahiN ata
yahaN anay ko to har din kissi ke saath ata hai
jesay is dil ne reh reh kaR pukara kyon nahiN ata
wo jis ki lo mohabbat ki jabee'N ka ist'aara thi
to phir rastay mai hamary wo roshan sitara kyoN nahiN ata
bohat heart hai ab bagon mein jab kalian chataktin hain
hamary dehyan mein lehja tumhara kyoN nahiN ata
kabhi phelay hoay pairon se jab kirnein jhalakty hain
tasawur main un ankhoon ka ishara kyon nahin ata
bhatakta phir raha hoon din ke is weran jangal mein
mehakti sham ka rangeen kinara kyon nahin ata
~BadlooN peR baseRa~
/)/)..(\(\
( ._.).(._. ) o(_(')(')..(')(')_)o
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Jul 5th, 2009, 07:10 AM
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Senior Member
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waqt, lahr aur loag kisi na v intezar nahi kartey, suna tu aisa hee hey!
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Jul 5th, 2009, 07:11 AM
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Senior Member
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bohat heart hai ab bagon mein jab kalian chataktin hain
ye angrezi wala k kuch hor ey?
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Jul 5th, 2009, 01:15 PM
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Moderator Poetry Forum
Join Date: Mar 1, 2007 - 3:39 am
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koyal nice as always 
******
Ye yaad tha ke duwa karooN par utthey rahey merey haath yuN
jesey khaahishoN ke hajoom meiN kaheeN kho gai teri aarzu
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Jul 5th, 2009, 01:15 PM
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Moderator Poetry Forum
Join Date: Mar 1, 2007 - 3:39 am
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Quote:
Originally Posted by muncho
bohat heart hai ab bagon mein jab kalian chataktin hain
ye angrezi wala k kuch hor ey?
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haan bas yay aik lafz samjhnay main hi dushwari ho rahi hai 
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Jul 5th, 2009, 02:48 PM
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Moderator Poetry Forum
Join Date: Mar 9, 2006 - 6:35 am
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Outstanding ghazal ! Thx koyal 4 sharing !
Love is unconditional, relationships are not BeInG lOn3lY sId
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Jul 6th, 2009, 12:45 AM
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Channel Manager Arts & Culture
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very nice
The heart is the only broken instrument that works.
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Jul 9th, 2009, 10:54 AM
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Join Date: Sep 5, 2004 - 7:10 pm
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Good One Koyal...
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Jul 9th, 2009, 11:02 AM
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nice jee
Ishq samjhe the jise, wo tha bus narasai ka rishta
mere aur us ke darmian nikla umar bhar ki judai ka rishta.
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Jul 9th, 2009, 12:08 PM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Koyal
jo mausam beet jata hai dobara kyoN nahiN ata
kahiN se laut ker bachpaN hamaRa kyoN nahiN ata
yahaN anay ko to har din kissi ke saath ata hai
jesay is dil ne reh reh kaR pukara kyon nahiN ata |
Bachpan Tu Naheen Aa Sakta Purr Me Aa Giya
Very Nice as usual
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Jul 9th, 2009, 12:47 PM
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Very nice Koyal.
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Jul 13th, 2009, 08:24 AM
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wonderful
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Daanie
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Jul 13th, 2009, 08:39 AM
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Join Date: Sep 17, 2007 - 3:44 pm
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one word, beautiful
tfs
Imagination is more important than knowledge. For while knowledge defines all we currently know and understand, imagination points to all we might yet discover and create.
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Jul 13th, 2009, 09:22 AM
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Junior Member
Join Date: Dec 9, 2008 - 9:04 pm
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Quote:
Originally Posted by muncho
bohat heart hai ab bagon mein jab kalian chataktin hain
ye angrezi wala k kuch hor ey?
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Yahaan ghaaliban Hairat kehna chah rahey hein
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Jul 21st, 2009, 05:52 PM
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^In Ki Urdu Namunasib Had Tak ACHCHI hay 
Buhat Aalaa Koila ooppps I mean Koyal Ji ;~)
~~~~~~~ Proud To Be PukhtooN ~~~~~~~
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Jul 22nd, 2009, 12:31 PM
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Senior Member
Join Date: Jan 26, 2007 - 10:47 pm
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it reminds me of a song meray bachpan kay din
buhat ala intekhab.
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Jul 22nd, 2009, 09:32 PM
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Moderator Poetry Forum
Join Date: Mar 1, 2007 - 3:39 am
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Precious^Khan
^In Ki Urdu Namunasib Had Tak ACHCHI hay
Buhat Aalaa Koila ooppps I mean Koyal Ji ;~) |
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Jul 23rd, 2009, 09:09 AM
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koN dil'aaN dee'yaN janaY
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Precious^Khan
^In Ki Urdu Namunasib Had Tak ACHCHI hay
Buhat Aalaa Koila ooppps I mean Koyal Ji ;~) |
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