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Nov 9th, 2009, 12:47 PM
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Channel Manager Arts & Culture
Join Date: Jan 15, 2002
Location: Middle of Nowhere
Posts: 9,543
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nahi waqif abhi to dil hamra dekhnay walay
kia hai hum nay tera gham gawara dekhnay walay
tujhay dar tha kay too tofan-e-gham mai dhoob jaye ga
mujhay moujoon ki hasrat thi kinara dekhnay walay
mujhay hairat hai meray dukh ko woh ab tak nahi samjhay
meri ankhoon mai ashkhoo'n ka nazara dekhnay walay
tumhari jalwa-e-gaah-e-naaz mai bhi misal mossa ki
pasieman ho gaye akhir nazara dekhnay walay
lahoo tapka nazar say ashk-e-gham ban kar
bohat roye hain tujh ko besahara deknay walay
The heart is the only broken instrument that works.
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Nov 9th, 2009, 01:42 PM
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Senior Member
Join Date: May 30, 2009
Location: HAM AAP KE DIL MEIN REHTAY HAIN
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kia baat hai....such a wonderful piece...
Once Ishfaq Ahmed said,"I was wondered and even intellectuals couldnt answer me about difference between "Momin" & "Muslim".An old man(a shoe maker) told me..jerra ALLAH nu manda ey..o musalman, jerra ALLAH di manda ey o momin".
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Nov 9th, 2009, 03:32 PM
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Join Date: Sep 5, 2004
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lahoo tapka nazar say ashk-e-gham ban kar
bohat roye hain tujh ko besahara deknay walay
Good One Shab-e-Hijar.. 
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Nov 9th, 2009, 03:43 PM
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HOSHIYAAR amriikan ULLOO!
Join Date: Aug 14, 2009
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waah, zabardast Ghazal paRhvaaii aapne Shab-e-Hijr aapne. ise maiN ne tarannum se paRhii to mazaa do-baalaa hogayaa [merii aawaaz kii vajah se nahiiN...Ghazal ke soz o saaz o dard ke baa'is  ] thank you for sharing
uTh, ai shabnam! Hareem-e-laala-o-gul meN charaaGhaaN kar
taRap kar mahr ke partav meN har shai ko daraKhshaan kar!.....a she'r by my Dad!
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Nov 9th, 2009, 09:00 PM
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Senior Member
Join Date: Nov 2, 2008
Location: Abu Dhabi
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Bohat khoob
Ishq samjhe the jise, wo tha bus narasai ka rishta
mere aur us ke darmian nikla umar bhar ki judai ka rishta.
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Nov 10th, 2009, 01:13 AM
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Join Date: Apr 25, 2005
Location: Somewhere on the planet earth
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Shab-e-Hijar
nahi waqif abhi to dil hamra dekhnay walay
kia hai hum nay tera gham gawara dekhnay walay
tujhay dar tha kay too tofan-e-gham mai dhoob jaye ga
mujhay moujoon ki hasrat thi kinara dekhnay walay
mujhay hairat hai meray dukh ko woh ab tak nahi samjhay
meri ankhoon mai ashkhoo'n ka nazara dekhnay walay
tumhari jalwa-e-gaah-e-naaz mai bhi misal mossa ki
pasieman ho gaye akhir nazara dekhnay walay
lahoo tapka nazar say ashk-e-gham ban kar
bohat roye hain tujh ko besahara deknay walay
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Very nice choice Shab
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Nov 15th, 2009, 10:56 AM
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Member
Join Date: Oct 12, 2008
Location: Gull kadah
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gud1...
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Nov 15th, 2009, 11:54 AM
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Moderator Poetry Forum
Join Date: Mar 9, 2006
Location: Neverland
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Bohat umda sharing Shab
Love is unconditional, relationships are not BeInG lOn3lY sId
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Nov 16th, 2009, 06:07 AM
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Senior Member
Join Date: Aug 29, 2003
Posts: 981
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buhut khoob
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Daanie
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Nov 16th, 2009, 06:30 AM
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Senior Member
Join Date: Jun 14, 2009
Location: pakistan
Posts: 628
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bohat alaa bt 1 cheez samajh nai ai k itne dukh se describe ki hai or sb boht alaa,nice or pata nai kya kya keh rhe hain,smait mere. nai?
Live 4 others.....chuchu
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Nov 17th, 2009, 07:04 AM
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koN dil'aaN dee'yaN janaY
Join Date: Sep 19, 2002
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Beautiful like always shabo
~BadlooN peR baseRa~
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