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Feb 1st, 2007, 06:02 AM
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Originally Posted by Amal
Ye sochtey huwey so gaya ik bhooka be'chaara
chand dinoN ke faaqoN sey koi marta nahi hey!
"Ye"
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That is something 
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Terii pakeeza nigahoN kii qasam humdum
Dil tou kya Rooh ney bhii chaaha hey tumhi ko
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Feb 1st, 2007, 10:43 AM
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arz kia hey apni shairi me se ik shair Noon ke hawale se
Nigahain thien onki jhooki howin
meri saansain thi keh rooki howin
lehje mein unke ik irteaash howa
jub kaha mujhe tum se piyar howa
Alif
Ay kaash mujh mein quwwat`e purwaaz ho tu mein
Orhta howa barhoon teri jaaneb sooway harum
Last edited by insha_ji; Feb 2nd, 2007 at 07:49 AM..
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Feb 2nd, 2007, 07:47 AM
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NikamiJi and Pakeeza, thanx for the appreciation 
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Feb 6th, 2007, 08:27 AM
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Aey gheirat-e-momin tujhey jaagna hey aaj
ke ik aur Karbala ka tujhey saamna hey aaj
apnoN ki be'hisi ka gila phir kabhi sahi
qatil sey apna khoon-baha maangna hey aaj
"Jeem"
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Feb 6th, 2007, 09:12 AM
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#25 (permalink)
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jis lakir se humay dar lagta hai
wo hai dosti ki lakir
itnay kareeb mat aao
becharnay se dar lagta
tum pe tu bahrosa hai
bas apni takdeer se dar lagta hai!
Life is short and we have never too much of time for gladdening the hearts of those who are traveling the dark journey with us. Oh be swift to love, make haste to be kind.
Always be kind and sweet!
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Feb 6th, 2007, 09:20 AM
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yeh mohabet bhi ajeb cheez hey Shah ji
kerti kuch hey or kehti kuch or hey
ye
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Feb 7th, 2007, 05:38 AM
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yon tu sarkar se awam ko umeed nahi
phir bhi ik himmat e iltaja tu ki jaye
nigah e ishq ko itna tu mohtaram kerday
guzar gay hain jo lamhay unhay baham kerday
taras rahi hon koi maa sa meherban wajood
DUA E NOOR parhay or mujh pay dam kerday
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Feb 7th, 2007, 05:57 AM
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#28 (permalink)
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~ PakeeZa ~
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Originally Posted by rabia rana
yon tu sarkar se awam ko umeed nahi
phir bhi ik himmat e iltaja tu ki jaye
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Thats good:-)
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Hum ney kaantoN ko bhi narmii sey chuhwaa hey aksar
log be-dard heiN PhooloN ko massal detay heiN
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Feb 7th, 2007, 05:58 AM
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~ PakeeZa ~
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Originally Posted by Amal
Aey gheirat-e-momin tujhey jaagna hey aaj
ke ik aur Karbala ka tujhey saamna hey aaj
apnoN ki be'hisi ka gila phir kabhi sahi
qatil sey apna khoon-baha maangna hey aaj
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Buhat khoob
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Feb 8th, 2007, 03:19 AM
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Originally Posted by GuL-e-Tasbeeh
Buhat khoob
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nice
JO GHAIRAT E MOMIN HAI WOHI HAI KARBALA KI SHAN
WO SHAN K JIS PER HUI AAL E RUSUL(S.A.W) QURBAN
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Feb 8th, 2007, 12:26 PM
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are you guyz posting your own shairs here or someone else.. rabia
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Feb 9th, 2007, 03:28 AM
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Originally Posted by insha_ji
are you guyz posting your own shairs here or someone else.. rabia
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yes,we r ......................this is SHO'RA E GS forum so its necessary to post ur own poetry here
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Feb 9th, 2007, 09:22 AM
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good good
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Feb 11th, 2007, 09:25 AM
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Naam aatey hi tera hoNtoN par
phool khiltey heiN lafz ban, ban kar
"Rey"
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Feb 12th, 2007, 08:34 AM
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Originally Posted by Amal
Naam aatey hi tera hoNtoN par
phool khiltey heiN lafz ban, ban kar
"Rey"
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Really  that's nice
~mujhaY kis jurm ki saza mili k meRi rooh taak hai thaki huwi maiN apni jaga se hila nahi meRi saans phiR be ukhaR gaye~
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Feb 12th, 2007, 09:38 AM
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~ PakeeZa ~
Join Date: Jul 23, 2002 - 1:00 am
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Raat din subh-o- shaam
letey hein hum tera hi naam
 sheir lag raha hey ya
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Feb 12th, 2007, 10:01 AM
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Originally Posted by Amal
Naam aatey hi tera hoNtoN par
phool khiltey heiN lafz ban, ban kar
"Rey"
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wah wah wah.Amal jee a ki kitta tussi ek wari fhair lout lay gay tussi mahfil.............
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Feb 12th, 2007, 10:02 AM
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#38 (permalink)
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Member
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Originally Posted by Amal
Naam aatey hi tera hoNtoN par
phool khiltey heiN lafz ban, ban kar
"Rey"
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Raat azar kiyun na ban jaye??
Dil pay yadon nai teer tana hai
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Feb 12th, 2007, 10:21 AM
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#39 (permalink)
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Yeh chand sa mukhra or qaatil nigahain
mujhe loot leti hain teri kaafir adaiain
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Feb 14th, 2007, 05:08 AM
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Originally Posted by GuL-e-Tasbeeh
Raat din subh-o- shaam
letey hein hum tera hi naam
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langweilig ?
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