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Old Oct 26th, 2009, 11:50 PM   #1 (permalink)  
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Yehi hua ke hawaa le gayi udaa ke mujhe
Tujhe tho kuch na mila khaak mein milaa ke mujhe

Bas ek goonj hai jo saath saath chalti hai
Kahan ye chod gaye faasle sadaa ke mujhe

Chiraagh tha tho kissi taaq hi mein bujha rehta
Ye kya kiya ke hawaale kiya hawaa ke mujhe

Ho ek adaa tho usse naam doon tamanna ka
Hazaar rang hain iss shola-e-hinaa ke mujhe

Buland shaakh se uljha tha chaand pichle pehar
Guzar gaya hai koi khwaab sa dikhaa ke mujhe









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Old Oct 27th, 2009, 12:37 AM   #2 (permalink)  
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Old Oct 27th, 2009, 02:39 AM   #3 (permalink)  
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Old Oct 27th, 2009, 06:20 PM   #7 (permalink)  
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Buland shaakh se uljha tha chaand pichle pehar
Guzar gaya hai koi khwaab sa dikhaa ke mujhe
Kia kehnay .................bht khubsorat ghazal hai






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Old Oct 28th, 2009, 03:29 AM   #9 (permalink)  
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Old Nov 2nd, 2009, 06:05 AM   #10 (permalink)  
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Buland shaakh se uljha tha chaand pichle pehar
Guzar gaya hai koi khwaab sa dikhaa ke mujhe
Kia kehnay .................bht khubsorat ghazal hai
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Old Nov 2nd, 2009, 07:01 AM   #11 (permalink)  
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