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Old Oct 30th, 2009, 07:27 AM   #1 (permalink)  
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Yeh Shab e Firaaq Yeh Babybasi

Hain Qadam Qadam Pay Udasiyaa'n

Mayra Saath Koi Na Day Saka

Mayri Hasratai'n Howee'n Dhuwaa'n Dhuwaa'n

Main Tarrap Tarrap K Jiyoo'n Tou Kiya

Mayray Khwaab Mujh Say Bicharr Ga'ey

Main Udaas Ghar Ki Sada Sahee

Mujhay Day Na Koi Tasal'liyaa'n

Yeh Fizaa Jo Gard o Ghubaar Hay

Mayri Baybasi Ka Mazar Hay

Main Woh Phool Hoon Jo Na Khil Saka

Mayri Zindagi Main Wafa Kahaa'n

Chali Dard Ki Aisee Aandhiyaa'n

Mayray Dil Ki Basti Ujarr Ga'ee

Yeh Jo Raakh See Hay Bujhi Bujhi

Han Is Main Mayri Nishaniyaa'n


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Mukhtasir Lafzoo'n Main Hay Ab Yeh Mizaaj e Dosti
Raabta Sab Say Hay ' Laykin Wastaa Koi Naee'N
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Old Oct 30th, 2009, 10:13 AM   #2 (permalink)  
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Old Oct 30th, 2009, 10:16 AM   #3 (permalink)  
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Old Oct 30th, 2009, 10:25 AM   #4 (permalink)  
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Old Oct 31st, 2009, 05:51 AM   #5 (permalink)  
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Old Oct 31st, 2009, 11:55 AM   #6 (permalink)  
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Old Oct 31st, 2009, 12:33 PM   #7 (permalink)  
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Old Nov 6th, 2009, 07:10 AM   #8 (permalink)  
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Old Nov 6th, 2009, 07:17 AM   #9 (permalink)  
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Yeh Shab e Firaaq Yeh Babybasi
Hain Qadam Qadam Pay Udasiyaa'n

Mayra Saath Koi Na Day Saka
Mayri Hasratai'n Howee'n Dhuwaa'n Dhuwaa'n
Main Tarrap Tarrap K Jiyoo'n Tou Kiya
Mayray Khwaab Mujh Say Bicharr Ga'ey
Main Udaas Ghar Ki Sada Sahee
Mujhay Day Na Koi Tasal'liyaa'n

Yeh Fizaa Jo Gard o Ghubaar Hay
Mayri Baybasi Ka Mazar Hay
Main Woh Phool Hoon Jo Na Khil Saka
Mayri Zindagi Main Wafa Kahaa'n
Chali Dard Ki Aisee Aandhiyaa'n

Mayray Dil Ki Basti Ujarr Ga'ee
Yeh Jo Raakh See Hay Bujhi Bujhi
Han Is Main Mayri Nishaniyaa'n


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bahooot Khoob intiKhaab rahaa aapkaa. kahiiN kahiiN kitaabat kii aGhlaat sarzad huii haiN...nazr-e-saanii farmaa kar tasHeeH kar leN to ain navaazish hogii. is nazm ko ab jaise maiN ne format kiyaa hai vaise likhiye to behtar rahegaa. har kalaam kaa apnaa ek format hotaa hai jisse paRhnewaalaa saHeeH ta'assur letaa hai.

shaa'ir kaa naam agar likh dete to bahtar hotaa






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Old Nov 6th, 2009, 07:47 AM   #10 (permalink)  
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v nice khan,aik aik word mai tshnagi hai.






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Old Nov 7th, 2009, 05:20 AM   #11 (permalink)  
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Old Nov 7th, 2009, 10:28 PM   #12 (permalink)  
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Yeh Shab e Firaaq Yeh Babybasi

Hain Qadam Qadam Pay Udasiyaa'n

Mayra Saath Koi Na Day Saka

Mayri Hasratai'n Howee'n Dhuwaa'n Dhuwaa'n

Main Tarrap Tarrap K Jiyoo'n Tou Kiya

Mayray Khwaab Mujh Say Bicharr Ga'ey

Main Udaas Ghar Ki Sada Sahee

Mujhay Day Na Koi Tasal'liyaa'n

Yeh Fizaa Jo Gard o Ghubaar Hay

Mayri Baybasi Ka Mazar Hay

Main Woh Phool Hoon Jo Na Khil Saka

Mayri Zindagi Main Wafa Kahaa'n

Chali Dard Ki Aisee Aandhiyaa'n

Mayray Dil Ki Basti Ujarr Ga'ee

Yeh Jo Raakh See Hay Bujhi Bujhi

Han Is Main Mayri Nishaniyaa'n


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Old Nov 11th, 2009, 04:02 PM   #13 (permalink)  
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bahooot Khoob intiKhaab rahaa aapkaa. kahiiN kahiiN kitaabat kii aGhlaat sarzad huii haiN...nazr-e-saanii farmaa kar tasHeeH kar leN to ain navaazish hogii. is nazm ko ab jaise maiN ne format kiyaa hai vaise likhiye to behtar rahegaa. har kalaam kaa apnaa ek format hotaa hai jisse paRhnewaalaa saHeeH ta'assur letaa hai.

shaa'ir kaa naam agar likh dete to bahtar hotaa
Ainda Koshish karaingey hazrat...is Baar darguzar farma'eay :~)

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Old Nov 12th, 2009, 02:05 PM   #14 (permalink)  
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Old Nov 19th, 2009, 07:37 AM   #15 (permalink)  
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Old Nov 21st, 2009, 07:33 AM   #17 (permalink)  
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Old Nov 21st, 2009, 07:53 AM   #18 (permalink)  
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