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  1. Nov 19th, 2009, 03:12 PM #1
    SUASSHAH
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    koi dewana kehta hay koi pagal samajhta hay
    magar dharti ki bechani ko bas badal samajhta hay

    main tujh se dur kesa hoo tu mujh se dur kesi hay
    ye tera dil samajhta hay ya mera dil samjhta hay

    muhabbat aik ahsaso ki pavon si kahani hay
    kabhi kabirah dewana tha kabhi meera dewani hay

    yaha sab loog kehte hain meri ankho main ansoo hain
    jo tu samjhe to moti hain jo na samjhe to pani hay

    samander peer ka andar hay lekin ro nahi sakta
    ye anso piyar ka moti hay isko kho nahi sakta

    meri chahat ko apna tu bana lena magar sun le
    jo mera ho nahi paya wo tera ho nahi sakta

    bhramar koi ko mudni per machal betha to hangama
    hamare dil main koi khuwab pal betha to hangama

    abhi tak doob kar sunte the sab qissa muhabbat ka
    main qissay ko haqeeqat main badal betha to hangama
    " When you are in light, everything will follow you.
    But when you enter dark, even your own shadow will not follow you. That is life."
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    Bohat Khoob Suasshah..
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  4. Nov 19th, 2009, 05:59 PM #3
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    thnx buddy..
    " When you are in light, everything will follow you.
    But when you enter dark, even your own shadow will not follow you. That is life."
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  5. Nov 19th, 2009, 09:13 PM #4
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    Nice.......
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  6. Nov 19th, 2009, 09:30 PM #5
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    Quote Originally Posted by SUASSHAH View Post

    koi dewana kehta hay koi pagal samajhta hay
    magar dharti ki bechani ko bas badal samajhta hay
    main tujh se dur kesa hoo tu mujh se dur kesi hay
    ye tera dil samajhta hay ya mera dil samjhta hay

    muhabbat aik ahsaso ki pavon si kahani hay
    kabhi kabirah dewana tha kabhi meera dewani hay
    yaha sab loog kehte hain meri ankho main ansoo hain
    jo tu samjhe to moti hain jo na samjhe to pani hay

    samander peer ka andar hay lekin ro nahi sakta
    ye anso piyar ka moti hay isko kho nahi sakta
    meri chahat ko apna tu bana lena magar sun le
    jo mera ho nahi paya wo tera ho nahi sakta

    bhramar koi ko mudni per machal betha to hangama
    hamare dil main koi khuwab pal betha to hangama
    abhi tak doob kar sunte the sab qissa muhabbat ka
    main qissay ko haqeeqat main badal betha to hangama
    Hi suasshah,

    aapne jis taraH likhaa hai vo Ghazal kii format hai magar yeh Ghazal nahiiN hai. yeh 4 different qit'aaat [singular: qit'a] which are 4-liners. pahle do misr'oN meN qaafiya/radeef hotaa hai jab k tessra misr'a aazaad hotaa hai magar chauthaa misr'a phir ek baar qaafiy/radeef se murass'a hotaa hai.

    jaise maiN ne likhaa hai to ab aap dekh sakte haiN k chaaroN qit'aaat ke qawaafii/redeef alag alag haiN magar har qit'a paaband hai.

    in qita'aat meN Hindi ke alfaaz kaafii use huye haiN jo kahiiN kahiiN saHeeH tareeqe se nahiiN likhe gaye is liye confusion hotaa hai paRhne meN...typos correct kar leN to lutf do-baalaa ho jaaye.

    thank you for sharing
    -jo apne tajrubaat se sabaq letaa hai vo 'aqlmand kahlaataa hai,
    -jo dusroN ke tajurbaat se sabaq letaa hai vo daanishwar kahlaataa hai, aur
    -jo na dusroN ke tajurbaat aur na hii apne tajurbaat se sabaq le, vo aHmaq kahlaataa hai
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  7. Nov 19th, 2009, 10:14 PM #6
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    nice sharing
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  8. Nov 19th, 2009, 10:33 PM #7
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    First of all thnx for identifing my mistakes.. I m not a poet so i dont know much about qafiye and radeef etc.. i got this in audio format so convert it in written.. but thnx usmani for correcting its format...
    " When you are in light, everything will follow you.
    But when you enter dark, even your own shadow will not follow you. That is life."
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