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Old Oct 25th, 2009, 02:13 PM   #1 (permalink)  
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Suna hy junglon ka bhe koi dastoor hota hy,

suna hy,
shair ka jab pait bhr jay
to woh hamla nahe karta

suna hy,
hawa k taiz jhonky jab darkhtoN ko hilaty hain
to
Mena apny ghar ko bhool kar
kawway k andon ko paroN main thaam laiti hay,

suna hy,
ghonsly say jb koi baccha giry to
sara jungal jaag jata hay

suna hy,
koi pul toot jay
or
sailab aa jay to
kisi lakRi k takhty par
gulehri, saamp, cheeta or bakri sath hoty hen

SUNA HY JUNGALON KA B KOI DASTOOR HOTA HY !!!

Khuda e Munsif o Akbar! Hamary mulk main ab Junglon ka he koi dastoor naafiz kr..







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Old Oct 25th, 2009, 02:44 PM   #2 (permalink)  
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aww.....dil dehla denay wali nazm.....ya ALLAH, ya RABB-E-MOHAMMAD(s.a.w.)! mere pakistan ki khair...







Once Ishfaq Ahmed said,"I was wondered and even intellectuals couldnt answer me about difference between "Momin" & "Muslim".An old man(a shoe maker) told me..jerra ALLAH nu manda ey..o musalman, jerra ALLAH di manda ey o momin".
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Old Oct 26th, 2009, 02:41 AM   #3 (permalink)  
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Ameen...






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Old Oct 26th, 2009, 03:38 AM   #4 (permalink)  
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Wo LaJaE mErE sAwAl Per Ke ,UtHaA sAkE nA jHuKa SaR ,uDdi ZuLf ChEhRe PeR IsTaRaH
Ke ShAbON kE RaZ MaChAl GaE
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Old Oct 26th, 2009, 05:16 PM   #5 (permalink)  
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Very nice poem






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Old Oct 28th, 2009, 05:06 PM   #6 (permalink)  
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A'meen .zabardast







Love me without fear. Trust me without wondering. Be there without restrictions. Accept me how I am. A love like that will be eternal.
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Old Oct 28th, 2009, 08:09 PM   #7 (permalink)  
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Ameen.. Nice poem ASA..






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Old Oct 30th, 2009, 06:32 AM   #8 (permalink)  
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Zabardast ASA.....







Mukhtasir Lafzoo'n Main Hay Ab Yeh Mizaaj e Dosti
Raabta Sab Say Hay ' Laykin Wastaa Koi Naee'N
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Old Oct 30th, 2009, 07:05 AM   #9 (permalink)  
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Ishq samjhe the jise, wo tha bus narasai ka rishta
mere aur us ke darmian nikla umar bhar ki judai ka rishta.
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Old Oct 31st, 2009, 02:16 AM   #10 (permalink)  
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Hamaare pak watan ke liye is se behtar dua... nahi ho sakti.






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