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Nov 1st, 2009, 03:11 AM
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Moderator Poetry Forum
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Rules of Bait Bazi:
1. Shair should be genuine and not your own. Post your own in Bait Bazi — Personal Edition of Sho'ra-e-Gupshup.
2. Dont break the chain and always follow the last letter of the last posted shair.
3. Always mention the last urdu alphabet of your shair.
4. If you know the name of the poet, mention that (for other's knowledge sake).
5. Do not write out the whole ghazal/nazam; only two shairs (i.e. Ruba`i, qit`a) at max will be allowed.
Last Sher Was posted by terray_naam
Uthen gay ahi aur bhi toofan mere dil se
dekhon ga abhi ishaq ke khawab aur zayada
Hay
Love is unconditional, relationships are not BeInG lOn3lY sId
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Nov 1st, 2009, 11:18 AM
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Channel Manager Arts & Culture
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hamri jaan par dohra azaab hai Mohsin
kay dekhna nahi hum ko sochna bhi hai
ye 
The heart is the only broken instrument that works.
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Nov 1st, 2009, 11:30 AM
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Senior Citizen
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Yuun aur bhi haseen ho jaye
wo gerr udaas ho bethay
'Ye'
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Nov 1st, 2009, 12:09 PM
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*Shabby*
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ye qadam qadam balaaen. ye sawad-e-koo-e-janaann
woh yahien say lot jaaen jinhain zindagi ho pyari................
"ye"
~Mana k teri deed k qabil nahi hun main,
Tu mera shoq daikh mera intazar daikh~
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Nov 2nd, 2009, 09:27 AM
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Yeh Mumkin Nahi Keh Sab Log Badal Jatey Hain
Kuch Halaat Ke Saanchon Mein Bhi Dhal Jatey Hain
Khaali Haathon Ko Kabhi Ghaur Se Dekha Hai Faraz
Kis Tarha Log Lakeeron Se Nikal Jatey Hain...
"Noon"
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Nov 5th, 2009, 11:28 PM
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Channel Manager Arts & Culture
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na jaane aaj ye kis kaa Khayaal aayaa hai
Khushii kaa rang liye har malaal aayaa hai
ye
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Nov 6th, 2009, 01:06 AM
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Hansna nahi, rona nahi, udaasi se juda hona nahi
teri ulfat ne hamey kya nahi sikhaya hai!
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Nov 7th, 2009, 05:01 AM
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Member
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YOUN GALAT TO NAHIN CHEHRON KA TAS'SOOR BHE MAGAR
LOG WAISAY BHE NAHIN JAISAY NAZAR AATAY HAIN.....
"Noon
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Nov 8th, 2009, 09:43 PM
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Senior Member
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Nikal ke dekho kabhi nafraton ke pinjare se
tamam shahar ka "Manzar" khula sa lagta hai
Ye
Ishq samjhe the jise, wo tha bus narasai ka rishta
mere aur us ke darmian nikla umar bhar ki judai ka rishta.
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Nov 9th, 2009, 05:14 AM
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Member
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Yun tau main hans parra hoon tumharay liye magar
Kitnay sitaray toot parray hain ik hansi k sath
Fursat milay tau apna girebaan bhi dekh lay
Aey dost yun na khel meri bay bassi k sath
"Hai
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Nov 9th, 2009, 05:27 AM
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hUm tO Mitt jaaieN Gey Aey Arz e Watan Par tUjh kO
Zinda Rehna hAi Qayamat Ki Sehar hOney Tak
"Kaaf"
Mera Tareeq Ameerii nahieN Faqeerii hAi
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Nov 9th, 2009, 06:08 AM
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Member
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Kitabon say daleelain doon k dil ko saamnay rakh don
Woh mujh say pooch baithey hain muhabat kis ko kehtey hain
"Noon
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Nov 9th, 2009, 09:49 AM
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Senior Member
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Nakami ki bat alag waise hum ne
chaand ko chhu lene ki himmat ki to thi
Ye
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Nov 10th, 2009, 10:51 AM
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Member
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Yeh Kis Ney Kar Diya SOod o ziyaaN Sey Bey Gaana
Na dOstii Kii Khalish hAi Na dUshmanii Ka Gham
"Meem"
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Nov 10th, 2009, 08:53 PM
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Member
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Mere haathon ki lakeeron mein ye aib chupa hai qateel..
Mein jis shaks ko choo loon, woh mera nahi rehta..
"Alif"
" When you are in light, everything will follow you.
But when you enter dark, even your own shadow will not follow you. That is life."
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Nov 12th, 2009, 11:12 AM
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Senior Member
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Ab ji men hai ke un ko bhula kar hi dekh len
wo baar baar yaad jo aahen to kyaa karen
Noon
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Nov 12th, 2009, 11:14 AM
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Senior Member
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nigaah-e-naaz kii kaifiiyateN haiN dil meN vohii
k rooH tan meN ho sheesha meN jis taraH ho parii
AsGhar Husain "AsGhar" GonDvii
aglaa she'r YE se 
LEARN to write Roman Urdu
visit my thread in libguistic section
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Nov 12th, 2009, 09:22 PM
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Senior Member
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Ye yaad rahe zulm ki had hoti hai yaaro
tum hum ko satao magar itanaa na satao
Wow
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Nov 14th, 2009, 03:49 PM
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Member
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"Wohi Mehsoos Karte Hain Tapish Dard-e-MohabbAt Ki...!
Jo Apne Aap Se Barh Kar Kisi Se Piyar Karte Hain..."!!!
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Nov 15th, 2009, 12:26 PM
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Senior Member
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Na Gubaar men na gulaab men mujhe dekhna
mere dard ki aab-o-tab men mujhe dekhna
Alif
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