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Old Jul 15th, 2009, 01:57 AM   #1 (permalink)  
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Na sama'aton main tapish ghulay, na nazar ko waqf-e-aazab kar
Jo sunaai de usey chup sikha,j o dikhai de usey khwab kar

Abhi muntashir na ho ajnabi na wisaal rut ka karam jata
Jo teri talash main gum hoye kabhi un dino ka hisaab kar

Mere sabr pe koi ajar kyoun, meri dehleez pe ye abar kyoun
Mujhe aurhne de aziyaten,meri aadaten na kharab kar

Kahin aablon k bhanwar main khoyen,dhoop badan main sajaien
Kabhi dil ko thall ka mizaaj de,kabhi chasm-e-ter ko chanab kar

Ye hajoom-e-sheher-e-sitam garan na sune ga teri sada kabhi
Meri hasraton ko sukhan suna, meri khawaishon se khitaab kar

Ye jaloos-e-fasl-e-bahar hai tehi dast,yaar saja isay
Koi ashak phir se sharar bana,koi zakham phir se gulaab kar






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Old Jul 15th, 2009, 08:27 AM   #2 (permalink)  
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bohoot Alaa.. shab_ji

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Old Jul 15th, 2009, 09:53 AM   #3 (permalink)  
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Kabhi dil ko thall ka mizaaj de,kabhi chasm-e-ter ko chanab kar

waah kia geographical misra!!!
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Old Jul 15th, 2009, 10:01 AM   #4 (permalink)  
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Mere sabr pe koi ajar kyoun, meri dehleez pe ye abar kyoun
Mujhe aurhne de aziyaten,meri aadaten na kharab kar






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Old Jul 15th, 2009, 10:57 AM   #5 (permalink)  
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very nice jee






Ishq samjhe the jise, wo tha bus narasai ka rishta
mere aur us ke darmian nikla umar bhar ki judai ka rishta.
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Old Jul 15th, 2009, 12:26 PM   #6 (permalink)  
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Ma Fav ghazal thx 4 sharing !






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Ye yaad tha ke duwa karooN par utthey rahey merey haath yuN
jesey khaahishoN ke hajoom meiN kaheeN kho gai teri aarzu
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that absolutely beautiful.....shabo ji..thanx
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Very Nice Shab-e-Hijar..
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very nice
as allways






suoz-e-firaaq,yaas-o-alam,iztraab-o-shuoq
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Buhat Aalaa .... :~)






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Raabta Sab Say Hay ' Laykin Wastaa Koi Naee'N
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Old Jul 23rd, 2009, 10:13 AM   #16 (permalink)  
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Na sama'aton main tapish ghulay, na nazar ko waqf-e-aazab kar
Jo sunaai de usey chup sikha,j o dikhai de usey khwab kar

Abhi muntashir na ho ajnabi na wisaal rut ka karam jata
Jo teri talash main gum hoye kabhi un dino ka hisaab kar

Mere sabr pe koi ajar kyoun, meri dehleez pe ye abar kyoun
Mujhe aurhne de aziyaten,meri aadaten na kharab kar

Kahin aablon k bhanwar main khoyen,dhoop badan main sajaien
Kabhi dil ko thall ka mizaaj de,kabhi chasm-e-ter ko chanab kar

Ye hajoom-e-sheher-e-sitam garan na sune ga teri sada kabhi
Meri hasraton ko sukhan suna, meri khawaishon se khitaab kar

Ye jaloos-e-fasl-e-bahar hai tehi dast,yaar saja isay
Koi ashak phir se sharar bana,koi zakham phir se gulaab kar


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