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Nov 1st, 2009, 03:33 AM
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Asalam u Alaikum !
Bohat se jazbay lamhay armaan aur sukh dukh ko alfaaz ki surat qalam ki nook se kaghaz ke seenay pe utaara jaye to aik sher banta hai ! Aur woh aik sher bohat se jazbon ka ameen hota hai bohat se dukh sukh bohat si musafatein chupi hoti hain us aik sher mein ! Mein salaam karta hon un shayron ko jin ki badolat ham jaise kam feham logo'n ko apni baat ka izhaar karna sikhaya ! Thread ke title se he apko andaza ho gaya hoga ke is thread mein hum sirf dard se bharay ashaar share karein ge ! Lets see who will come up with the most painful sher ! Aap sab ki participation ham sab ke liye bohat zarori hai ! Shukriya !
Aas k hoontoon pe pipri si jami hai naheed
Khoob khaya hai tamana ne wafa ka dhoka
bEing lonEly !!! siD !!!
Love is unconditional, relationships are not BeInG lOn3lY sId
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Nov 1st, 2009, 03:37 AM
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Jaane Walay Tu Khair Kya Aata
Haan Magar Dard Laot Aaya Hai
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Nov 1st, 2009, 04:02 AM
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Jiger ho jaye ga chali ye aankhain khoon royain ge
Wassi be-faiz logon se nibha ker kuch naheen milta
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Nov 1st, 2009, 12:12 PM
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*Shabby*
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dard ko ashk bananay ki zarurat kya thi?
tha jo iss dil main dikhanay ki zarurat kya thi??
~Mana k teri deed k qabil nahi hun main,
Tu mera shoq daikh mera intazar daikh~
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Nov 1st, 2009, 06:35 PM
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Mera dil bhi shok se toro , aik tajarba aur sahi
Lakh khilonay toray hon ge , aik kholna aur sahi
Dam nikalta hai aashiq ka , bheer hai aakar dekh tu lo
Lakh tamashay dekhay hon ge , aik tamasha aur sahi
Khanjar le kar sochtay kia ho , qatl mera kar bhi dalo
Daagh hain so daman peh tumharay , aik izafa aur sahi
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Nov 3rd, 2009, 11:58 PM
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Zakham he kholney ayi hai tu ujlat kaisi?
Chuu mere jism ko,ay bad-e-saba! aahistaa
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Nov 3rd, 2009, 11:59 PM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Mono
Jiger ho jaye ga chali ye aankhain khoon royain ge
Wassi be-faiz logon se nibha ker kuch naheen milta
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Quote:
Originally Posted by maya7492
dard ko ashk bananay ki zarurat kya thi?
tha jo iss dil main dikhanay ki zarurat kya thi??
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Quote:
Originally Posted by seem
Mera dil bhi shok se toro , aik tajarba aur sahi
Lakh khilonay toray hon ge , aik kholna aur sahi
Dam nikalta hai aashiq ka , bheer hai aakar dekh tu lo
Lakh tamashay dekhay hon ge , aik tamasha aur sahi
Khanjar le kar sochtay kia ho , qatl mera kar bhi dalo
Daagh hain so daman peh tumharay , aik izafa aur sahi |
good ones 
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Nov 4th, 2009, 12:00 AM
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Aansu jo beh rahey hein inhein behney do
Yeh keh rahey hein dil ki baat, kehney do
Bohat bawafa ho tum, yeh ham ko hai maloom
Tum apni wafa ki baat, apney tak hi rehney do
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Nov 4th, 2009, 12:02 AM
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Yeh kaun is qadar mujhe veeraan kar gaya
Jhaankoon jo apnay aap mein sehraa dikhayi de
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Nov 4th, 2009, 10:41 AM
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Janaaza iss liya bhaari hai mera,
K armaan bohat sath liya ja raha hun..
*When you find a dream inside your heart,Don't ever
let it go,Because dreams are the seeds from which
beautiful tomorrows grow*
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Nov 4th, 2009, 10:41 AM
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^ really sad 1
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Nov 4th, 2009, 10:43 AM
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Badla wafa ka dein gay bohat saadgi se hum,
Tum hum se rooth jao gay or zindagi se hum.
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Nov 4th, 2009, 10:48 AM
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Mai hoon taqdeer ki zulmat mai musafir Tanha
Roshni ho to kahin apna hi saya dekhon
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Nov 6th, 2009, 07:03 AM
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Youn uthay Ahh! uss gali se hum
Jaisay koi jahan se uth'ta hai !!!
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Nov 7th, 2009, 09:29 AM
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Roz rotay huay kehti hai zindagi mujh se FARAZ
Sirf aik shakhs ki khatir mujhay brbad na ker..
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Nov 7th, 2009, 10:02 AM
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Ab daikh yeh hassrat bhari ujree huii aankhein..
duniya taire baray mein maire khvab bohat thay
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Nov 8th, 2009, 07:51 AM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Shumaisa
Ab daikh yeh hassrat bhari ujree huii aankhein..
duniya taire baray mein maire khvab bohat thay
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suprb
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Nov 8th, 2009, 07:51 AM
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Is liye bhi raat ko ghar se nikal aata hon mein
Sardiyon ke chaand ko ehsaas e tanhai na ho
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Nov 8th, 2009, 08:49 AM
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Very Nice All..
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Nov 8th, 2009, 08:53 AM
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