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Old Jul 5th, 2009, 06:56 AM   #1 (permalink)
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jo mausam beet jata hai dobara kyoN nahiN ata
kahiN se laut ker bachpaN hamaRa kyoN nahiN ata

yahaN anay ko to har din kissi ke saath ata hai
jesay is dil ne reh reh kaR pukara kyon nahiN ata

wo jis ki lo mohabbat ki jabee'N ka ist'aara thi
to phir rastay mai hamary wo roshan sitara kyoN nahiN ata

bohat heart hai ab bagon mein jab kalian chataktin hain
hamary dehyan mein lehja tumhara kyoN nahiN ata

kabhi phelay hoay pairon se jab kirnein jhalakty hain
tasawur main un ankhoon ka ishara kyon nahin ata

bhatakta phir raha hoon din ke is weran jangal mein
mehakti sham ka rangeen kinara kyon nahin ata






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Old Jul 5th, 2009, 07:10 AM   #2 (permalink)
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waqt, lahr aur loag kisi na v intezar nahi kartey, suna tu aisa hee hey!
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Old Jul 5th, 2009, 07:11 AM   #3 (permalink)
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bohat heart hai ab bagon mein jab kalian chataktin hain

ye angrezi wala k kuch hor ey?
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Old Jul 5th, 2009, 01:15 PM   #4 (permalink)
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koyal nice as always






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Old Jul 5th, 2009, 01:15 PM   #5 (permalink)
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bohat heart hai ab bagon mein jab kalian chataktin hain

ye angrezi wala k kuch hor ey?
haan bas yay aik lafz samjhnay main hi dushwari ho rahi hai






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Old Jul 5th, 2009, 02:48 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Outstanding ghazal ! Thx koyal 4 sharing !






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Old Jul 6th, 2009, 12:45 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Old Jul 9th, 2009, 10:54 AM   #8 (permalink)
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Good One Koyal...
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Old Jul 9th, 2009, 11:02 AM   #9 (permalink)
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Old Jul 9th, 2009, 12:08 PM   #10 (permalink)
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jo mausam beet jata hai dobara kyoN nahiN ata

kahiN se laut ker bachpaN hamaRa kyoN nahiN ata

yahaN anay ko to har din kissi ke saath ata hai
jesay is dil ne reh reh kaR pukara kyon nahiN ata
Bachpan Tu Naheen Aa Sakta Purr Me Aa Giya

Very Nice as usual
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Old Jul 9th, 2009, 12:47 PM   #11 (permalink)
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Very nice Koyal.
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Old Jul 13th, 2009, 08:24 AM   #12 (permalink)
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Old Jul 13th, 2009, 08:39 AM   #13 (permalink)
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one word, beautiful

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Old Jul 13th, 2009, 09:22 AM   #14 (permalink)
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bohat heart hai ab bagon mein jab kalian chataktin hain

ye angrezi wala k kuch hor ey?
Yahaan ghaaliban Hairat kehna chah rahey hein






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Old Jul 21st, 2009, 05:52 PM   #15 (permalink)
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^In Ki Urdu Namunasib Had Tak ACHCHI hay




Buhat Aalaa Koila ooppps I mean Koyal Ji ;~)






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Raabta Sab Say Hay ' Laykin Wastaa Koi Naee'N
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Old Jul 22nd, 2009, 12:31 PM   #16 (permalink)
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it reminds me of a song meray bachpan kay din
buhat ala intekhab.
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Old Jul 22nd, 2009, 09:32 PM   #17 (permalink)
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