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Oct 28th, 2007, 01:09 PM
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#181 (permalink)
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Azad~ tujh se to abad yeh mekhana hay
Suna hay zindagi bhi aik payma'naa hay
tu Jonoon kay josh main mad'hosh raho
Roz e mehshar to subb nay u'tt jana hay
Meray Roz O Shab k Nisaab Main Meray Paas Apna To Kuch Nahi
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Oct 28th, 2007, 01:36 PM
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#182 (permalink)
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Senior Member
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Yeh oor baat kay hum hosh main nahien rehtay
Manzar e akher e shub sir e sham uth'r ata hay
Jam to bohut hain chalakte howe mekhane main
Chalak'na nigaah e naaz ka, roz yaad ata hay
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Oct 30th, 2007, 04:22 PM
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#183 (permalink)
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Waday Choudhry Sahib
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err... this section is for your own poetry.
if you want to post somone else's poetry, go to poet 1 forum. they have a similar sticky down there.
i guess this would count as a stupid comment 
yaaN kay sapaid-o-seh maiN hum ko, dakhal jo hai so itna hai
raat ko ro ro subhu kiya, ya din ko jooN tooN shaam kiya
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Nov 5th, 2007, 06:35 AM
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#184 (permalink)
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hummm
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Nov 13th, 2007, 07:03 PM
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#185 (permalink)
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Haath pe kanta chubhnay se ansoo niklay
pooch haal os kali ka , jis ko weraan kiya
AQ - The Pioneer & President of the Cafe - and meet me his Secretary
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Nov 13th, 2007, 11:31 PM
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#186 (permalink)
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Senior Citizen
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Apna Aap Ganwa Deta Hoon
Teray Naghmay Gaa Leta Hoon
'Noon'
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Feb 8th, 2008, 06:11 AM
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#187 (permalink)
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na janey kiyoon girtey patoun ko daikh kar khayaal aa ta hay
kisi ka dil tour ker, kia tum ko bhi kabhi mallaal aa ta hay
ye
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Feb 8th, 2008, 01:11 PM
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#188 (permalink)
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youn diloon say kheel kay ab acha lagnay laga hai
manoo zakhmay dil par marham sa lagnay laga hai
ye
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Feb 13th, 2008, 02:55 AM
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#189 (permalink)
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Amal
^ I hope you would have found the Edit button by now :~)
Ye duwaaeiN saari ye sadaaeiN saari, ye man'natoN ke chiraagh saarey
inhey rah'guzar meiN saja ke har shab, tu kis ko takta hey be'khudi meiN!
"Noon" |
Nazar Udaas Haiy Aur Dil Main Khalfishar Sa Haiy
Yeh Lag Raha Haiy Humain Bhi Kisi Say Pyar Sa Haiy
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Feb 13th, 2008, 03:19 AM
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#190 (permalink)
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Quote:
Originally Posted by GuL-e-Tasbeeh
Buhat khoob 
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Jabb Chand Bhi Nahee Tha Amawas Ki Raat Main
Tanha Tumhari Yaad Main Hum Raat Bhar Jaly
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Feb 13th, 2008, 03:21 AM
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#191 (permalink)
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ye kia chal raha hai 
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Feb 13th, 2008, 03:32 AM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by tahreem saeed
yaad tujhey kiya kartey they subah sham kabhi
ab wo yaad e maaazi Azzaab ban gayee hey
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Yaad Aiey To Yaad Mat Karna
Khwahishon Ko Abad Mat Karna
Hasty Hasty Guzaar Lo Kuch Din
Tum Yeh Hasti Azaab Mat Karna
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Feb 28th, 2008, 01:39 PM
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#193 (permalink)
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Quote:
Originally Posted by desireaab
Yaad Aiey To Yaad Mat Karna
Khwahishon Ko Abad Mat Karna
Hasty Hasty Guzaar Lo Kuch Din
Tum Yeh Hasti Azaab Mat Karna
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Yaad Aao'n tu Yaad ker Laina
Khwahison Ko Abad Ker Laina
Apnii Ankhon men tum saja key Mugh ko
Khawab Apney Nayab Ker laina
Last edited by goodBabu; Feb 29th, 2008 at 02:26 AM..
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Mar 3rd, 2008, 08:30 AM
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#194 (permalink)
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Senior Citizen
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Itni Narmi Se Teri Yaad Mujhe Chhooti Hai
Jese Titli Kisi Phool Pe Per Tolti Hai
'Ye'
(Ahmer)
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Mar 3rd, 2008, 02:38 PM
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#195 (permalink)
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Moderator Philosophy & Spirituality Forum
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Quote:
Originally Posted by redidentity
Itni Narmi Se Teri Yaad Mujhe Chhooti Hai
Jese Titli Kisi Phool Pe Per Tolti Hai
'Ye'
(Ahmer)
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Funny...
Per tolna ka Matlab Jhapatna hota hey.....(like attack), try like
Itnii narmii sey terii yaad mughey chotii hai
Jaisey Titlii kisii phool sey kertii hey Qalam
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Mar 4th, 2008, 12:34 AM
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#196 (permalink)
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Senior Citizen
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dear.. kabhi titli ko phool pe per toltay dekha hai aap ne?
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Mar 4th, 2008, 10:43 AM
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#197 (permalink)
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Junior Member
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yaadain zeast ka sarmaya hain
yadown ko hamraaz banaow gay
babar jab door kahein jaow gay
bahout yaad oon ko aaow gay
''ye''
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Mar 4th, 2008, 01:00 PM
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#198 (permalink)
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Moderator Philosophy & Spirituality Forum
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Quote:
Originally Posted by redidentity
dear.. kabhi titli ko phool pe per toltay dekha hai aap ne?
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Nahii, men is Nazarey sey raha Mehroom.......
I had no intentions to hurt you, I am sorry if I did..........But I would insist that "per tolan" is not used in a positive sense.
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Mar 4th, 2008, 01:28 PM
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#199 (permalink)
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Waday Choudhry Sahib
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Quote:
Originally Posted by IntelliPhant
Nahii, men is Nazarey sey raha Mehroom.......
I had no intentions to hurt you, I am sorry if I did..........But I would insist that "per tolan" is not used in a positive sense.
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wrong place to be having a discussion but it is also used in the sense of intending to take flight... jaisy "urany ko par tolna"
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Mar 4th, 2008, 03:16 PM
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#200 (permalink)
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Moderator Philosophy & Spirituality Forum
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Quote:
Originally Posted by chacha_Ghalib
wrong place to be having a discussion but it is also used in the sense of intending to take flight... jaisy "urany ko par tolna"
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I agree wrong place, but "per tolna" shows intention to do something..not intention to fly.........
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