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Old Mar 7th, 2008, 01:23 AM   #201 (permalink)  
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Old Apr 2nd, 2008, 07:27 AM   #202 (permalink)  
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ye hy raaz bahar e gulshan iss raaz ko koi kiya samjhy..........,

phoolon ny rulaaya shabnam ko ya raat ko shabnam khud ruie

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Old Apr 2nd, 2008, 03:00 PM   #203 (permalink)  
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ye hy raaz bahar e gulshan iss raaz ko koi kiya samjhy..........,

phoolon ny rulaaya shabnam ko ya raat ko shabnam khud ruie

ye
wow... bohat aala hai

just a suggestion... pehla fiqra iss tarha aur acha ho sakta hai

ye raaz-e-bahar-e-gulshan hai, iss raaz ko koi kaya samjhay







yaaN kay sapaid-o-seh maiN hum ko, dakhal jo hai so itna hai
raat ko ro ro subhu kiya, ya din ko jooN tooN shaam kiya
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Old Apr 3rd, 2008, 04:16 AM   #204 (permalink)  
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tu kuch aapny bhi irshaad kiya huta chachaa....







suoz-e-firaaq,yaas-o-alam,iztraab-o-shuoq
kis,kis k meny naaz othaay tamaam raat
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Old Apr 3rd, 2008, 02:18 PM   #205 (permalink)  
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ya to main moum ya teri zaat main sholoN ka fasooN
manind-e-shamma teri qurbat main pighalta jaaoN

"noon"






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Old Apr 10th, 2008, 08:10 AM   #206 (permalink)  
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nizakat naazneenon ko sikhany sy nahin aati...

khuda jab husn deta hy nizakat aa hi jati hy....!

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Old Apr 10th, 2008, 04:53 PM   #207 (permalink)  
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is that your own

i think i've heard this or something similar already

if its your own then its awesome






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Old May 1st, 2008, 06:11 AM   #208 (permalink)  
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Yeh KhiZaa'n Ka mOusam Bhe Be-Asar Nikla
Yeh Fasl e Gham To Sada Harii Rehtii hAi
Yeh Kaisa dArd hAi Jo Kisi tOur Kum Nhe hOta
Yeh Kaisi Aag hAi Jo Har Pal Lagii Rehtii hAi
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Old May 1st, 2008, 11:09 AM   #209 (permalink)  
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ye hi ossol hy apna kisi ka dil na dukhay

judaiyon ko bhi chaha hy qurbaton ki trah

,,hae,, (halwy waala)






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Old Jun 4th, 2008, 02:30 PM   #210 (permalink)  
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hayaat-e-javedaan kay saary qissay karo kotah
hum ko to shughal hai bas ussi dil-ruba kay saath

hey (haathi wala )






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Old Aug 6th, 2008, 07:46 AM   #211 (permalink)  
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hey haathi bey bakri sheen sher
kaisa hai apna bhai logo yeh sher






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Old Aug 6th, 2008, 07:50 AM   #212 (permalink)  
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Bhai logo ma'af karna........aap apni Bait bazi jari rakhen......mein to Haathi say impress ho gya tha






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Old Aug 23rd, 2008, 10:06 AM   #213 (permalink)  
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humne bhi kisi se pyar kia tha
unki rah mein khre hokar intezar kia tha
Hume kia pata tha ke bhul jainge hume
kasoor unka nahi humara tha
Jo ek bewafa se pyar kia tha
(hope tht was the rite hathi wali he, if not shollllly)






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Old Nov 26th, 2008, 09:53 AM   #214 (permalink)  
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Wafa ki ik khuwahish thi wafa ke siley meiN
kon hey jo mohabbat ka sila maang'taa nahi
jeeney ki talab meiN martey heiN baar baar
kuch logoN ka muqaddar kabhi jaag'taa nahi






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Old Nov 26th, 2008, 09:54 AM   #215 (permalink)  
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humne bhi kisi se pyar kia tha
unki rah mein khre hokar intezar kia tha
Hume kia pata tha ke bhul jainge hume
kasoor unka nahi humara tha
Jo ek bewafa se pyar kia tha






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Old Dec 12th, 2008, 01:48 AM   #216 (permalink)  
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Aie kaash kabhi mera woh dildar na hoti
paa laita usay shohrat ki gar talabgaar na hoti
jalway tray husn k daikh jo paati
tu yeh duniya meri baaton say aazar na hoti

"yeh"







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Old Jan 17th, 2009, 08:05 PM   #217 (permalink)  
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koi bhi na par paia tehreer ya us ki
na janay laho say wo kia likh raha tha

good poetery by amal






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Old Jan 27th, 2009, 08:39 AM   #218 (permalink)  
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koi bhi na par paia tehreer ya us ki
na janay laho say wo kia likh raha tha

good poetery by amal
ANJAAN MERI ROOH K HR DARD SE TU HAI...
KIA TJHKO KHABR HAI TU HAI TU ROOH HAI??...







nigah e ishq ko itna tu mohtaram kerday
guzar gay hain jo lamhay unhay baham kerday
taras rahi hon koi maa sa meherban wajood
DUA E NOOR parhay or mujh pay dam kerday
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Old May 25th, 2009, 12:39 PM   #219 (permalink)  
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Hatho ki lakeero pe bharosa nahi kerna kiu ke
takdeer to un ki bhi hua kerti hai jin ke haath nahi hote.








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Old Aug 2nd, 2009, 06:00 AM   #220 (permalink)  
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ye warq warq hai teri dastan, ye sabaq sabaq tere tazkire.


main karun to kese karun alag tujhe zindagi ki kitab se?






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