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      koi dewana kehta hay koi pagal samajhta hay
      magar dharti ki bechani ko bas badal samajhta hay

      main tujh se dur kesa hoo tu mujh se dur kesi hay
      ye tera dil samajhta hay ya mera dil samjhta hay

      muhabbat aik ahsaso ki pavon si kahani hay
      kabhi kabirah dewana tha kabhi meera dewani hay

      yaha sab loog kehte hain meri ankho main ansoo hain
      jo tu samjhe to moti hain jo na samjhe to pani hay

      samander peer ka andar hay lekin ro nahi sakta
      ye anso piyar ka moti hay isko kho nahi sakta

      meri chahat ko apna tu bana lena magar sun le
      jo mera ho nahi paya wo tera ho nahi sakta

      bhramar koi ko mudni per machal betha to hangama
      hamare dil main koi khuwab pal betha to hangama

      abhi tak doob kar sunte the sab qissa muhabbat ka
      main qissay ko haqeeqat main badal betha to hangama
      " When you are in light, everything will follow you.
      But when you enter dark, even your own shadow will not follow you. That is life."

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      Bohat Khoob Suasshah..

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      thnx buddy..
      " When you are in light, everything will follow you.
      But when you enter dark, even your own shadow will not follow you. That is life."

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      Nice.......

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      Quote Originally Posted by SUASSHAH View Post

      koi dewana kehta hay koi pagal samajhta hay
      magar dharti ki bechani ko bas badal samajhta hay
      main tujh se dur kesa hoo tu mujh se dur kesi hay
      ye tera dil samajhta hay ya mera dil samjhta hay

      muhabbat aik ahsaso ki pavon si kahani hay
      kabhi kabirah dewana tha kabhi meera dewani hay
      yaha sab loog kehte hain meri ankho main ansoo hain
      jo tu samjhe to moti hain jo na samjhe to pani hay


      samander peer ka andar hay lekin ro nahi sakta
      ye anso piyar ka moti hay isko kho nahi sakta
      meri chahat ko apna tu bana lena magar sun le
      jo mera ho nahi paya wo tera ho nahi sakta


      bhramar koi ko mudni per machal betha to hangama
      hamare dil main koi khuwab pal betha to hangama
      abhi tak doob kar sunte the sab qissa muhabbat ka
      main qissay ko haqeeqat main badal betha to hangama
      Hi suasshah,

      aapne jis taraH likhaa hai vo Ghazal kii format hai magar yeh Ghazal nahiiN hai. yeh 4 different qit'aaat [singular: qit'a] which are 4-liners. pahle do misr'oN meN qaafiya/radeef hotaa hai jab k tessra misr'a aazaad hotaa hai magar chauthaa misr'a phir ek baar qaafiy/radeef se murass'a hotaa hai.

      jaise maiN ne likhaa hai to ab aap dekh sakte haiN k chaaroN qit'aaat ke qawaafii/redeef alag alag haiN magar har qit'a paaband hai.

      in qita'aat meN Hindi ke alfaaz kaafii use huye haiN jo kahiiN kahiiN saHeeH tareeqe se nahiiN likhe gaye is liye confusion hotaa hai paRhne meN...typos correct kar leN to lutf do-baalaa ho jaaye.

      thank you for sharing
      aajkaa qaul
      hameN jaane anjaane meN ya apni kam ilmi ke baais deen meN aisi koi baat nahiN kahni chaahiye jis par Allah hamaari pakaR kar le. hameN is silsile se bahot moHtaat rahnaa chaahiye

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      nice sharing
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      First of all thnx for identifing my mistakes.. I m not a poet so i dont know much about qafiye and radeef etc.. i got this in audio format so convert it in written.. but thnx usmani for correcting its format...
      " When you are in light, everything will follow you.
      But when you enter dark, even your own shadow will not follow you. That is life."