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Old Jul 8th, 2009, 07:40 PM   #1 (permalink)  
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Manzilain bhi uski thi,
Rasta bhi uska tha.
Ek main akela tha,Kafila bhi uska tha..
Sath-Sath chalne ki soch bhi uski thi,
Phir raasta badalne ka faisla bhi uska tha...
Aaj kyun akela hoon,Dil sawal karta hai,
Log to uske the,Kya KHUDA bhi uska tha....?







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Old Jul 8th, 2009, 10:27 PM   #2 (permalink)  
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hmmm.....sawal tu saray he munasib hain...bohot khoob dua g






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Old Jul 9th, 2009, 11:01 AM   #3 (permalink)  
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Old Jul 9th, 2009, 06:30 PM   #5 (permalink)  
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Old Jul 9th, 2009, 07:34 PM   #6 (permalink)  
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Old Jul 10th, 2009, 04:07 AM   #7 (permalink)  
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!!!!!!!TAkdeer SY ZAIDA AUR NaSeEb SE kam,,KABHI KISI KO zAiDa YaN KaM NAI MILTA!!!!!!!!
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Old Jul 10th, 2009, 10:43 PM   #8 (permalink)  
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Old Jul 11th, 2009, 03:23 PM   #9 (permalink)  
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bala ki afra-tafri hai hamari zaat me lekin
humein to be-dehani me b aap ka khyal rehta hai....
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Old Jul 11th, 2009, 04:52 PM   #10 (permalink)  
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Aaj kyun akela hoon,Dil sawal karta hai,
Log to uske the,Kya KHUDA bhi uska tha....?

''zuban e khulq ko naqara e khuda'' k hisab se tu aisa hee ho sakta!!






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Old Jul 13th, 2009, 01:00 AM   #11 (permalink)  
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Old Jul 13th, 2009, 08:09 AM   #12 (permalink)  
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Old Jul 13th, 2009, 08:50 AM   #13 (permalink)  
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Old Jul 14th, 2009, 07:29 AM   #15 (permalink)  
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