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Old Nov 2nd, 2009, 04:04 PM   #1 (permalink)  
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wo to khushbu hai hawaon main bikhar jayega
masla phul ka hai phul kidhar jayega

ham to samjhe the k ek zakhm hai bhar jayega
kya khabar thi k rag-e-jan main utar jayega

wo hawaon ki tarah khanabajan phirta hai
ek jhonka hai jo ayega guzar jayega

wo jab ayega to phir us ki rafaqat k liye
mausam-e-gul mere angan main thahar jayega

akhir wo bhi kahin ret pe baithi hogi
tera ye pyar bhi dariya hai utar jayega







Hamain maat dhondna duniya ki bheed main... Hum milein ge tumhain tumhari parchayi main


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Old Nov 2nd, 2009, 04:18 PM   #2 (permalink)  
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nice.
thanks for sharing with us







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Old Nov 2nd, 2009, 05:20 PM   #3 (permalink)  
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Old Nov 2nd, 2009, 11:50 PM   #4 (permalink)  
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tera ye pyar bhi dariya hai utar jayega







!!!!!!!TAkdeer SY ZAIDA AUR NaSeEb SE kam,,KABHI KISI KO zAiDa YaN KaM NAI MILTA!!!!!!!!
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Old Nov 4th, 2009, 12:15 AM   #5 (permalink)  
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evergreen ghazal







Love is unconditional, relationships are not
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Parveen Shakir over-rated shaira thiiN magar yeh Ghazal kitaabat kii muta'addid aGhlaat ke baa-vujuud achchhi hai. yeh meraa apnaa Khayaal thaa aur zaroori nahiiN k isse kisi ko koi ashkaal na ho share karne ke l;iye shukria







LEARN to write Roman Urdu
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Old Nov 4th, 2009, 09:21 AM   #7 (permalink)  
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Kuch dayr tujh say kat gaee thee
Mehwar say zameen hat gaee thee







I make others feel like winners
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Hamain khabar hay hawa ka mizaj rakhtay ho
Magar yeh kia kay zara dayr ko rukay bhi naheen






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hashmat: mujhe aap ki baat ki bilkul samjh nahin ayi. I'm a bit lost. Sorry my urdu aint that good






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Old Nov 7th, 2009, 05:19 AM   #10 (permalink)  
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buhat acchi ghazal share ki hai parveen shakir ki aap ne...






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Old Nov 7th, 2009, 06:14 PM   #11 (permalink)  
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Old Nov 8th, 2009, 09:32 PM   #12 (permalink)  
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