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Nov 7th, 2009, 12:22 AM
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Raton ko uth kr
Khyalon sy ho kr
Yadon mn kho kr
Tmhay kia khbar hy
Mn apny KHUDA sy
Kia mangta hn
Viranon mn ja kr
Daman phla kr
Aanso bha kr
Tmhn kia khbr he
Mn apny KHUDA se
Kia mangta hn
Tm to kho gy
SANAM mangta hn
JANAM mangta hn
Tm to kho gy
Kisi DILRUBA ki
Kisi DILNASHIN ki
wafa mangta hn
Ye b galat he
Wo b galat hy
Mn apny khuda se
"ADAM" k betay ki
Ankhon sy jati
HAYA mangta hn
Mn apny KHUDA se
"HAWWA" ki beti k
Sr sy utarti
RIDA mangta hn
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Nov 7th, 2009, 04:43 AM
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nice meanings!
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Nov 7th, 2009, 10:28 AM
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Thnax rajey..... 
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Nov 7th, 2009, 11:31 PM
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Bohat Khoob Bilbatori...
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Nov 7th, 2009, 11:53 PM
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yeah kya hai ...... is pe mai kya compliment dooo ....
mai to apne khuda se ...
is larki ki
jatii hui ...
akal wapise mangta hoo .......
haha
meri chahtoo ka kya sila dayga " Jane-B-khabar " uski ek awaz pe zindagi mita doo bas............. " ITNI HAI MERI MUHABBAT"
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Nov 8th, 2009, 04:19 AM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Aryaan
Bohat Khoob Bilbatori...
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Thanks alot
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Nov 8th, 2009, 04:23 AM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by sarmad786
yeah kya hai ...... is pe mai kya compliment dooo ....
mai to apne khuda se ...
is larki ki
jatii hui ...
akal wapise mangta hoo .......
haha
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R me usi Khuda sy.....
Iss banday k liye
Akal k istimal ki....
dua mangti hn
Actully iss ghzl mn jo bat poshida hy wo akal mandon k liye hy....na k akal band logon k liye..... 
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Nov 8th, 2009, 05:22 AM
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mrea khuday
tum jaisoo ki nhi sunta ...
jayoo sabash ja k mau dhoo kr ayoo ...
yeah mau or masoorr ki daalllll...
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Nov 8th, 2009, 08:11 AM
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Miss Annoying
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awwwwwwwwwwww
V V V Nice
I  it bil
sachi muchi mai i it
Jee Nahi Main nahi jaa rahi *snooty*
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Nov 8th, 2009, 10:53 AM
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Thanxxx LP  sooooo sweet
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Nov 8th, 2009, 10:57 AM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by sarmad786
mrea khuday
tum jaisoo ki nhi sunta ...
jayoo sabash ja k mau dhoo kr ayoo ...
yeah mau or masoorr ki daalllll...
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Aye gafil insaan,,,
Wo mra Khuda hy....
koi firoon nhi...
jo srf tm jaison ki sunnay ga..... 
Wo to bss zaate bartar hy.....wo ALEM hy...Wo Kareem hy....*hehe*
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Nov 8th, 2009, 10:59 AM
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mujeh yeh nazm bahooot pasand aayii...end zabardast hai...kis Khoobsoorti se aajkal ke fitne kii taraf ishaaraa kiyaa hai. yaad rahe k bahtareen du'aa vo hai jo apne liye na ho aur na hii kisi jaannewaale yaa kisi munfarid shaKhsiyat ke liye na ho bal k awaam un naas kii falaaH aur bahbood ke liye ho...aameen
LEARN to write Roman Urdu
visit my thread in libguistic section
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Nov 8th, 2009, 11:05 AM
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Aaap ki taazim ka shukria Asmani sahb.....Me aap k knowledge sy bht mustfeed hoi hn(really)....aap asi e achi baton sy hmain agah krty rha krayn...Adab arz hy
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Nov 8th, 2009, 09:17 PM
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Boht khoob
Ishq samjhe the jise, wo tha bus narasai ka rishta
mere aur us ke darmian nikla umar bhar ki judai ka rishta.
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Nov 9th, 2009, 12:13 AM
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kha nah woh mra RAB hai .... woh bas mrii sune ga
chal hun tang nah krrr.....
tang kere gi malanga nu ...te kuute pay gayee teri tanga noo .. hehe
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Nov 9th, 2009, 03:38 AM
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nice poem & wht a deep dscussion between u & sarmad.
Live 4 others.....chuchu
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Nov 9th, 2009, 04:39 AM
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Nice poetry... one of mY fav...!
Inch By Inch 2 Mile By Mile ...
Watever I Do, I Do In Style ;)
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Nov 9th, 2009, 06:21 PM
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Thnxxxxxxxxxx Shazia, Tery_nam & IL.......
thnx evry body excpt KHush feham log(Sarmad shb smgh ty gay hon gy)
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Nov 9th, 2009, 06:23 PM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by sarmad786
kha nah woh mra RAB hai .... woh bas mrii sune ga
chal hun tang nah krrr.....
tang kere gi malanga nu ...te kuute pay gayee teri tanga noo .. hehe
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Billayan ko chichron k khwab...
Ty GS man malango ka kia kam???
Tusi chlo darbar ty.....shabash
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Nov 9th, 2009, 06:48 PM
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acha kha likha hai .. k gs pe malangoo ka aana mana hai ...
das nah minu ???
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